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* CrapsaccharineWorld: Overwatch lore has a bright, cheery, outwardly utopian society reestablishing itself in the aftermath of a near-apocalyptic war, where the heroes and villains are ultimately broken individuals who are fighting because they don't know anything else, and all indications are that yet another global crisis is just around the corner and Overwatch will be needed again. There's also the fact that said society has a seedy underbelly - one that has crime, terrorist organizations, one or more MegaCorp full of [[CorruptCorporateExecutive Corrupt Corporate Executives]] [[KnightTemplar seeking to impose]] [[WellIntentionedExtremist their own version of order]] (and apparently it was the ''standard'' of the world, any legit honest companies and workers are pretty much existing only to be weak prey by the legal system which is filled with people who LOVE abusing these kind of honest, and if a company looked as if averting it, they most likely did the corrupt thing in the back that once their shady dealings are revealed, [[EvenEvilHasStandards even a ruthless chaotic troublemaking gang will stand against them]]), a country partly turned into a radioactive wasteland where its inhabits turn to crime and scavenging for parts to survive, FantasticRacism towards robots (Omnics), thuggish gangs who rule their area either by selling weapons or terrorizing innocent civilians, etc.
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* CrapsaccharineWorld: Overwatch lore has a bright, cheery, outwardly utopian society reestablishing itself in the aftermath of a near-apocalyptic war, where the heroes and villains are ultimately broken individuals who are fighting because they don\'t know anything else, and all indications are that yet another global crisis is just around the corner and Overwatch will be needed again. There\'s also the fact that said society has a seedy underbelly - one that has crime, terrorist organizations, one or more MegaCorp full of [[CorruptCorporateExecutive Corrupt Corporate Executives]] [[KnightTemplar seeking to impose]] [[WellIntentionedExtremist their own version of order]] (and apparently it was the \'\'standard\'\' of the world, any legit honest companies and workers are pretty much existing only to be weak prey by the legal system which is filled with people who LOVE abusing these kind of honest beings, and if a company looked as if averting it, they most likely did the corrupt thing in the back that once their shady dealings are revealed, [[EvenEvilHasStandards even a ruthless chaotic troublemaking gang will stand against them]]), a country partly turned into a radioactive wasteland where its inhabits turn to crime and scavenging for parts to survive, FantasticRacism towards robots (Omnics), thuggish gangs who rule their area either by selling weapons or terrorizing innocent civilians, etc.
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The entry as it currently stands is written very awkwardly and has major grammar issues...in my opinion. As I said, though, Chris recently accused me of being a
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The entry as it currently stands is written very awkwardly and has major grammar issues...in my opinion. As I said, though, Chris recently accused me of being a \"Grammar Nazi\", so I thought I\'d bring it up for discussion and see if anyone else had a problem with the entry\'s wording.
