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1	'''Warning- The following description contains unmarked spoilers for Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica. Proceed at your own risk.'''
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3	''Thanks Kyubey'' is a Fan Fiction about ''Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica''. It is an AlternateUniverse mainly drawing from a WhatIf: What if our despicable Kyuubey acts like a normal MagicalGirl MentorMascot? That is, sweet, helpful, informative, emotional, no {{manipulati\|veBastard}}ng, no {{troll}}ing. The result is a VERY LIKABLE Kyuubey and changing the setting of Madoka-verse into LighterAndSofter like you wouldn't believe.
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5	Can be read [[http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/thanks_kyuubey here]] or [[http://danbooru.donmai.us/pool/show/3104 here]] (beware the NSFW ads!). We recommend you watch the original series first to fully enjoy this work.
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8	!!Tropes associated with Thanks Kyubey:
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10	* AdaptationalBadass: [[spoiler:Hitomi becomes a magical girl, which she didn't in canon.]]
11	* AdaptationalHeroism: Kyuubey is a benevolent MentorMascot in this verse so naturally that leads to greater heroism.
12	* AdaptationalJerkass: This fic's version of Mami is a much bigger jerk than her canon counterpart.
13	* AndThenJohnWasAZombie: [[spoiler:And then Sayaka was a witch... [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica again.]] She gets better.]]
14	* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler:Damn near every Witch in the end, including Charlotte and Gertrud, as good people, in their original bodies.]]
15	* BenevolentGenie: The entire story is based on the premise that Kyuubey is a kind and caring MentorMascot.
16	* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler:Mami did not tie Homura up before facing Charlotte, so Homura managed to save her in time.]]
17	* BigEater: [[spoiler:''Homura'', of all people, can win eating contests, provided she uses time stop.]]
18	* ButNowIMustGo: [[spoiler:Kyuubey says this after making a wish to revert all magical girls and witches back into normal humans - there was no reason to stay, despite all the girls begging otherwise. Eventually averted when Juubey makes a wish as well.]]
19	* ClingyJealousGirl: Kyouko rather forcibly ends Hitomi's embrace of Sayaka after [[spoiler: Hitomi wished the latter back]]. Hitomi calls her out on it, given [[spoiler: it was Kyouko's kiss that turned Sayaka into a Witch in the first place.]]
20	* ComicallyMissingThePoint: [[TheDragAlong Juubey]] storms out of a party that Kyuubey threw [[spoiler:celebrating Sayaka coming back from being a Witch]], fed up with the utter nonsense the whole situation has played out. Kyuubey then informs the girls that Juubey's leaving, prompting all of them to enthusiastically wish him well as he leaves.
21	--> '''Juubey''': Make it stop!
22	* CoversAlwaysLie: The cover seems to insinuate that [[spoiler: Mami WILL get chomped on the head by Charlotte. It didn't happen.]]
23	* CovertPervert: ''Madoka'', of all the girls, gives hint of this when Sayaka is deciding whether or not to become a magical girl and heal Kyousuke.
24	--> '''Madoka:''' But if you become a magical girl, you can handle rough play and you won't ever get old, right? Isn't that the ideal wife?
25	--> '''Sayaka (indignant):''' Kyousuke isn't that kind of guy!
26	* CreepyGood: Despite being more honest, benevolent, and caring than his anime counterpart, Kyubey still sports his unsettling and unchanging ThousandYardStare.
27	* CurbStompBattle: Implied to be the result of [[spoiler: Walpurgisnacht vs. Homura, Mami, Kyouko, Sayaka, and Hitomi.]]
28	--> '''Kyouko:''' It's like we were just bullying the poor thing.
29	* DiegeticSoundtrackUsage:
30	** Homura's ringtone is CONNECT, the anime's opening theme.
31	** When Walpurgisnacht attacks, a caption states: "BGM: Magia".
32	* DirtyBusiness: It's implied that Kyuubey ''really'' doesn't like their job.
33	* EmptyChairMemorial: The party held after witch!Charlotte's defeat was originally to celebrate Mami no longer being alone, but Kyuubey sets an empty seat with a plate of cheese to remember MagicalGirl!Charlotte. Homura furthers it by reminding those present that such is the fate of all magical girls (though her saying this while [[{{Bathos}} wolfing down cake and wearing Grouch Marx glasses]] keeps the scene far away from the original series' serious tone).
34	--> '''Kyuubey:''' Maybe it's just for my own satisfaction...
35	* EverybodyLives: [[spoiler:This is a plot-point as they go into the fight with Walpurgisnacht without losing anyone along the way. This allows them to defeat her without much difficulty.]]
36	* EvilCounterpart: Juubey (black colored Kyuubey) who acts more like what Kyuubey was like in Canon. [[spoiler:He ends up getting better.]]
