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** In chapter 4, Lynn crosses it when she claims that she never loved Lincoln, wanted a sister instead of a brother, and wishes he was never born. A little muddled by the fact that she said it without thinking during a moment of anger (and after getting into a vicious fight with Lincoln). The narration does note that she feels guilt once her anger diminishes. She has a MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment in chapter 5. Though, whether or not her remorse is too little too, late is yet to decide.
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** In chapter 4, Lynn crosses it when she claims that she never loved Lincoln, wanted a sister instead of a brother, and wishes he was never born. A little muddled by the fact that she said it without thinking during a moment of anger (and after getting into a vicious fight with Lincoln). The narration does note that she feels guilt once her anger diminishes. She has a MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment in chapter 5. Though, whether or not her remorse is too little too, little, too late is yet to decide.
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* JerkassWoobie: The Loud family sans Lincoln and perhaps Lily, on the grounds that she's only a baby. Despite of all the crap they treated Lincoln, they were none too proud of themselves after experiencing a JerkassRealization.
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** In chapter 4, Lynn crosses it when she claims that she never loved Lincoln, wanted a sister instead of a brother, and wishes he was never born. A little muddled by the fact that she said it without thinking during a moment of anger (and after getting into a vicious fight with Lincoln). The narration does note that she feels guilt once her anger diminishes. She has a MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment in chapter 5. Though, whether or not her remorse is too little too, late is yet to decide.
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** Starting to be subverted in Subverted from chapters 4 and 5.5 onwards. [[spoiler: After Lincoln gives them a much needed TheReasonYouSuckSpeech and runs away after his fight with Lynn, they start to realize how bad they have behaved.]]
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* HeartwarmingMoments: While the fanfic is generally grim and dark, it still has some heartwarming moments. In chapter 5, Lincoln and Ronnie Anne [[ShipTease share a moment]]. Ronnie Anne manages to convince Lincoln to open up to her about the problems he's having with his family. She comforts him by saying [[DeclarationOfProtection she will always be there to protect him]] ([[FunnyMoments though she mentally sighs at how sappy she's sounding]]) and manages to make him stop crying. At the end of the conversation, she agrees to sleep with him, as he has troubles to sleep without Bun-bun, and he kisses her on the cheek to thank her.
** In the same chapter, it was really nice to see Bobby and Mr. and Mrs. Santiago so worried about Lincoln's state after his fight with Lynn. Bobby is even willing to ''lie to Lori about knowing where Lincoln is'' for the poor boy's sake (though he does admit to not liking it one bit).
** In the same chapter, it was really nice to see Bobby and Mr. and Mrs. Santiago so worried about Lincoln's state after his fight with Lynn. Bobby is even willing to ''lie to Lori about knowing where Lincoln is'' for the poor boy's sake (though he does admit to not liking it one bit).
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** While the fanfic is generally grim and dark, it still has some heartwarming moments. In chapter 5, Lincoln and Ronnie Anne [[ShipTease share a moment]]. Ronnie Anne manages to convince Lincoln to open up to her about the problems he's having with his family. She comforts him by saying [[DeclarationOfProtection she will always be there to protect him]] ([[FunnyMoments though she mentally sighs at how sappy she's sounding]]) and manages to make him stop crying. At the end of the conversation, she agrees to sleep with him, as he has troubles to sleep without Bun-bun, and he kisses her on the cheek to thank her.
** *** In the same chapter, it was really nice to see Bobby and Mr. and Mrs. Santiago so worried about Lincoln's state after his fight with Lynn. Bobby is even willing to ''lie to Lori about knowing where Lincoln is'' for the poor boy's sake (though he does admit to not liking it one bit).
** While the fanfic is generally grim and dark, it still has some heartwarming moments. In chapter 5, Lincoln and Ronnie Anne [[ShipTease share a moment]]. Ronnie Anne manages to convince Lincoln to open up to her about the problems he's having with his family. She comforts him by saying [[DeclarationOfProtection she will always be there to protect him]] ([[FunnyMoments though she mentally sighs at how sappy she's sounding]]) and manages to make him stop crying. At the end of the conversation, she agrees to sleep with him, as he has troubles to sleep without Bun-bun, and he kisses her on the cheek to thank her.
