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* CreepyGood: Despite being more honest, benevolent, and caring than his anime counterpart, Kyubey still sports his unsettling ThousandYardStare CatSmile face.
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* CreepyGood: Despite being more honest, benevolent, and caring than his anime counterpart, Kyubey still sports his unsettling ThousandYardStare CatSmile face.and unchanging ThousandYardStare.
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* AndThenJohnWasAZombie: [[spoiler:And then Sayaka was a witch...[[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica again.]] She gets better.]]
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* AndThenJohnWasAZombie: [[spoiler:And then Sayaka was a witch... [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica again.]] She gets better.]]
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Bokukko is now def-only
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* {{Bokukko}}: [[spoiler:Human!Kyuubey is a tomboyish girl.]]
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In this version Mami was always like that the trope is Adaptational Jerkass
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* TookALevelInJerkass: Mami is a lot more abrasive here than she is in canon.
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Incest Is Relative is an index, not a trope
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* IncestIsRelative: According to another comic by the same author and set in the same universe, [[spoiler: Homura, who seems to show at least a little interest in Madoka, is Junko's twin sister - Madoka's maternal aunt that erased herself from existence to save her twin from getting eaten by a Witch.]]
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* DiegeticSoundtrackUsage:
** Homura's ringtone is CONNECT, the anime's opening theme.
** When Walpurgisnacht attacks, a caption states: "BGM: Magia".
** Homura's ringtone is CONNECT, the anime's opening theme.
** When Walpurgisnacht attacks, a caption states: "BGM: Magia".
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* ThemeTuneCameo:
** Homura's ringtone is CONNECT, the anime's opening theme.
** When Walpurgisnacht attacks, a caption states: "BGM: Magia".
** Homura's ringtone is CONNECT, the anime's opening theme.
** When Walpurgisnacht attacks, a caption states: "BGM: Magia".
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** When Madoka muses that becoming a magical girl will allow Sayaka to withstand [[CovertPervert "rough-play"]], Sayaka responds that Kyouske isn't that kind of guy, followed by "Fuckin' Madoka!"
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* CreepyGood: Despite being more honest, benevolent, and caring than his anime counterpart, Kyubey still sports his unsettling ThousandYardStare CatSmile face.
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* AndThenJohnWasAZombie: [[spoiler:And then Sayaka was a witch...[[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica again.]]]] [[spoiler:She gets better.]]
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* AndThenJohnWasAZombie: [[spoiler:And then Sayaka was a witch...[[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica again.]]]] [[spoiler:She ]] She gets better.]]
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* AndThenJohnWasAZombie: [[spoiler:And then Sayaka was a witch...[[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica again.]] ]]
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* AndThenJohnWasAZombie: [[spoiler:And then Sayaka was a witch...[[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica again.]] ]]]] [[spoiler:She gets better.]]
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* AndThenJohnWasAZombie: And then Sayaka was a witch...[[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica again.]]
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* AndThenJohnWasAZombie: And [[spoiler:And then Sayaka was a witch...[[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica again.]] ]]
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* AndThenJohnWasAZombie: And then Sayaka was a witch...[[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica again.]]
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* EverybodyLives: [[spoiler:This is a plot-point as they go into the fight with Walpurgisnacht without lossing anyone along the way. This allows them to defeat her without much difficulty.]]
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* EverybodyLives: [[spoiler:This is a plot-point as they go into the fight with Walpurgisnacht without lossing losing anyone along the way. This allows them to defeat her without much difficulty.]]
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* RhetoricalQuestionBlunder: While discussing [[spoiler:Sayaka turning into a witch]]
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* RhetoricalQuestionBlunder: While discussing [[spoiler:Sayaka turning into a witch]]witch]]:
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: When Hitomi plans to confess to Kamijou, Sayaka goes into HeroicBSOD as usual... until Kyouko tried fixing it with [[spoiler:[[LesYay a French Kiss]]. It ''backfired'' as the reason Sayaka turns into a Witch was because her first kiss was stolen by a girl, and she didn't like French Kissing.]]
