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And except at the very beginning, and when justification is his last resort, we never see words of goodwill - only of godhood. When Misa is [[spoiler: killing all those reporters, he doesn\'t think they shouldn\'t die just for having an opinion, he thinks this could damage my reputation. (Apparently, Demegawa\'s rioting mobs are too intimidating for him to worry about his reputation there.)]]
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And [[spoiler: except at the very beginning, and when justification is his last resort, we never see words of goodwill - only of godhood. When Misa is killing all those reporters, he doesn\\\'t think they shouldn\\\'t die just for having an opinion, he thinks this could damage my reputation. (Apparently, Demegawa\\\'s rioting mobs are too intimidating for him to worry about his reputation there.)]]
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[[spoiler: I won\'t bother with the personal betrayals. They took center stage, and if they didn\'t prove convincing over the course of the actual story, my summarizing them will scarcely help matters.]]
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I won\\\'t bother with the personal betrayals. They took center stage, and if they didn\\\'t prove convincing over the course of the actual story, my summarizing them will scarcely help matters.
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We are talking about a guy who chose a proxy specifically for his propensity to kill innocents - just because it\'s higher-profile that way. If it were really about the world, rather than his reign over it, he would instruct Rem to find someone along the lines of Mikami. Oh, you might argue that he\'d have more qualms about the notebook\'s return if it came from somebody that much more in line with his purposes, but he didn\'t seem to give that kind of thought to Misa or Takada.
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We are talking about a guy who [[spoiler: chose a proxy specifically for his propensity to kill innocents - just because it\\\'s higher-profile that way. If it were really about the world, rather than his reign over it, he would instruct Rem to find someone along the lines of Mikami. Oh, you might argue that he\\\'d have more qualms about the notebook\\\'s return if it came from somebody that much more in line with his purposes, but he didn\\\'t seem to give that kind of thought to Misa or Takada.]]