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** Taylor has a ''very'' impressive set of preparations in the case of someone deciding to attack at her home, Unwritten Rules be damned. Given that Coil breaks the Rules near-constantly...
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* FantasticRacism:
** It's noted that Dinah's mother has a strong aversion to capes after a close friend of hers was killed in the crossfire of a hero/villain fight while she was in college.
** Despite the fact that they hadn't shown any signs of being hostile, two of the guards at City Hall try to attack Taylor and Dinah simply because they're capes, even admitting as such when Taylor asks what law they've broken.
** It's noted that Dinah's mother has a strong aversion to capes after a close friend of hers was killed in the crossfire of a hero/villain fight while she was in college.
** Despite the fact that they hadn't shown any signs of being hostile, two of the guards at City Hall try to attack Taylor and Dinah simply because they're capes, even admitting as such when Taylor asks what law they've broken.
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* MadScientist: Taylor compares her power to one, noting that it seems almost ''alive'', namely when it only gives her non-water based technology when she fulfills some kind of requirement, like encouraging her to build a {{BFG}} for the ''Nevermore'' before getting it moving again.
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* MadScientist: Taylor compares her power to one, noting that it seems almost ''alive'', namely when it only gives her non-water based non-water-based technology when she fulfills some kind of requirement, like encouraging her to build a {{BFG}} for the ''Nevermore'' before getting it moving again.
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* SpannerInTheWorks: Coil is forced to discard the idea of attacking the Ruby Dream because a random electrical short caused the manager to ask Lung for permission to give the building a ''much''-needed overhaul, and Lung agreed, and the Travelers' planned debut has to be put off due to Noelle acting up.
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* SpannerInTheWorks: Coil is forced to discard the idea of attacking the Ruby Dream Dreams because a random electrical short caused the manager to ask Lung for permission to give the building a ''much''-needed overhaul, and Lung agreed, and the Travelers' planned debut has to be put off due to Noelle acting up.
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* TitleDrop: Taylor creates the organization name "Waterworks" in order to keep people from realizing that she's a solo Tinker.
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* TitleDrop: Initially, Taylor creates the organization name goes by "Waterworks" in order to keep as her Hero code name, but later uses it as a front for a team formed by several identities, keeping people from realizing that she's a solo Tinker.learning about her true powers.
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* AbsenceOfEvidence: The lack of scavenging from local junkyards and the like for parts to Tinker with leads both the PRT and Coil to believe that Riptide has somehow gotten backing from another group or individual.
** [[spoiler:After rescuing Dinah, Taylor notes that there's oddly no mention of her when the kidnapping hits the news.]]
** [[spoiler:After rescuing Dinah, Taylor notes that there's oddly no mention of her when the kidnapping hits the news.]]
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* AbsenceOfEvidence: AbsenceOfEvidence:
** The lack of scavenging from local junkyards and the like for parts to Tinker with leads both the PRT and Coil to believe that Riptide has somehow gotten backing from another group or individual.
** [[spoiler:After rescuing Dinah, Taylor notes that there's oddly no mention of her when the kidnapping hits the news. She guesses that her involvement means that the PRT is sitting on the story.]]
** The lack of scavenging from local junkyards and the like for parts to Tinker with leads both the PRT and Coil to believe that Riptide has somehow gotten backing from another group or individual.
** [[spoiler:After rescuing Dinah, Taylor notes that there's oddly no mention of her when the kidnapping hits the news. She guesses that her involvement means that the PRT is sitting on the story.]]
* BiggerOnTheInside: Taylor can create "Magic Bottles" that hold far more liquid than their physical dimensions would suggest, like a bullet-sized object containing a full barrel's worth.
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* BiggerOnTheInside: Taylor can create "Magic Bottles" that hold far more liquid than their physical dimensions would suggest, like a bullet-sized object containing a full barrel's worth.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Kaiser is a nasty customer, but even ''he'' knows that Triggers are serious things and would never make light of them, and thinks that the fact that the PRT agent who investigated Rachel/Bitch's trigger is currently dying of cancer is fitting karma for him messing it up so badly.
** Coil ''hates'' nepotism or favoritism of any kind, believing that positions should only be filled by those capable of performing their duties competently.
