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I think this is an odd-ball situation. The troper\'s edit reason isn\'t wrong, it\'s just that this entry is about the [=WoR=] episode \
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I think this is an odd-ball situation. The troper\\\'s edit reason isn\\\'t wrong, it\\\'s just that this entry is about the [=WoR=] episode \\\"Schnee Dust Company\\\". Qrow explicitly discusses the two men, their personalities, their differences, and how different the company is under each man. While Qrow talks, Nick does the hand-over to Jacques. That\\\'s why the entry is written as a DiscussedTrope example.
It could probably stand to be made a bit clearer that it\\\'s Qrow who\\\'s discussing the trope in relation to the two men in that mini-episode, and they are seen together in that mini-episode, as a result.
It would be interesting to know if there is another appropriate trope, but I think the first thing to do is confirm whether this actually is a {{Foil}} example, given the specific nature of the example concerned. If it is one, it probably should be rewritten to make it clear why it fits the trope when one of the characters died years before the story\\\'s time period.
It could probably stand to be made a bit clearer that it\\\'s Qrow who\\\'s discussing the trope in relation to the two men in that mini-episode, and they are seen together in that mini-episode, as a result.
It would be interesting to know if there is another appropriate trope, but I think the first thing to do is confirm whether this actually is a {{Foil}} example, given the specific nature of the example concerned. If it is one, it probably should be rewritten to make it clear why it fits the trope when one of the characters died years before the story\\\'s time period.
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I think this is an odd-ball situation. The troper\'s edit reason isn\'t wrong, it\'s just that this entry is about the [=WoR=] episode \
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I think this is an odd-ball situation. The troper\\\'s edit reason isn\\\'t wrong, it\\\'s just that this entry is about the [=WoR=] episode \\\"Schnee Dust Company\\\". Qrow explicitly discusses the two men, their personalities, their differences, and how different the company is under each man. While Qrow talks, Nick does the hand-over to Jacques. That\\\'s why the entry is written as a DiscussedTrope example.
It could probably stand to be made a bit clearer that it\\\'s Qrow who\\\'s discussing the trope in relation to the two men in that mini-episode, and they are seen together in that mini-episode, as a result.
It would be interesting to know if there is another appropriate trope, but I think the first thing to do is confirm whether this actually is a {{Foil}} example, given the specific nature of the example concerned. If it is an example, it probably should be rewritten to make it clear why it fits the trope when one of the characters died years before the story\\\'s time period.
It could probably stand to be made a bit clearer that it\\\'s Qrow who\\\'s discussing the trope in relation to the two men in that mini-episode, and they are seen together in that mini-episode, as a result.
It would be interesting to know if there is another appropriate trope, but I think the first thing to do is confirm whether this actually is a {{Foil}} example, given the specific nature of the example concerned. If it is an example, it probably should be rewritten to make it clear why it fits the trope when one of the characters died years before the story\\\'s time period.
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I think this is an odd-ball situation. The troper\'s edit reason isn\'t wrong, it\'s just that this entry is about the [=WoR=] episode \
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I think this is an odd-ball situation. The troper\\\'s edit reason isn\\\'t wrong, it\\\'s just that this entry is about the [=WoR=] episode \\\"Schnee Dust Company\\\". Qrow explicitly discusses the two men, their personalities, their differences, and how different the company is under each man. While Qrow talks, Nick does the hand-over to Jacques. That\\\'s why the entry is written as a DiscussedTrope example.
It could probably stand to be made a bit clearer that it\\\'s Qrow who\\\'s discussing the trope in relation to the two men in that mini-episode, and they are seen together in that mini-episode, as a result.
It would be interesting to know if there is another appropriate trope, but I think the first thing to do is confirm whether this actually is a {{Foil}} example, given the specific nature of the example concerned. If it is an example, it probably should be rewritten to make it clear why it fits the trope when one of the characters died years before the storyline.
It could probably stand to be made a bit clearer that it\\\'s Qrow who\\\'s discussing the trope in relation to the two men in that mini-episode, and they are seen together in that mini-episode, as a result.
