Lina and company's adventures have just entered a whole other level of 'strange'. If the review's title wasn't any indication, she and the others (plus Xellos) have been transported into a new world that seeks to try her patience at every turn. While showing that the group's usual skills won't be enough to get them out of trouble this time, the story also offers a picture of what they can bring to a world that is (mostly) unaccustomed to magic and the like.
In this story, Xellos has been powered down a bit by virtue of the One Piece world not being his own. While it is up to the reader to decide whether it is believable or not, he doesn't go out like a chump by any means; someone of his power is enough to give one of the story's antagonists a serious run for his money.
The grammar and punctuation is excellent for the most part, everyone is kept in character, and the interactions work out well. In my personal opinion, I'd rate this an 8.5 out of 10.
Lina Inverse Has the Grand Line Blues
Lina and company's adventures have just entered a whole other level of 'strange'. If the review's title wasn't any indication, she and the others (plus Xellos) have been transported into a new world that seeks to try her patience at every turn. While showing that the group's usual skills won't be enough to get them out of trouble this time, the story also offers a picture of what they can bring to a world that is (mostly) unaccustomed to magic and the like.
In this story, Xellos has been powered down a bit by virtue of the One Piece world not being his own. While it is up to the reader to decide whether it is believable or not, he doesn't go out like a chump by any means; someone of his power is enough to give one of the story's antagonists a serious run for his money.
The grammar and punctuation is excellent for the most part, everyone is kept in character, and the interactions work out well. In my personal opinion, I'd rate this an 8.5 out of 10.