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Okay. I'm just wondering out loud here, since my Fridge Horror addition about Jaune & Cinder thing got removed twice already, so I just wanted to know if I am misunderstanding something here:
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Okay. I\'m just wondering out loud here, since my Fridge Horror addition about Jaune & Cinder thing got removed twice already, so I just wanted to know if I am misunderstanding something here:
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So, Jaune is standing there, keeping an eye on the entrance while Ozpin and Pyrrha do their thing. Then when Pyrrha starts screaming, Jaune turns back to check on her in panic, leaving the entrance unchecked. That's when Cinder arrives, and she takes advantage of Jaune being distracted to sneak in close and kill Amber. Had Jaune not getting distracted and keep an eye on the entrance, he would've seen Cinder coming. This leads to two possibilities:
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So, Jaune is standing there, keeping an eye on the entrance while Ozpin and Pyrrha do their thing. Then when Pyrrha starts screaming, Jaune turns back to check on her in panic, leaving the entrance unchecked. That\'s when Cinder arrives, and she takes advantage of Jaune being distracted to sneak in close and kill Amber. Had Jaune not getting distracted and keep an eye on the entrance, he would\'ve seen Cinder coming. This leads to two possibilities:
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1. Jaune tries to engage her on her own, and considering that he's ''leagues'' below Cinder in terms of skills, he's clearly doomed if she fight back.
2. Jaune warns Ozpin, and the two fight Cinder together. They may hold out long enough until the aura transfer process is complete. But then, Pyrrha would become Cinder's new target and risks getting killed by her.
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1. Jaune tries to engage her on her own, and considering that he\'s \'\'leagues\'\' below Cinder in terms of skills, he\'s clearly doomed if she fight back.
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What I'm trying to say is, both will most likely result in either Jaune or Pyrrha becoming a casualty of Cinder's attempt to gain the Fall Maiden's power because ''they'' get in her way, that's the Fridge Horror I'm trying to add. What really happened in the episode is that there's no one standing in her way so she's free to accomplish her goal without opposition, averting it. Granted, I'm doing a lot of guesswork here, but seeing that the aura transfer process is already in progress, getting the Fall Maiden's power would be Cinder's #1 priority. So it's almost certain that she won't show any mercy on anyone who gets in her way. On the other hand, when she ''already'' has the power, she let Jaune and Pyrrha go after Ozpin told them to get reinforcements. Why didn't she kill them? She just stares at them curiously while they circle around her before turning her attention to Ozpin. Maybe she has plans for them in the future? Maybe one or both of them are secretly related to her? Or maybe she ''wants'' challenge, real challenge from veteran huntsmen on Ozpin's level, not students whom she knew she could deal with in her sleep.
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2. Jaune warns Ozpin, and the two fight Cinder together. They may hold out long enough until the aura transfer process is complete. But then, Pyrrha would become Cinder\'s new target and risks getting killed by her.
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That's about it. None of the above might not belong to any Fridge group at all according to you guys, but I just wanted to clarify it so some of you can explain how I got it wrong, or that it should belong to something else and not on the Fridge page. Also, sorry for any bad English here if I made them.
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What I\'m trying to say is, both will most likely result in either Jaune or Pyrrha becoming a casualty of Cinder\'s attempt to gain the Fall Maiden\'s power because \'\'they\'\' get in her way, that\'s the Fridge Horror I\'m trying to add. What really happened in the episode is that there\'s no one standing in her way so she\'s free to accomplish her goal without opposition, averting it. Granted, I\'m doing a lot of guesswork here, but seeing that the aura transfer process is already in progress, getting the Fall Maiden\'s power would be Cinder\'s #1 priority. So it\'s almost certain that she won\'t show any mercy on anyone who gets in her way. On the other hand, when she \'\'already\'\' has the power, she let Jaune and Pyrrha go after Ozpin told them to get reinforcements. Why didn\'t she kill them? She just stares at them curiously while they circle around her before turning her attention to Ozpin. Maybe she has plans for them in the future? Maybe one or both of them are secretly related to her? Or maybe she \'\'wants\'\' challenge, real challenge from veteran huntsmen on Ozpin\'s level, not students whom she knew she could deal with in her sleep.

That\'s about it. None of the above might not belong to any Fridge group at all according to you guys, but I just wanted to clarify it so some of you can explain how I got it wrong, or that it should belong to something else and not on the Fridge page. Also, sorry for any bad English here if I made them.
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