37	* {{Foreshadowing}}: [[spoiler: Juubey gives hints that he has emotion as well despite initially being presented as a normal construct - exasperation, indignation, and frustration were given by him in several strips prior to his wish making Kyuubey human.]] Furthermore, [[spoiler: his motivation for helping out is that he related to Kyuubey in being isolated and ostracized for his emotions, similarly to how Mami and Homura had previously bonded and become friends over being isolated and ostracized for shyness]].
38	* HappilyEverAfter: [[spoiler: It turns out that the Incubators were experimenting with artificial emotions on Kyuubey after they were complained against for using humans. Kyubey was the experimental unit, and succeeded. Kyuubey then proceeded to remove the Soul Gems and reverted the Puella Magi from liches into humans again, Juubey [[HumanityEnsues turned Kyuubey into a human]] to live with Madoka and the others, and all Witches come BackFromTheDead without malice (or at the very least Gertrude and Charlotte).]]
39	* HiddenHeartOfGold: [[spoiler: Juubey acts nasty but has secret compassion for Kyubey.]]
40	* HonestyIsTheBestPolicy: Kyuubey certainly thinks so and that's why he is upfront about the secrets of magical girl life.
41	* HumanityEnsues: [[spoiler: Kyuubey becomes a human girl thanks to Jyuubey's wish]].
42	* LighterAndSofter: Kyuubey-trolling=happier magical girls and greater comfort.
43	* MundaneUtility: Homura uses [[spoiler: her time stop abilities]] to beat Kyouko in an eating contest.
44	* MySpeciesDothProtestTooMuch: Unlike virtually all other Incubators, Kyubey has emotions and is capable of empathy. They also make sure people know the full truth about magical girls before offering to make contracts with them.
45	* NiceGuy: Kyuubey is nice. That's the premise of the story.
46	* NiceJobBreakingItHero: When Hitomi plans to confess to Kamijou, Sayaka goes into HeroicBSOD as usual... until Kyouko tries to fix it with [[spoiler:[[LesYay a French Kiss]]. It ''backfired'' as the reason Sayaka turns into a Witch was because her first kiss was stolen by a girl, and she didn't like French Kissing.]]
47	* NotWhatItLooksLike: Junko rushes into Madoka's room, only to find Homura on top of Madoka in a compromising position. She assumes they are "playing" (her words).
48	* PassThePopcorn: When Walpurgisnacht attacks, Madoka wonders if she should become a magical girl and fight with the others. Homura passes her a cola and some popcorn and tells her to "just sit there and watch quietly".
49	--> '''Madoka:''' Yay! It's like I'm watching a movie ♪
50	* PhraseCatcher: Kyouko getting called a "fucking lesbo".
51	* PrecisionFStrike: "fucking lesbo" is one since the rest of the language in the comic is squeaky-clean.
52	** When Madoka muses that becoming a magical girl will allow Sayaka to withstand [[CovertPervert "rough-play"]], Sayaka responds that Kyouske isn't that kind of guy, followed by "Fuckin' Madoka!"
53	* QuitYourWhining: Mami and Homura make fun of Sayaka's two-panel agonizing over whether to make a contract for Kyousuke's sake: Mami calls for an ambulance while Homura holds her nose because she can't stand [[{{Wangst}} the smell]].
54	* RhetoricalQuestionBlunder: While discussing [[spoiler:Sayaka turning into a witch]]:
55	-->'''Kyouko''': Damn you... whose fault do you think this is?!
56	-->'''Mami''': Um, yours.
57	* ShipperOnDeck: Kyuubey encourages Kyoko to pursue Sayaka.
58	* SociopathicHero: When Kyuubey decided to tell a confused Kamijou to save Sayaka, Mami's solution is 'Come with us or DIE', with her gun ready.
59	* TearsOfJoy: After getting his name, Kyuubey says that the only reason he's not crying these is because he doesn't have tear ducts.
60	* TitleDrop: Pretty early on, the girls express gratitude to Kyubey.
61	* TokenGoodTeammate: Kyubey seems to be the only incubator capable of empathy for "lower life forms". [[spoiler:It turns out that this is because the higher-ups have been experimenting with artificial emotions, and he's unknowingly been their guinea pig for a while now.]]
62	* TookALevelInBadass: Hitomi turns into a MagicalGirl... with PowerFist to match and [[MemeticMutation punching tummies 3-5 times faster]].
63	* UnableToCry: Kyuubey doesn't have any tear ducts.
64	* UnsettlingGenderReveal: [[spoiler:Sayaka and Mami hoped that Human!Kyuubey would turn out to be a hot guy, only to find out that it's a girl.]]
65	* WhamLine: "...Good. [[spoiler:It looks like our experiment was a success]]."
66	* YouAreNumberSix: Kyuubey is Incubator No. T66600009 and Juubey is Incubator No. T66600010.
67	* YourPrincessIsInAnotherCastle: [[spoiler:Walpurgisnacht goes down very easily thanks to the combined efforts of the magical girls, but then Kyubey's superiors show up]].
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