[001]
AnoBakaDesu
Current Version
Changed line(s) 1 from:
n
* When Emerald learns of Cinder's apparent death, it prompts [[PowerIncontinence her Semblance to go into overdrive]] with an inhuman, bird-like scream. The hall is suddenly cast in the same red-on-black lighting seen in Yang's nightmare last volume. From a swirling black cloud, a warped effigy of Salem materialises before our heroes, twitching like the Nuckelavee Grimm. Once it grows to the same height as the ceiling, it unleashes a ''deafening'' [[HellIsThatNoise scream]] and swoops towards the camera, causing it to black out. Ruby's expression and Blake's words afterwards accurately convey the ''pure, brick-shitting '''fear''''' that the Grimm Queen engenders in any who see her.
-->'''Blake:''' ''W-What was that?!''
'''Ozpin:''' An illusion, but an accurate one. [[HumanoidAbomination That]] ... was Salem.
-->'''Blake:''' ''W-What was that?!''
'''Ozpin:''' An illusion, but an accurate one. [[HumanoidAbomination That]] ... was Salem.
to:
* When Emerald learns of Cinder\'s apparent death, it prompts [[PowerIncontinence her Semblance to go into overdrive]] with an inhuman, bird-like scream. The hall is suddenly cast in the same red-on-black lighting seen in Yang\'s nightmare last volume. From a swirling black cloud, a warped effigy of Salem materialises before our heroes, twitching like the Nuckelavee Grimm. Once it grows to the same height as the ceiling, it unleashes a \'\'deafening\'\' [[HellIsThatNoise scream]] and swoops towards the camera, causing it to black out. Ruby\'s expression and Blake\'s words afterwards accurately convey the \'\'pure, brick-shitting \'\'\'fear\'\'\'\'\' that the Grimm Queen engenders in any who see her.
-->\'\'\'Blake:\'\'\' \'\'W-What was that?!\'\'
-->\'\'\'Ozpin:\'\'\' An illusion, but an accurate one. [[HumanoidAbomination That]] ... was Salem.
-->\'\'\'Blake:\'\'\' \'\'W-What was that?!\'\'
-->\'\'\'Ozpin:\'\'\' An illusion, but an accurate one. [[HumanoidAbomination That]] ... was Salem.
Changed line(s) 5 from:
n
Pretty sure this can be reworked to omit character reactions, as Salem's illusion is clearly among the more startling scenes of the series.
to:
Pretty sure this can be reworked to omit character reactions, as Salem\'s illusion is clearly among the more startling scenes of the series.
