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I'm not really seeing the parallels to Joffrey.
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I\'m not really seeing the parallels to Joffrey.
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Jof was a DirtyCoward, talkibg big but too afraid and incompetent to do anything right. Kylo is TheHeavy, willing to get things done whatever it takes. Furthermore, Joffrey is a remorseless psychopath who doesn't care for wlanyone except himself, while Kylo is, if nothing else, established ro feel great inner conflict about his actions.
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Jof was a DirtyCoward, talkibg big but too afraid and incompetent to do anything right. Kylo is TheHeavy, willing to get things done whatever it takes. Furthermore, Joffrey is a remorseless psychopath who doesn\'t care for anyone except himself, while Kylo is, if nothing else, established ro feel great inner conflict about his actions.