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In any case, I can agree with you that perhaps a better quote is needed overall, but I still feel like the original is superior to the Flemeth quote. It \'\'does\'\' explain part of the game, the framework, and the general point of it. You know that Hawke is not responsible for any of this, but the player is supposed to think so, and that\'s what the quote indicates. I think it\'s especially poor because the DragonAge games are not direct continuations of each other, so indicating how the two differ at the top of the page is a good idea. DragonAgeOrigins references the Wardens, DragonAgeII references Hawke.
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In any case, I can agree with you that perhaps a better quote is needed overall, but I still feel like the original is superior to the Flemeth quote. It \\\'\\\'does\\\'\\\' explain part of the game, the framework, and the general point of it. You know that Hawke is not responsible for any of this, but the player is supposed to think so, and that\\\'s what the quote indicates. I think the second is especially poor because the DragonAge games are not direct continuations of each other, so indicating how the two differ at the top of the page is a good idea. DragonAgeOrigins references the Wardens, DragonAgeII references Hawke.
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The original quote says two things that are important: what the story is leading to, and who it is about. Part of the realization the player is \\\'\\\'supposed\\\'\\\' to have is that the whole Chantry, mage/templar thing is only a smaller part of a big picture that led up to it. Cassandra herself recognizes this as the player does.
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Perhaps regular trope entries are, but quote are not. Please see [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/query.php?type=att here]].
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Perhaps regular trope entries are, but quotes are not. Please see [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/query.php?type=att here]].
