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These are just describing why they\'re attractive, not why they\'re fanservicey, alongside several irrelevant details (I don\'t care if she\'s the trope image for \'\'anything\'\', it\'s not useful information). If you want to list them as examples, you need to properly convey how they provide fanservice, not just \
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These are just describing why they\\\'re attractive, not why they\\\'re fanservicey, alongside several irrelevant details (I don\\\'t care if she\\\'s the trope image for \\\'\\\'anything\\\'\\\', it\\\'s not useful information). If you want to list them as examples, you need to properly convey how they provide fanservice, not just \\\"they\\\'re sexy.\\\"
However, there is a far greater issue with your edits: your grammar is extremely poor.
* OlderThanTelevision: WesternAnimation/BettyBoop was filling this role as early as 1930 and is one of the pioneering animated examples. In her short, Betty got PantyShot and HelloNurse reaction from nearly every male character she encountered before the Hays Code interfered.
* \\\'\\\'WesternAnimation/SupermanTheAnimatedSeries\\\'\\\':
** Lois Lane, a major example of animated HotScoop. She receive more MaleGaze on her legs and mini-skirt.
** Supergirl that has a very hourglass figure depite her age and wear BareYourMidriff costumes.
** Marcie, the Lex\\\'s bodyguard (to the point where the android, while channeling Flash, hits on her) that wears a ridiculously short dress.
All of these examples have several blatant errors. Even your edit reason was poorly written (\\\"nonsense delete this. the characters role in the series is provided Fanservice.\\\"). We don\\\'t expect editors to have perfect grammar, but writing examples with this many errors is simply not acceptable. I suggest running future edits through the [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/posts.php?discussion=b9tcd2k65789p1pglrd92nvr Get Help With English thread]] until you improve. Also...
** Livewire and Volcana for the villains.
Why did you uncomment this? It\\\'s a clear Administrivia/ZeroContextExample, yet you added no context to it.
However, there is a far greater issue with your edits: your grammar is extremely poor.
* OlderThanTelevision: WesternAnimation/BettyBoop was filling this role as early as 1930 and is one of the pioneering animated examples. In her short, Betty got PantyShot and HelloNurse reaction from nearly every male character she encountered before the Hays Code interfered.
* \\\'\\\'WesternAnimation/SupermanTheAnimatedSeries\\\'\\\':
** Lois Lane, a major example of animated HotScoop. She receive more MaleGaze on her legs and mini-skirt.
** Supergirl that has a very hourglass figure depite her age and wear BareYourMidriff costumes.
** Marcie, the Lex\\\'s bodyguard (to the point where the android, while channeling Flash, hits on her) that wears a ridiculously short dress.
All of these examples have several blatant errors. Even your edit reason was poorly written (\\\"nonsense delete this. the characters role in the series is provided Fanservice.\\\"). We don\\\'t expect editors to have perfect grammar, but writing examples with this many errors is simply not acceptable. I suggest running future edits through the [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/posts.php?discussion=b9tcd2k65789p1pglrd92nvr Get Help With English thread]] until you improve. Also...
** Livewire and Volcana for the villains.
Why did you uncomment this? It\\\'s a clear Administrivia/ZeroContextExample, yet you added no context to it.
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* \\\'\\\'WesternAnimation/TheFairlyOddParents\\\'\\\':
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These are just describing why they\'re attractive, not why they\'re fanservicey. There is a difference. If you want to list them as examples, you need to properly convey how they provide fanservice, not just \
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These are just describing why they\\\'re attractive, not why they\\\'re fanservicey, alongside several irrelevant details (I don\\\'t care if she\\\'s the trope image for \\\'\\\'anything\\\'\\\', it\\\'s not useful information). If you want to list them as examples, you need to properly convey how they provide fanservice, not just \\\"they\\\'re sexy.\\\"
However, there is a far greater issue with your edits: your grammar is extremely poor.
* OlderThanTelevision: WesternAnimation/BettyBoop was filling this role as early as 1930 and is one of the pioneering animated examples. In her short, Betty got PantyShot and HelloNurse reaction from nearly every male character she encountered before the Hays Code interfered.
* \\\'\\\'WesternAnimation/SupermanTheAnimatedSeries\\\'\\\':
** Lois Lane, a major example of animated HotScoop. She receive more MaleGaze on her legs and mini-skirt.
** Supergirl that has a very hourglass figure depite her age and wear BareYourMidriff costumes.
** Marcie, the Lex\\\'s bodyguard (to the point where the android, while channeling Flash, hits on her) that wears a ridiculously short dress.
All of these examples have several blatant errors. We don\\\'t expect editors to have perfect grammar, but writing examples with this many errors is simply not acceptable. Also...
** Livewire and Volcana for the villains.
Why did you uncomment this? It\\\'s a clear Administrivia/ZeroContextExample, yet you added no context to it.
However, there is a far greater issue with your edits: your grammar is extremely poor.
* OlderThanTelevision: WesternAnimation/BettyBoop was filling this role as early as 1930 and is one of the pioneering animated examples. In her short, Betty got PantyShot and HelloNurse reaction from nearly every male character she encountered before the Hays Code interfered.
* \\\'\\\'WesternAnimation/SupermanTheAnimatedSeries\\\'\\\':
** Lois Lane, a major example of animated HotScoop. She receive more MaleGaze on her legs and mini-skirt.
** Supergirl that has a very hourglass figure depite her age and wear BareYourMidriff costumes.
** Marcie, the Lex\\\'s bodyguard (to the point where the android, while channeling Flash, hits on her) that wears a ridiculously short dress.
All of these examples have several blatant errors. We don\\\'t expect editors to have perfect grammar, but writing examples with this many errors is simply not acceptable. Also...
** Livewire and Volcana for the villains.
Why did you uncomment this? It\\\'s a clear Administrivia/ZeroContextExample, yet you added no context to it.