** Coil ''hates'' nepotism or favoritism of any kind, believing that positions should only be filled by those capable of performing their duties competently.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: EvenEvilHasStandards:
** Kaiser is a nasty customer, but even ''he'' knows that Triggers are serious things and would never make light of them, and thinks that the fact that the PRT agent who investigated Rachel/Bitch's trigger is currently dying of cancer is fitting karma for him messing it up so badly.
** Coil ''hates'' nepotism or favoritism of any kind, believing that positions should only be filled by those capable of performing their duties competently. Him making sure that the incompetent PRT trooper who screwed up and let the Undersiders escape while blaming the Wards despite ''them'' doing everything by the book is punished is only partially out of a desire to get payback for his plans being screwed up.
** Kaiser is a nasty customer, but even ''he'' knows that Triggers are serious things and would never make light of them, and thinks that the fact that the PRT agent who investigated Rachel/Bitch's trigger is currently dying of cancer is fitting karma for him messing it up so badly.
** Coil ''hates'' nepotism or favoritism of any kind, believing that positions should only be filled by those capable of performing their duties competently. Him making sure that the incompetent PRT trooper who screwed up and let the Undersiders escape while blaming the Wards despite ''them'' doing everything by the book is punished is only partially out of a desire to get payback for his plans being screwed up.
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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: Coil plans to have the Undersiders captured by the Wards at the bank as a distraction for capturing Dinah. Lisa also suspects that if he ''does'' need them again, he can just break them out, and thus drive them further into his influence in the process.
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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: Coil plans to have the Undersiders captured by the Wards at the bank as a distraction for capturing Dinah. Lisa also suspects that if he ''does'' need them again, he can just break them out, and thus drive them further into his influence in the process. Luckily for them, Lisa manages to work out a successful escape plan.
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** Iron Rain's full name is Mary Anders.
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** Coil ''hates'' nepotism or favoritism of any kind, believing that positions should only be filled by those capable of performing their duties competently.
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* IgnoredExpert: Coil, thinking that it was just Lisa being delaying and uncooperative as usual, disregarded her warnings about Riptide's patrol patterns, which is why Taylor was able to interfere with his grabbing Dinah at all.
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* AdultFear: Deliberately invoked by the PRT's [[LiesDamnedLiesAndStatistics (mis)]]representation of the Independent survival rate, hoping to use this to scare parents into signing their kids up for the Wards.
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* LiesDamnedLiesAndStatistics: The PRT deliberately does this to the survival rate of Independents, including things like moving to another city and the like, and not accounting for the fact that Independents that ''do'' last for a year or so tend to last for quite a while after that, in order to [[AdultFear scare the parents of parahuman teens]] into being more likely to consider the Wards.
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* LiesDamnedLiesAndStatistics: The PRT deliberately does this to the survival rate of Independents, including things like moving to another city and the like, and not accounting for the fact that Independents that ''do'' last for a year or so tend to last for quite a while after that, in order to [[AdultFear scare the parents of parahuman teens]] teens into being more likely to consider the Wards.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11847642/1/Worm-Waterworks Worm – Waterworks]]'' is a ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4583733/SeerKing SeerKing]] where Taylor triggered with MakingASplash powers ''and'' water-based Tinker powers. Armed with these abilities, she now intends to help clean up Brockton Bay of its criminals and help the city in recovering itself.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11847642/1/Worm-Waterworks Worm – Waterworks]]'' is a ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4583733/SeerKing SeerKing]] Creator/SeerKing where Taylor triggered with MakingASplash powers ''and'' water-based Tinker powers. Armed with these abilities, she now intends to help clean up Brockton Bay of its criminals and help the city in recovering itself.
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** In canon Lisa/Tattletale would be straight if not for her power induced {{Asexuality}}, while here she would be bisexual.
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** In canon Lisa/Tattletale would be straight if not for her power induced {{Asexuality}}, power-induced asexuality, while here she would be bisexual.
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* MissingWhiteWomanSyndrome: Taylor notes that the kidnapping of Dinah makes the news, while the hundreds of women kidnapped every year at Brockton Bay by the gangs barely make a blip in the news' radar.