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* The entire Loud family was out for hours looking for Lincoln and Lynn ends up regretting her fight with her brother so much that she has a full-on NightmareSequence about [[BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor her wish about not having a brother coming true]].
** It's...a bit weird but the fact that even when he's beyond upset with them, Lincoln finds the idea of his parents going to jail and his family possibly breaking up utterly horrifying and despite the fact that he has every right to call the police on his parents (something that is starting to become a bit of a cliche for "No Such Luck" DeconstructionFic stories), he doesn't go through with it for the family's sake is heartwarming on both his part and the author's (the author has stated outright that he wanted to do a story where the Louds fixed their problems without police intervention).
** It's...a bit weird but the fact that even when he's beyond upset with them, Lincoln finds the idea of his parents going to jail and his family possibly breaking up utterly horrifying and despite the fact that he has every right to call the police on his parents (something that is starting to become a bit of a cliche for "No Such Luck" DeconstructionFic stories), he doesn't go through with it for the family's sake is heartwarming on both his part and the author's (the author has stated outright that he wanted to do a story where the Louds fixed their problems without police intervention).
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** It's...a bit weird but the fact that even when he's beyond upset with them, Lincoln finds the idea of his parents going to jail and his family possibly breaking up utterly horrifying and despite the fact that he has every right to call the police on his parents (something that is starting to become a bit of a cliche for "No Such Luck" DeconstructionFic stories), he doesn't go through with it for the family's sake is heartwarming on both his part and the author's (the author has stated outright that he wanted to do a story where the Louds fixed their problems without police intervention).
** It's...a bit weird but the fact that even when he's beyond upset with them, Lincoln finds the idea of his parents going to jail and his family possibly breaking up utterly horrifying and despite the fact that he has every right to call the police on his parents (something that is starting to become a bit of a cliche for "No Such Luck" DeconstructionFic stories), he doesn't go through with it for the family's sake is heartwarming on both his part and the author's (the author has stated outright that he wanted to do a story where the Louds fixed their problems without police intervention).
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* HarsherInHindsight: The appearance of Mr. Santiago, a decent man who appears to be a good father in this AU, becomes this when [[TheLoudHouseS2E10FedUpShellShocked Shell Shocked]] revealed that Bobby and Ronnie's father is canonically out of the picture.
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* HarsherInHindsight: The appearance of Mr. Santiago, a decent man who appears to be a good father in this AU, becomes this when [[TheLoudHouseS2E10FedUpShellShocked "[[TheLoudHouseS2E10FedUpShellShocked Shell Shocked]] Shocked]]" revealed that Bobby and Ronnie's father is canonically out of the picture.picture [[note]]Although the chapter he appears in wasn't posted until after the episode aired, it was still being written ''before'' "Shell Shocked" premiered[[/note]].
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** Lincoln's experiences at the Santiago residence, mentioned under HeartwarmingMoments, were definitely a needed change of pace from the rest of the story.
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** Downplayed, however, as the whole point of the fic is to have Lincoln finally stand up for himself after having to constantly deal with his family's behavior towards him.
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** Downplayed, however, as the whole point of the fic is to have Lincoln finally stand up for himself after having to constantly deal with his family's behavior towards him.him as well as getting the rest of the family to realize that turning someone into their DesignatedMonkey is going to have consequences.
* HarsherInHindsight: The appearance of Mr. Santiago, a decent man who appears to be a good father in this AU, becomes this when [[TheLoudHouseS2E10FedUpShellShocked Shell Shocked]] revealed that Bobby and Ronnie's father is canonically out of the picture.
* HarsherInHindsight: The appearance of Mr. Santiago, a decent man who appears to be a good father in this AU, becomes this when [[TheLoudHouseS2E10FedUpShellShocked Shell Shocked]] revealed that Bobby and Ronnie's father is canonically out of the picture.
