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The \"Ambiguously Brown\" entry for Jean-Jacques Leroy was strange so I rewrote it.
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The \"Ambiguously Brown\" entry for Jean-Jacques Leroy\'s is quite strange.
\"He has significantly tan skin despite coming from a country known for its cold climate, and so does his father and some other members of his family.\"
The vast majority of the Canadian population live along the US border and have long hot summers. Not to mention the large number of people that spend their winters in more tropical climates.
\"Considering how racially diverse Canada is (specifically Québec, where he\'s most likely to be from)..\"
No reason why he can\'t be from their but the sentence makes it sound like Quebec in particular is very racially diverse in comparison to the other provinces when it isn\'t.
\"He has significantly tan skin despite coming from a country known for its cold climate, and so does his father and some other members of his family.\"
The vast majority of the Canadian population live along the US border and have long hot summers. Not to mention the large number of people that spend their winters in more tropical climates.
\"Considering how racially diverse Canada is (specifically Québec, where he\'s most likely to be from)..\"
No reason why he can\'t be from their but the sentence makes it sound like Quebec in particular is very racially diverse in comparison to the other provinces when it isn\'t.
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The \"Ambiguously Brown\" entry for Jean-Jacques Leroy\'s is quite strange.
\"He has significantly tan skin despite coming from a country known for its cold climate, and so does his father and some other members of his family.\"
The vast majority of the Canadian population live along the US border and have long hot summers.
\"Considering how racially diverse Canada is (specifically Québec, where he\'s most likely to be from)..\"
No reason why he can\'t be from their but the sentence makes it sound like Quebec in particular is very racially diverse in comparison to the other provinces when it isn\'t.
\"He has significantly tan skin despite coming from a country known for its cold climate, and so does his father and some other members of his family.\"
The vast majority of the Canadian population live along the US border and have long hot summers.
\"Considering how racially diverse Canada is (specifically Québec, where he\'s most likely to be from)..\"
No reason why he can\'t be from their but the sentence makes it sound like Quebec in particular is very racially diverse in comparison to the other provinces when it isn\'t.
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The problem is that almost all of these are just people who read spoilers, with the exception of maybe two that are still ambiguous rather than definitely having seen it, which was my point. The ones calling it flanderization, rather than just something they don't personally like, are almost entirely people who have not seen the movie.
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The problem is that almost all of these are just people who read spoilers, with the exception of maybe two that are still ambiguous rather than definitely having seen it, which was my point. The ones calling it flanderization, rather than just something they don\'t personally like, are almost entirely people who have not seen the movie.
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Also, sure, Kaiba in the manga was trying to move on. But that's emphasis on
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Also, sure, Kaiba in the manga was trying to move on. But that\'s emphasis on \"trying\". Kaiba has never just gotten better, he\'s always zigzagged because getting better is hard for him. So just because he\'s had a setback, especially one where he\'s acting more in line with his latest development than his earliest (again, he\'s being a dick, but not a monster), doesn\'t erase that. It\'s just part of it.
edit: It\'s worth mentioning that Kaiba in the manga also thought he was going to see Atem again when he got back from starting in on his Kaiba Land goals, but instead he wound up arriving in Egypt just barely too late to even see him leave.
edit: It\'s worth mentioning that Kaiba in the manga also thought he was going to see Atem again when he got back from starting in on his Kaiba Land goals, but instead he wound up arriving in Egypt just barely too late to even see him leave.
