Throughout the whole time reading this, I've been on a roller-coaster of many emotions and have had many conflicting feelings about this fanfic. I'm going to be honest and say that there were many times that I wanted to give up on reading because of how slow the pacing was to me and how some things were handled, but I didn't want to because I wanted to see how it was going to turn out. At this point, I'm glad I didn't. I pretty much wanted to cry when Mike died, which I didn't think I would react that way. When I first started reading, I thought that her and Ralph's relationship wasn't very well developed and I didn't feel like they had much of a connection. However, in this chapter, I finally started to feel the love that Ralph had for Mike and reaction to her death was pretty heart-wrenching. All I can say in closing is that this was the best chapter yet and I'm glad I didn't give up on this.
(This review is based on Chapter 44: Nothing You Have to Do)
Throughout the whole time reading this, I've been on a roller-coaster of many emotions and have had many conflicting feelings about this fanfic. I'm going to be honest and say that there were many times that I wanted to give up on reading because of how slow the pacing was to me and how some things were handled, but I didn't want to because I wanted to see how it was going to turn out. At this point, I'm glad I didn't. I pretty much wanted to cry when Mike died, which I didn't think I would react that way. When I first started reading, I thought that her and Ralph's relationship wasn't very well developed and I didn't feel like they had much of a connection. However, in this chapter, I finally started to feel the love that Ralph had for Mike and reaction to her death was pretty heart-wrenching. All I can say in closing is that this was the best chapter yet and I'm glad I didn't give up on this.