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Not to mention her general interactions with Souta (who is also a kid compared to her) make him have to be the LittleBigBrother to her. Plus there are her interactions with her younger sisters at times at well. Plus it\'s not likely a coincidence that she\'s reminiscent of a baby when she\'s crawling around on the ground all the time due to her feebleness and she\'s quite helpless like a baby (also due to feebleness). She has the TallDark,andBishoujo aspects of aloofness and prettiness, but she\'s still a pretty good example of this trope in action.
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Not to mention her general interactions with Souta (who is also a kid compared to her) make him have to be the LittleBigBrother to her. Plus there are her interactions with her younger sisters at times at well. Plus it\\\'s not likely a coincidence that she\\\'s reminiscent of a baby when she\\\'s crawling around on the ground all the time due to her feebleness and she\\\'s quite helpless like a baby (also due to feebleness). She has the [[TallDarkandBishoujo Tall, Dark, and Bishoujo]] aspects of aloofness, darkness, and prettiness, but she\\\'s still a pretty good example of this trope in action.
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Not to mention her general interactions with Souta (who is also a kid compared to her) make him have to be the LittleBigBrother to her. Plus there are her interactions with her younger sisters at times at well. Plus it\'s not likely a coincidence that she\'s reminiscent of a baby when she\'s crawling around on the ground all the time due to her feebleness and she\'s quite helpless like a baby (also due to feebleness). She has the TallDark.andBishoujo aspects of aloofness and prettiness, but she\'s still a pretty good example of this trope in action.
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Not to mention her general interactions with Souta (who is also a kid compared to her) make him have to be the LittleBigBrother to her. Plus there are her interactions with her younger sisters at times at well. Plus it\\\'s not likely a coincidence that she\\\'s reminiscent of a baby when she\\\'s crawling around on the ground all the time due to her feebleness and she\\\'s quite helpless like a baby (also due to feebleness). She has the TallDark,andBishoujo aspects of aloofness and prettiness, but she\\\'s still a pretty good example of this trope in action.
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Not to mention her general interactions with Souta (who is also a kid compared to her) make him have to be the LittleBigBrother to her. Plus there are her interactions with her younger sisters at times at well. Plus it\'s not likely a coincidence that she\'s reminiscent of a baby when she\'s crawling around on the ground all the time due to her feebleness and she\'s quite helpless like a baby (also due to feebleness). She has the TallDarkandBishoujo aspects of aloofness and prettiness, but she\'s still a pretty good example of this trope in action.
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Not to mention her general interactions with Souta (who is also a kid compared to her) make him have to be the LittleBigBrother to her. Plus there are her interactions with her younger sisters at times at well. Plus it\\\'s not likely a coincidence that she\\\'s reminiscent of a baby when she\\\'s crawling around on the ground all the time due to her feebleness and she\\\'s quite helpless like a baby (also due to feebleness). She has the TallDark.andBishoujo aspects of aloofness and prettiness, but she\\\'s still a pretty good example of this trope in action.
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Not to mention her general interactions with Souta (who is also a kid compared to her) make him have to be the LittleBigBrother to her. Plus there are her interactions with her younger sisters at times at well. Plus it\'s not likely a coincidence that she\'s reminiscent of a baby when she\'s crawling around on the ground all the time due to her feebleness and she\'s quite helpless like a baby (also due to feebleness). She has the Tall,DarkandBishoujo aspects of aloofness and prettiness, but she\'s still a pretty good example of this trope in action.
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Not to mention her general interactions with Souta (who is also a kid compared to her) make him have to be the LittleBigBrother to her. Plus there are her interactions with her younger sisters at times at well. Plus it\\\'s not likely a coincidence that she\\\'s reminiscent of a baby when she\\\'s crawling around on the ground all the time due to her feebleness and she\\\'s quite helpless like a baby (also due to feebleness). She has the TallDarkandBishoujo aspects of aloofness and prettiness, but she\\\'s still a pretty good example of this trope in action.
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Well Izumi does interact with Inami (who, in comparison to the 28 year old Izumi, is a kid) and she acts quite child-like with her, asking Inami if her brother\'s girlfriend (Izumi didn\'t realize that said girlfriend was Inami and was standing right in front of her) would take care of her along with her brother Souta continuing to take care of her.
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Well Izumi does interact with Inami (who, in comparison to the 28 year old Izumi, is a kid) and she acts quite child-like with her, asking Inami if Souta\\\'s girlfriend (Izumi didn\\\'t realize that said girlfriend was Inami and was standing right in front of her) would take care of her along with her brother Souta continuing to take care of her.
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Not to mention her general interactions with Souta (who is also a kid compared to her) make him have to be the LittleBigBrother to her. Plus there are here interactions with her younger sisters at times at well. She\'s a pretty good example of the trope in action.
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Not to mention her general interactions with Souta (who is also a kid compared to her) make him have to be the LittleBigBrother to her. Plus there are her interactions with her younger sisters at times at well. Plus it\\\'s not likely a coincidence that she\\\'s reminiscent of a baby when she\\\'s crawling around on the ground all the time due to her feebleness and she\\\'s quite helpless like a baby (also due to feebleness). She has the Tall,DarkandBishoujo aspects of aloofness and prettiness, but she\\\'s still a pretty good example of this trope in action.
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I think this could use a bit of clean-up. I\'m noticing that some parts are unfinished (what was the point of bringing up SALT II alongside SALT I if it wasn\'t even mentioned in the same section?), while the grammar gets worse the further down I read.
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I think this could use a bit of clean-up. I\\\'m noticing that some parts are unfinished or confused (what was the point of bringing up SALT II alongside SALT I if it wasn\\\'t even mentioned in the same section?), while the grammar gets worse the further down I read.
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