It would be interesting to know if there is another appropriate trope, but I think the first thing to do is confirm whether this actually is a {{Foil}} example, given the specific nature of the example concerned. If it is an example, it probably should be rewritten to make it clear why it fits the trope when one of the characters died years before the storyline.
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I think this is an odd-ball situation. The troper\'s edit reason isn\'t wrong, it\'s just that this entry is about the [=WoR=] episode \
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I think this is an odd-ball situation. The troper\\\'s edit reason isn\\\'t wrong, it\\\'s just that this entry is about the [=WoR=] episode \\\"Schnee Dust Company\\\". Qrow explicitly discusses the two men, their personalities, their differences, and how different the company is under each man. While Qrow talks, Nick does the hand-over to Jacques. That\\\'s why the entry is written as a DiscussedTrope example.
It could probably stand to be made a bit clearer that it\\\'s Qrow who\\\'s discussing the trope in relation to the two men in that mini-episode, and they are seen together in that mini-episode, as a result.
It would be interesting to know if there is another appropriate trope, but I think the first thing to do is confirm whether this actually is a {{Foil}} example, given the specific nature of the example concerned.
It could probably stand to be made a bit clearer that it\\\'s Qrow who\\\'s discussing the trope in relation to the two men in that mini-episode, and they are seen together in that mini-episode, as a result.
It would be interesting to know if there is another appropriate trope, but I think the first thing to do is confirm whether this actually is a {{Foil}} example, given the specific nature of the example concerned.
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I think this is an odd-ball situation. The troper\'s edit reason isn\'t wrong. It\'s just that this entry is about the [=WoR=] episode \
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I think this is an odd-ball situation. The troper\\\'s edit reason isn\\\'t wrong, it\\\'s just that this entry is about the [=WoR=] episode \\\"Schnee Dust Company\\\". Qrow explicitly discusses the two men, their personalities, their differences, and how different the company is under each man. While he talks, Nick does the hand-over to Jacques. That\\\'s why the entry is written as a DiscussedTrope example.
It could probably stand to be made a bit clearer that it\\\'s Qrow who\\\'s discussing the trope in relation to the two men in that mini-episode, and they are seen together in that mini-episode, as a result.
It would be interesting to know if there is another appropriate trope, but I think the first thing to do is confirm whether this actually is a {{Foil}} example, given the specific nature of the example concerned.
It could probably stand to be made a bit clearer that it\\\'s Qrow who\\\'s discussing the trope in relation to the two men in that mini-episode, and they are seen together in that mini-episode, as a result.
It would be interesting to know if there is another appropriate trope, but I think the first thing to do is confirm whether this actually is a {{Foil}} example, given the specific nature of the example concerned.
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I think this is an odd-ball. The troper\'s edit reason isn\'t wrong. It\'s just that this entry is about the [=WoR=] episode \
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I think this is an odd-ball situation. The troper\\\'s edit reason isn\\\'t wrong. It\\\'s just that this entry is about the [=WoR=] episode \\\"Schnee Dust Company\\\". Qrow explicitly discusses the two men, their personalities, their differences, and how different the company is under each man. While he talks, Nick does the hand-over to Jacques. That\\\'s why the entry is written as a DiscussedTrope example.
It could probably stand to be made a bit clearer that it\\\'s Qrow who\\\'s discussing the trope in relation to the two men in that mini-episode, and they are seen together in that mini-episode, as a result.
It would be interesting to know if there is another appropriate trope, but I think the first thing to do is confirm whether this actually is a {{Foil}} example, given the specific nature of the example concerned.
It could probably stand to be made a bit clearer that it\\\'s Qrow who\\\'s discussing the trope in relation to the two men in that mini-episode, and they are seen together in that mini-episode, as a result.
It would be interesting to know if there is another appropriate trope, but I think the first thing to do is confirm whether this actually is a {{Foil}} example, given the specific nature of the example concerned.