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: When Hitomi plans to confess to Kamijou, Sayaka goes into HeroicBSOD as usual... until Kyouko tried fixing tries to fix it with [[spoiler:[[LesYay a French Kiss]]. It ''backfired'' as the reason Sayaka turns into a Witch was because her first kiss was stolen by a girl, and she didn't like French Kissing.]]
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--> '''Madoka:''' Yay! It's like I'm watching a movie ♪
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--> '''Madoka:''' Yay! It's like I'm watching a movie ♪♪
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--> '''Madoka:''' Yay! It's like I'm watching a movie ♪
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--> '''Madoka:''' Yay! It's like I'm watching a movie ♪♪
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: When Hitomi plans to confess to Kamijou, Sayaka went into HeroicBSOD as usual... until Kyouko tried fixing it with [[spoiler:[[LesYay a French Kiss]]. It ''backfired'' as the reason Sayaka turns into a Witch was because her first kiss was stolen by a girl, and she didn't like French Kissing.]]
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: When Hitomi plans to confess to Kamijou, Sayaka went goes into HeroicBSOD as usual... until Kyouko tried fixing it with [[spoiler:[[LesYay a French Kiss]]. It ''backfired'' as the reason Sayaka turns into a Witch was because her first kiss was stolen by a girl, and she didn't like French Kissing.]]
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: When Hitomi plans to confess to Kamijou, Sayaka went into HeroicBSOD like usual... until Kyouko tried fixing it with [[spoiler:[[LesYay a French Kiss]]. It ''backfired'' as the reason Sayaka turns into a Witch was because her first kiss was stolen by a girl, and she didn't like French Kissing.]]
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: When Hitomi plans to confess to Kamijou, Sayaka went into HeroicBSOD like as usual... until Kyouko tried fixing it with [[spoiler:[[LesYay a French Kiss]]. It ''backfired'' as the reason Sayaka turns into a Witch was because her first kiss was stolen by a girl, and she didn't like French Kissing.]]
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* UnsettlingGenderReveal: [[spoiler:Sayaka and Mami hoped that Human!Kyuubey turned out to be a hot guy, only to find out that it's a girl.]]
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* UnsettlingGenderReveal: [[spoiler:Sayaka and Mami hoped that Human!Kyuubey turned would turn out to be a hot guy, only to find out that it's a girl.]]
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* HumanityEnsues: [[spoiler: Kyuubey becomes a human girl thanks to Jyuubey's wish]].
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* BenevolentGenie: The entire story is based on the premise that Kyuubey is a kind and caring MentorMascot.
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* AdaptationalBadass: [[spoiler:Hitomi becomes a magical girl, which she didn't in canon]].
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* AdaptationalBadass: [[spoiler:Hitomi becomes a magical girl, which she didn't in canon]].canon.]]
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* EvilCounterpart: Juubey (black colored Kyuubey) who acts more like what Kyuubey was like in Canon. [[spoiler:He ends up getting better]]
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* EvilCounterpart: Juubey (black colored Kyuubey) who acts more like what Kyuubey was like in Canon. [[spoiler:He ends up getting better]]better.]]
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* TokenGoodTeammate: Kyubey seems to be the only incubator capable of empathy for "lower life forms". [[spoiler:It turns out that this is because the higher-ups have been experimenting with artificial emotions, and he's unknowingly been their guinea pig for a while now]].
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* TokenGoodTeammate: Kyubey seems to be the only incubator capable of empathy for "lower life forms". [[spoiler:It turns out that this is because the higher-ups have been experimenting with artificial emotions, and he's unknowingly been their guinea pig for a while now]].now.]]
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* YouAreNumberSix: Kyuubey is Incubator No. T66600009 and Juubey is Incubator No. T66600010.
