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sanityisoverrated2012-01-15 15:31:40

BLUE SHADOWS

A Conor T. Hedgehog story

All rights to Sega and Sonic team while Conor and non-characters belong to me while Brad and Tammy belong to Yoshi 2.1 and Brad159357.

Prologue 15 years ago

Will you marry me?These words rang through Fiona's ear she clutched the ring Conor put into her hand as he slowly died she stood with others at his funeral.

She stood beside Rouge and Sonic. Everyone was in black the girls and guys all stood as Conors coffin passed by.

Mina began to sing Ave Maria as Conors coffin was placed at the grave side, after the song Sonic came forward and faced everyone.

Hello I just wanted to say a few words Sonic cleared his throat. Conor was a hedgehog no matter what would come and save anyone without thinking about himself but now many know as a monster who killed hundreds and for 2 months created a wave of terror over mobious but I knew him before all of that and I don't think of him any different from what he was. Sonic took a breath steading his speech. He was my friend and I could even call him brother no matter what he turned and faced Conors coffin. Conor I love you and I always will good bye…Brother.

Sonic turned and then sat down in his seat Fiona slowly stood up.

Hello I just wanted to say that although you may never forgive Conor or myself I want to say I'm sorry and Conor I'll miss you no matter what I do you're the love of my life she wiped a tear before going back to her seat. Everyone walked past the coffin paying their respects finally Rouge, Sonic and Fiona were left. Rouge walked up and blew him a kiss before walking over to the others. Sonic walked up and placed Conors metal arm on the coffin he looked at Conor one more time before joining Rouge. Finally Fiona walked up she held Conors glasses in one hand she kissed them before placing them on his face and then went off by herself.

Hey just saying i'm working on something else it could take a long time but when its doone i'll return to this. Well that's the first chapter done it might take longer to do but I hope everyone will enjoy this. Conor

BLUE SHADOWS

A Conor T. Hedgehog story

All rights to Sega and Sonic team while Conor and non-characters belong to me while Brad and Tammy belong to Yoshi 2.1 and Brad159357.

Chapter 1 Back On Earth

Listen to the song Back On Earth by Ozzy Osbourne it helps the atmosphere.(All right to Ozzy and his music company)

Standing in the shadows surrounded by trees stood a girl in a cloak. She slowly exhaled looking out through the trees she knew it was risky she wiped sweat from her head before checking again. She ran out to the grave and looked around the last guard had left his post for the night and headed off home.

She ran out to the grave and took out Conors tie she placed it over his grave and then looked around again before taking out a dark blue chaos emerald and placed it onto of the tie.

I hope this works Fiona said removing the cloak.

The servers are the seven chaos emerald but the 8th was forbidden I call upon you 8th server Fiona said.

Slowly the chaos emerald began to turn Black.

Hear me at the time of black hour and grant him this dark power awake when I say his name… Conor rise again! Fiona shouted the black chaos emerald rose above Conors grave and shot out black electricity into the ground she ran back to a safe distance before the ground exploded and a beam of yellow light fired up into the sky she tried to look and saw a body rise up and then the beam of light turned to black the body shook and turned as shadows repaired Conors body it lasted a minute then his body was thrown to the ground she stood in silence looking at him he slowly looked up.

Back On Earth? Conor lost all strength and collapsed.

Fiona's eyes flooded with tears before running over to him.

Your back she said smiling tears running down onto his face she put the cloak around him before pushing a button on her wrist a car shot out of the woods and parked right beside her she put his body in and climbed in herself it looked as though nothing had happened they sped off into the woods

Ok so I'm back what will happen next? Plus that rhyme thing I did the black hour thing I'm still face palming myself with embarrassment.

Comments

Jergling Since: Dec, 1969

Jan 19th 2012 at 11:55:11 AM

I'm missing something, how do you know Conor's an author-insert (besides the fact that he's a antihero-Sue)?

"I all ways tell the truth even when I'm lying" is a misheard quote from Scarface. Not nearly as bad as the Duke Nukem one.

Lol, "Knuckle head". He didn't want to delete the word "Knuckles" so he found a way to work the same letters into a new sentence.

"Shadow shouted blasting Conor back into a wall." WHAT WALL??? They're outside and Shadow's on the ground. If anything, shouldn't it have thrown Conor upwards?

sanityisoverrated Since: Dec, 1969

Jan 20th 2012 at 4:34:07 AM

I assume he's an author insert character because his author name is Conor T. Hedgehog.

Doesn't get more blatant than that, I think.

Jergling Since: Dec, 1969

Jan 20th 2012 at 5:22:28 PM

Man, I thought "A Conor T. Hedgehog story" was just the subtitle, but then I looked at his FF.net page. 0_0

I knew Fanfiction.net was bad, I had no idea it could be as bad a /circlejerk as deviantArt. He has 46 reviews on "Blue Shadows". 30 of them are his co-authors telling eachother how great they are, 14 are "OMG THIS STORY HAD SONIC IN IT!!!" fanchildren, and 2 are honest-to-goodness reviews.

Here's my favorite:

Just a little poke at the summary: who's Fiona and who's Conor?

Don't answer that because the second question is: why should we, Sonic fans, care? Reformat the summary to make it look like a Sonic fan fiction, not a story about whathisname from whatsitsplace.

Fix chapter one. Those missing spaces, punctuation marks and overall simplicity makes me frown you considered rating it M. The word is 'prologue' not 'prolouge', as your chapter title claims.

Have a nice, abuse-free day."

Jergling Since: Dec, 1969

Jan 20th 2012 at 5:31:09 PM

Holy space-Jesus! It gets even better! This "Lord Kelvin" guy follows Conor's work, telling him to use quotes and stop posting scriptfic drivel, but his reviews get drowned out by the other kids' use of the review board as a chatroom!

I'd really like to analyze the psychology of groups like this. There seems to be this mentality that "great work" is actually "work that's on par with mine BUT NOT BETTER!!1!!1one"

sanityisoverrated Since: Dec, 1969

Jan 23rd 2012 at 2:57:08 AM

I'd like to note, just quickly, that Fiona isn't a fan character but a character from the Archie Comics. Not bashing the guy's review, it's a criticism to the fanfic which instantly puts it in my good books, I was just throwing that out there.