YMMV / Origin of the Pixies

• Hilarious in Hindsight: Fergus first mentions in Chapter 13 that he didn't approve of the way Kalysta wrote Chapter 16 in her novel specifically the part about the paternal figure disowning their child, which is exactly what Ambrosine does to him in Chapter 16.
  • Additionally, Hawkins had the idea in Chapter 16 to steal from Ambrosine's lockbox and it turns out in Chapter 18 they were stealing from the funds Fergus's mother had left for them anyway.