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ThunderMite42
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Ozpin isn\'t a deconstruction. He\'s walking a fairly standard BigGood path. The standard path for a BigGood (especially one in TheMentor role, because it\'s common for TheMentor, too) is:
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Ozpin isn\\\'t a deconstruction. He\\\'s walking a fairly standard BigGood path. The common path for a BigGood (especially one in TheMentor role, because it\\\'s common for TheMentor, too) is:
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So, yeah, Ozpin is a standard BigGood. The reason that Ironwood is only a deconstruction of the trope at best is because he\'s never been a Big Good in this story, but he\'s spent the entire story desperately wanting to be one.
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So, yeah, Ozpin is a normal BigGood. The reason that Ironwood is only a deconstruction of the trope at best is because he\\\'s never been a Big Good in this story, but he\\\'s spent the entire story desperately wanting to be one.
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Volume 6 gave us Point Number 2 and the set up for Point Number 3. Volume 7 is pretty much going to be all about Point Number 3.
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Volume 6 gave us Point Number 2 and the set up for Point Number 3. I\\\'m expecting Volume 7 to be all about Point Number 3.
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* The heroes move forward, once more united with the purpose of the Big Good, but far wiser to the nuances of the world due to a better understanding of the Big Good as a flawed, but good, person, which gives them a better understanding of the flawed, nuanced world they live in.
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* The heroes move forward, once more united with the purpose of the Big Good, but far wiser to the nuances of the world due to a better understanding of the Big Good as a flawed, but good, person, which is symbolic of their better understanding of the flawed, nuanced world they live in.
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* The heroes learn more about the Big Good, again undoing what they thought they knew about him and allowing reconcilation to happen.
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* The heroes learn more about the Big Good (they finally learn the best of him), again undoing what they thought they knew about him and allowing reconciliation to happen.
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Sorry, let\'s try this in a more readable way.
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Sorry, my first response was a bit unreadable, so this is a rewrite of my response to avoid waffle.
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Ozpin isn\'t a deconstruction. He\'s walking a fairly standard BigGood path.
The standard path for a BigGood (especially one in TheMentor role, because it\'s common for TheMentor, too) is:
The standard path for a BigGood (especially one in TheMentor role, because it\'s common for TheMentor, too) is:
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Ozpin isn\\\'t a deconstruction. He\\\'s walking a fairly standard BigGood path. The standard path for a BigGood (especially one in TheMentor role, because it\\\'s common for TheMentor, too) is: