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I would like some feedback on my fanfic, please.

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queenieAG Queenie from Alternate timeline Since: Mar, 2019 Relationship Status: Robosexual
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#1: Nov 13th 2022 at 6:54:58 AM

https://www.wattpad.com/story/314803070-united-a-plants-vs-zombies-fanfiction

I wish to get some advice on how I can improve my story, just something seems off about it, but I can't put my finger on it.

GoldenCityBird from the UK Since: Oct, 2018
#2: Nov 13th 2022 at 9:17:25 AM

We have a thread for concrit. Just put yourself on the queue and wait for someone to get to you.

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