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Also known as Katz
Okeydokes, I've cut the paragraph about Darwin not believing in it since it's on the trivia page, I've wrapped the second paragraph into the descriptions of the subtypes, I've added moved most of the fourth paragraph to a fourth type (the Complete Monster who just uses Darwinism as an excuse for his or her own selfishness; could also be a part of the first type but that would make the first type really broad), and I cut the last sentence of the second-to-last paragraph because I have no idea what it had to do with anything. Look good, or was that too drastic?
Excellent - I also cut out the sentence about Herbert Spencer (unimportant detail), and in the present form I think it'll do okay. Good choice on the four subtypes.
edited 12th Dec '11 10:24:22 PM by Vasha
Raven Wilder
Yeah, description's looking pretty good now. Call this one a wrap?
"It takes an idiot to do cool things, that's why it's cool" - Haruhara Haruko
The description is terribly long-winded and unfocused. I rewrote it some, anyone else want to have a crack at cutting it down?
edited 19th Oct '11 12:23:20 AM by Vasha