I don't mean to be pushy in any way, but would someone be willing to do a further check on my application? It's been nearly a week, with only a single response.

Edited by Chrysalis1 on Feb 8th 2024 at 8:01:02 AM

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The Ability you're thinking of is Trace, but apart from that I see no issues.

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Chrysalis1, your signup looks like it's acceptable for joining from my perspective. However, would you clarify if the "Professor" title in Arlie's name is part of a stage name, a title signifying their academic learning in one or more fields, or something else? I'm assuming the former based on the context clues from Arlie's backstory, but clarification would be appreciated.

~Chrysalis1 Aside from what the others pointed out I don't see any glaring problems! Quick quesytion, can you use Discord? We use it pretty heavily OOC so if you can't we'd have to find workarounds. If you can I can invite you to the server.

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I've got discord. It is meant to be a stage name. Thanks for the ability clarification!

Edited by Chrysalis1 on Feb 10th 2024 at 4:16:28 AM

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~Chrysalis1 OK then I think you should be good to go! I'll send you a link to the Discord server shortly

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Meet the serious yet Amnesic Trainer!

Name: Yukari

Age: 17

Gender: Female

Ethnicity: Japanese

Appearance: Black twin tail hair, heterochromia eyes (Gray on the left eye, Red on the right eye), is 5 '4 ft (if not wearing boots), is 5'6 (if wearing boots), and skinny. Appears to wear an long sleeve black top with an maroon bow tied around the upper shirt, maroon skirt, wears red glasses, and wears brown boots. (Visual ref at the very bottom of the page)

Organization Ties: None

Region of origin: Unknown as she doesn’t remember about her past but her name.

Backstory: A young woman who doesn’t remember anything about her past but name. An accident happened when she was 5 that led to her getting amesia. During that time, she has to move to Kanto to live with her grandparents until she was 10 to do an Pokèmon journey while getting an pokèball that included her starter Pokèmon, an Sprigatito nicknamed Joker, with the words "Yuji" written on it. While she could focus on regaining her memories, she decided to put that as an part of her side quest and put her focus on her being an Pokèmon trainer as long as she visit her grandparents every few months since they do support her side goal. As much as she is cold and a bit harsh towards others, she is actually awkward, yet a total sweetie underneath her “serious” persona. Despite having amnesia, she appears to know about the League in Sinnoh, which cause a few people to accuse that she is faking it, despite not remembering how she got that infomation in the first place. Despite this, Joker devotes himself to protect her, which she doesn't understand why as she didn't met him.

Meet her mons!

Species: Meowscarada

Nickname: Joker (For more infomation of the nickname, check the notes section)

Gender: Male

Ability: Overgrow

Personality/Bio: An exovert Meowscarada who cares about his owner, who knows her as long as he can remember despite her not remembering him. Very friendly and willing to help. He’s just an chill Meowscarada and tends to go with the flow of things; Except for when putting Yukari into danger due to an promise he made with someone.

Species: Charcadet (Shiny ver. For further info about opting to an Shiny Charcadet, check the notes section)

Nickname: Kiel

Gender: Male

Ability: None

Personality/Bio: An friendly and kind Charcadet who is willing to lend a hand, even towards strangers. He's the best at cooking despite being small. However, he's naive and honest to the fault that he believes everything that was said to him.

Species: Ceruledge

Nickname: Forte, フォルテ (For more info about the hiragana, check the notes section)

Gender: Female

Ability: Flash Fire

Personality/Bio: Forte is an Ceruledge who is loyal, disciplined, kind to everyone, and hardworking. Yet, she is a bit prone to attack those that she thinks those are a threat. When Forte isn't busy, she just simple look at the sky, water, whatever Yukari's stopping place, or just chatting with others. She views Yukari as an little sister despite not being an Pokèmon and secretly enjoy sweets, but she will try to deny it, even though Kiel already told them.

Notes

• While Meowscarada is nickname after P5 protaginst and the Pokèsona 2 is still on-going acording to the wiki, the nickname has nothing to do with the arc. I only thought the name Joker fits for an male Meowscarade as their appearnce is very gentlemen thief to me.

• Now, since it's okay to get only one shiny pokèmon, I figure I opt to use an Shiny Charcadet. While said shiny of Charcadet is not good, I figure that the blue eye color fits him the best as not only his name is an refernce to Rune Factory 4, but the character Kiel also have blue eyes.

