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When I say Cleopatra is shocked at his appearance, I'm not referring to her my room lines. Your party hesitates to introduce her to Caesar again because they know she's going to freak out and she actually faints the first time she sees him at the end of the Halloween event. She still loves him, though, and he's still popular. That's why he's listed under KavorkaMan and not ChickMagnet. He's not conventionally attractive.
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When I say Cleopatra is shocked at his appearance, I\'m not referring to her my room lines. Your party hesitates to introduce her to Caesar again because they know she\'s going to freak out and she actually faints the first time she sees him at the end of the Halloween event. She still loves him, though, and he\'s still popular. That\'s why he\'s listed under KavorkaMan and not ChickMagnet. He\'s not conventionally attractive.
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Building on that, it feels like you're downplaying the fact that he's overweight when it's a really common joke about his character throughout the story. It might be a tasteless joke and you might be offended, but that doesn't change how the story portrays him.
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Building on that, it feels like you\'re downplaying the fact that he\'s overweight when it\'s a really common joke about his character throughout the story. It might be a tasteless joke and you might be offended, but that doesn\'t change how the story portrays him.
Blah, I don\'t mean to come off as argumentative for once, it just kind of feels like you\'re not getting the point of the character, at least not as I understand it. To me, he\'s supposed to be impressive and cool \'\'despite\'\' his appearance whereas you seem to be viewing him as impressive and cool \'\'regardless\'\' of his appearance.
Blah, I don\'t mean to come off as argumentative for once, it just kind of feels like you\'re not getting the point of the character, at least not as I understand it. To me, he\'s supposed to be impressive and cool \'\'despite\'\' his appearance whereas you seem to be viewing him as impressive and cool \'\'regardless\'\' of his appearance.
