I would like some feedback on my fanfic, please.

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queenieAG Queenie from Alternate timeline Relationship Status: Robosexual

Queenie

Nov 13th 2022 at 6:54:58 AM

I wish to get some advice on how I can improve my story, just something seems off about it, but I can't put my finger on it.

GoldenCityBird from the UK Relationship Status: -not set

Nov 13th 2022 at 9:17:25 AM

We have a thread for concrit. Just put yourself on the queue and wait for someone to get to you.

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