• The name Forte came from Kiel's older sister in Rune Factory 4. However, I notice there's another Forte in the rp and since I don't to force someone to change the name, I also opt to using フォルテ, which is litteraly translated as Forute, which, in my opinion, doesn't look right when typing that out in eng. Plus, Yukari is japanese, so I figure it makes sense for her to opt to フォルテ if there's another Forte around.

• I've been read proofing this, despite the fact that I haven't got any sleep due to my meds, but feel free to tell me any issues you find here and I'll gladly edit them. Oh, and I don't know if you do that rp interview still, but I prefer doing that once I'm not sleep deprived as I don't want to make an irrational decsion.

• If you notice a few grammar mistakes, this is due to the fact that, as stated before, I haven't got any sleep, and I sometimes write fast that I forgot to type in some few words. So, if I get accepted, I'm going to have to write my response for the rp in an google doc to fix any issues there and post them when they're all clear.

Visual Refernces of Yukari

Edited by Xabbynip09 on Mar 26th 2024 at 10:55:40 AM

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~Xabbynip09 Hi! Your signup looks good to me after reading it (and well-researched), but I'll let others weigh in too. Also:

- don't worry about doing any battle tests - we completely overhauled our initiation stuff a while back, there will be stuff you do once approved but not that

-also don't worry about Forte's name - the One-Steve Limit only applies on a species level, and the old Forte's player is mostly retired anyway

Also are you able to use Discord? The majority of our OOC discussion is via Discord or XMPP.

Edited by Umbramatic on Mar 25th 2024 at 5:36:38 AM

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Yep! I do have an discord account! I'll dm the account name!

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Hey there new person. While the rest of her personality is okay by my book, I have some concerns about the length of time she spent as an amnesiac and the context it would've taken. "Has been traveling around the world to find regain her memories since she was five" is unlikely unless her caretakers have somehow allowed this and may have assisted her since then. In the intervening time, an amnesiac five-year-old would've been adopted or fostered in some way and would've developed a personal identity independent of the one they lost.

I would've suggested boosting up her age when she was lost (around her early teens at least, or if you add caretaker details, around 7 or 10, which was around the time children would start comprehending that) and mention something along the lines of the hunt for her original identity being something akin to a lingering side quest that she's taken seriously and she's not trying to recover who she is entirely but a part of her that's been lost.

It'll also help to know more about her caretakers if she was very young when this happened (things like glasses and clothing have to have been paid by someone who was legal-aged). Were they loving or abusive? If the former, were they at least supportive of her search for identity to give her closure or something? If the latter, was that the reason she wanted to know who she really was?

Edited by MasterJayAM on Mar 25th 2024 at 9:36:06 PM

~Master Jay AM Thank you for addressing this. I changed a few things to fix this. As for her parents, they are loving to her, but an certain accident led to her getting amnesia. It was one of her parents descion to let her move from home to Kanto where her grandparents live cause they figure it's for the best and her grandparents dote her so much that she can't help but visit them every few months.

Also, sorry for the @. I understand every is busy with things and irl stuff.

Edited by Xabbynip09 on Mar 26th 2024 at 3:29:31 PM

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Re: Sign up edits

The new information adds what I think should be sufficient. To clarify, though, she has something similar to what Dory has in Finding Nemo? Not really anything nitpicky there. I'm just curious. But with her family situation prior cleared up, we should be good to go in my opinion.

Re; clarifications about Yukari's memory loss

Master Jay AM

For your question about being similar to Dory has in Finding Nemo, yes Yukari does have memory loss. However,the "accident" happened around 2012 cause her to have memory loss. Sorry if I sounded a bit stubborn or something like that in the lines. It's almost midnight from where I'm from.

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Yeah, it's alright. No need to apologize. I can't make the decision on my own but my queries have been satisfied so I see no need for any major changes at this juncture.

Edited by MasterJayAM on Mar 31st 2024 at 9:24:42 PM

~Xabbynip09 Sorry I'm late, a lot of stuff has been occupying me lately. You should be good to go, so I'll DM you a link to the Discord server when I'm able

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Umbramatic That's fine! Take your time on dming me the link! I can wait.

Edited by Xabbynip09 on Apr 7th 2024 at 5:36:35 AM

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