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I think that LordGro, Jhonny, and I have improved this article a great deal in the past 24 hours in line with the criticisms outlined by TheD3rp and JulianLapostat this March. I'd thank you all for your contributions, and ask if anyone has any further criticisms - no matter how minor.
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I think that LordGro, Jhonny, and I have improved this article a great deal in the past 24 hours in line with the criticisms outlined by TheD3rp and JulianLapostat this March. I thank you all for your contributions, and ask if anyone has any further criticisms - however minor.
