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All the minor plotlines (Like Crassus, politics, etc.) might never come up again in Tavi\'s life, or the history of Alera. I\'m not saying they \'\'will\'\' never come up again, I\'m saying is that there\'s nothing telling the reader \
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All the minor plotlines (Like Crassus, politics, etc.) might never come up again in Tavi\\\'s life, or the history of Alera. I\\\'m not saying they \\\'\\\'will\\\'\\\' never come up again, I\\\'m saying is that there\\\'s nothing telling the reader \\\"this is going to be big in the future.\\\" However, the Vord Queens got an \\\'\\\'explicit\\\'\\\' mention, \\\'\\\'\\\'telling\\\'\\\'\\\' Tavi that this issue will come to a head.
Please stop re-adding these examples.
EDIT: In fact, the page for the trope actually addresses the issue: \\\"In fact, this method is so common the audience will identify any unresolved plot element or any ending short of Happily Ever After or Kill \\\'Em All as a hook.\\\"
Just because a plotline isn\\\'t \\\'\\\'completely\\\'\\\' concluded doesn\\\'t make it a hook, sometimes it\\\'s just an unresolved plotline.
Please stop re-adding these examples.
EDIT: In fact, the page for the trope actually addresses the issue: \\\"In fact, this method is so common the audience will identify any unresolved plot element or any ending short of Happily Ever After or Kill \\\'Em All as a hook.\\\"
Just because a plotline isn\\\'t \\\'\\\'completely\\\'\\\' concluded doesn\\\'t make it a hook, sometimes it\\\'s just an unresolved plotline.
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All the minor plotlines (Like Crassus, politics, etc.) might never come up again in Tavi\'s life, or the history of Alera. I\'m not saying they \'\'will\'\' never come up again, I\'m saying is that there\'s nothing telling the reader \
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All the minor plotlines (Like Crassus, politics, etc.) might never come up again in Tavi\\\'s life, or the history of Alera. I\\\'m not saying they \\\'\\\'will\\\'\\\' never come up again, I\\\'m saying is that there\\\'s nothing telling the reader \\\"this is going to be big in the future.\\\" However, the Vord Queens got an \\\'\\\'explicit\\\'\\\' mention, \\\'\\\'\\\'telling\\\'\\\'\\\' Tavi that this issue will come to a head.
Please stop re-adding these examples.
EDIT: In fact, the page for the trope actually addresses the issue: \\\"In fact, this method is so common the audience will identify any unresolved plot element or any ending short of Happily Ever After or Kill \\\'Em All as a hook.\\\"
Just because a plotline isn\\\'t \\\'\\\'completely\\\'\\\' concluded doesn\\\'t make it a hook, sometimes it\\\'s just an unresolved plotline,
Please stop re-adding these examples.
EDIT: In fact, the page for the trope actually addresses the issue: \\\"In fact, this method is so common the audience will identify any unresolved plot element or any ending short of Happily Ever After or Kill \\\'Em All as a hook.\\\"
Just because a plotline isn\\\'t \\\'\\\'completely\\\'\\\' concluded doesn\\\'t make it a hook, sometimes it\\\'s just an unresolved plotline,
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All the minor plotlines (Like Crassus, politics, etc.) might never come up again in Tavi\'s life, or the history of Alera. I\'m not saying they \'\'will\'\' never come up again, I\'m saying is that there\'s nothing telling the reader \
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All the minor plotlines (Like Crassus, politics, etc.) might never come up again in Tavi\\\'s life, or the history of Alera. I\\\'m not saying they \\\'\\\'will\\\'\\\' never come up again, I\\\'m saying is that there\\\'s nothing telling the reader \\\"this is going to be big in the future.\\\" However, the Vord Queens got an \\\'\\\'explicit\\\'\\\' mention, \\\'\\\'\\\'telling\\\'\\\'\\\' Tavi that this issue will come to a head.
Please stop re-adding these examples.
Please stop re-adding these examples.
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PizzaJedi81, please stop re-adding hose extra bits to the SequelHook entry, they are not examples of a SequelHook.
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PizzaJedi81, please stop re-adding those extra bits to the SequelHook entry, they are not examples of a SequelHook.
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All the minor plotlines (Like Crassus, politics, etc.) might never come up again in Tavi\'s life, or the history of Alera. I\'m not saying they \'\'will\'\' never come up again, I\'m saying is that there\'s nothing telling the reader \
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All the minor plotlines (Like Crassus, politics, etc.) might never come up again in Tavi\\\'s life, or the history of Alera. I\\\'m not saying they \\\'\\\'will\\\'\\\' never come up again, I\\\'m saying is that there\\\'s nothing telling the reader \\\"this is going to be big in the future.\\\" However, the Vord Queens got an \\\'\\\'explicit\\\' mention, \\\'\\\'\\\'telling\\\'\\\'\\\' Tavi that this issue will come to a head.
Please stop re-adding these examples.
Please stop re-adding these examples.
