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OhCrap!: When Lilith tells him that the best way out of a bad situation is for her to commit suicide, she sends him an image of using one of Charlie's guns to kill herself. Parson has to take a minute to digest the implications of that image.
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OhCrap: When Lilith tells him that the best way out of a bad situation is for her to commit suicide, she sends him an image of using one of Charlie\'s guns to kill herself. Parson has to take a minute to digest the implications of that image.
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First of all, it needs to be clear that the big deal is that Charlie has guns, not that Lilith is in a situation where suicide is a good option. But mostly, [[http://archives.erfworld.com/Book%203/102 Parson's reaction doesn't seem like an Oh, Crap! to me.]] I think it's worthy of an entry, but can't think of the right trope.
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First of all, it needs to be clear that the big deal is that Charlie has guns, not that Lilith is in a situation where suicide is a good option. But mostly, [[http://archives.erfworld.com/Book%203/102 Parson\'s reaction doesn\'t seem like an Oh, Crap! to me.]] I think it\'s worthy of an entry, but can\'t think of the right trope.
