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To be honest, I don\'t quite understand what you\'re trying to say with the UnintentionallyUnsympathetic part. The readers know that RWBY thinks they\'re doing the right thing. (Some of them) see RWBY\'s viewpoint and that they think they are justified. But these readers don\'t care, side completely with Jaune, want Jaune to beat them, and want RWBY to suffer for not knowing that Jaune isn\'t the criminal he\'s made out to be. Maybe that\'s mixed in with some FourthWallMyopia but RWBY \'\'are\'\' meant to be sympathetic in their desire to arrest Jaune, who they see as a terrorist. Yet many readers don\'t see them that way. They see them as (as said in many reviews) \
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I guess I don\\\'t quite understand what you\\\'re trying to say with the UnintentionallyUnsympathetic part. The readers know that RWBY thinks they\\\'re doing the right thing. (Some of them) see RWBY\\\'s viewpoint and that they think they are justified. But these readers don\\\'t care, side completely with Jaune, want Jaune to beat them, and want RWBY to suffer for not knowing that Jaune isn\\\'t the criminal he\\\'s made out to be. Maybe that\\\'s mixed in with some FourthWallMyopia but RWBY \\\'\\\'are\\\'\\\' meant to be sympathetic in their desire to arrest Jaune, who they see as a terrorist. Yet many readers don\\\'t see them that way. They see them as (as said in many reviews) \\\"stupid, frustrating, arrogant, self-righteous, and cocky\\\".
Has the author said RWBY aren\\\'t supposed to be seen as sympathetic in this? Because that would change things.
Has the author said RWBY aren\\\'t supposed to be seen as sympathetic in this? Because that would change things.
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To be honest, I don\'t quite understand what you\'re trying to say with the UnintentionallyUnsympathetic part. The readers know that RWBY thinks they\'re doing the right thing. (Some of them) see RWBY\'s viewpoint and that they think they are justified. But these readers don\'t care, side completely with Jaune, want Jaune to beat them, and want RWBY to suffer for not knowing that Jaune isn\'t the criminal he\'s made out to be. Maybe that\'s mixed in with some FourthWallMyopia but RWBY \'\'are\'\' meant to be sympathetic in their desire to arrest Jaune. Yet many readers don\'t see them that way. They see them as (as said in many reviews) \
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To be honest, I don\\\'t quite understand what you\\\'re trying to say with the UnintentionallyUnsympathetic part. The readers know that RWBY thinks they\\\'re doing the right thing. (Some of them) see RWBY\\\'s viewpoint and that they think they are justified. But these readers don\\\'t care, side completely with Jaune, want Jaune to beat them, and want RWBY to suffer for not knowing that Jaune isn\\\'t the criminal he\\\'s made out to be. Maybe that\\\'s mixed in with some FourthWallMyopia but RWBY \\\'\\\'are\\\'\\\' meant to be sympathetic in their desire to arrest Jaune, who they see as a terrorist. Yet many readers don\\\'t see them that way. They see them as (as said in many reviews) \\\"stupid, frustrating, arrogant, self-righteous, and cocky\\\".
Has the author said RWBY aren\\\'t supposed to be seen as sympathetic in this? Because that would change things.
Has the author said RWBY aren\\\'t supposed to be seen as sympathetic in this? Because that would change things.
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To be honest, I don\'t quite understand what you\'re trying to say with the UnintentionallyUnsympathetic part. The readers know that RWBY thinks they\'re doing the right thing. (Some of them) see RWBY\'s viewpoint and that they think they are justified. But these readers don\'t care, side completely with Jaune, want Jaune to beat them, and want RWBY to suffer for not knowing that Jaune isn\'t the criminal he\'s made out to be. Maybe that\'s mixed in with some FourthWallMyopia but RWBY \'\'are\'\' meant to be sympathetic in their desire to arrest Jaune. Yet many readers don\'t see them that way. They see them as (as said in many reviews) \
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To be honest, I don\\\'t quite understand what you\\\'re trying to say with the UnintentionallyUnsympathetic part. The readers know that RWBY thinks they\\\'re doing the right thing. (Some of them) see RWBY\\\'s viewpoint and that they think they are justified. But these readers don\\\'t care, side completely with Jaune, want Jaune to beat them, and want RWBY to suffer for not knowing that Jaune isn\\\'t the criminal he\\\'s made out to be. Maybe that\\\'s mixed in with some FourthWallMyopia but RWBY \\\'\\\'are\\\'\\\' meant to be sympathetic in their desire to arrest Jaune. Yet many readers don\\\'t see them that way. They see them as (as said in many reviews) \\\"stupid, frustrating, arrogant, self-righteous, and cocky\\\".
Has the author said RWBY aren\\\'t supposed to be seen as sympathetic in this? Because that would change things.
Has the author said RWBY aren\\\'t supposed to be seen as sympathetic in this? Because that would change things.