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** In the same chapter, it was really nice to see Bobby and Mr. and Mrs. Santiago so worried about Lincoln's state after his fight with Lynn. Bobby is even willing to ''lie to Lori about knowing where Lincoln is'' for the poor boy's sake (though he does admit to not liking it one bit).
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** Between treating their son like a mere good luck charm, continuously hurting him even after things cleared up, and showing more concern towards the suit rather than Lincoln when he was ''attack by a damn alligator'', It's pretty clear The Louds' crossed this. The matter is ''when'' they crossed it.
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** Between treating their son like a mere good luck charm, continuously hurting him even after things cleared up, and showing more concern towards the suit rather than Lincoln when he was ''attack by a damn alligator'', It's it's pretty clear The Louds' Louds crossed this. The matter is ''when'' they crossed it.
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** Luna chewing out the rest of the family for the way they've been treating Lincoln (after having [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone horrified reaction]] to realizing that Lincoln doesn't have a bed anymore) before going to find her little brother was great for steam release too.
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* HeartwarmingMoments: While the fanfic is generally grim and dark, it still has some heartwarming moments. In chapter 5, Lincoln and Ronnie Anne [[ShipTease share a moment]]. Ronnie Anne manages to convince Lincoln to open up to her about the problems he's having with his family. She comforts him by saying [[DeclarationOfProtection she will always be there to protect him]] ([[FunnyMoments though she mentally sighs at how sappy she's sounding]]) and manages to make him stop crying. At the end of the conversation, she agrees to sleep with him, as he has troubles to sleep without bun-bun, and he kisses her on the cheek to thank her.
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** A personal betrayal of trust, however, comes in chapter 3, where it's revealed the parents actually ''lied'' about Lincoln's stuff having been sold away. [[spoiler:He finds it burnt in a dumpster.]]
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** Starting to be subverted in chapters 4 and 5. [[spoiler:After [[spoiler: After Lincoln gives them a much needed TheReasonYouSuckSpeech and runs away after his fight with Lynn, they start to realize how bad they have behaved.]]
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* HeartwarmingMoments: While the fanfic is generally grim and dark, it still has some heartwarming moments. In chapter 5, Lincoln and Ronnie Anne [[ShipTease share a moment]]. Ronnie Anne manages to convince Lincoln to open up to her about the problems he's having with his family. She comforts him by saying [[DeclarationOfProtection she will always be there to protect him]] ([[FunnyMoments though she mentally sighs at how sappy she's sounding]]) and manages to make him stop crying. At the end of the conversation, she agrees to sleep with him, as he has troubles to sleep without bun-bun, and he kisses her on the cheek to thank her.
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** Sarting to be subverted in chapters 4 and 5. [[spoiler:After Lincoln gives them a much needed TheReasonYouSuckSpeech and runs away after his fight with Lynn, they start to realize how bad they have behaved.]]
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** Sarting Starting to be subverted in chapters 4 and 5. [[spoiler:After Lincoln gives them a much needed TheReasonYouSuckSpeech and runs away after his fight with Lynn, they start to realize how bad they have behaved.]]
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** In chapter 4, Lynn crosses it when she claims that she never loved Lincoln, wanted a sister instead of a brother, and wishes he was never born. A little muddled by the fact that she said it without thinking during a moment of anger (and after getting into a vicious fight with Lincoln), but not by much. The narration does note that she feels guilt once her anger diminishes.
* RonTheDeathEater: '''The. Louds.''' Minus Lincoln, of course, but seriously, it's dang near ''impossible'' to see these Louds as the same Louds we've been seeing on the series.
** Special mention goes to Lynn, who seems to have gotten this treatment the worst out of all of them. In chapter 4, an argument with Lincoln turns into a vicious fight between one another, and it ends with Lincoln running away after Lynn admits that she wanted another sister instead of a brother. Even going as far as to flat-out tell Lincoln that she wishes he was ''never born'' in a moment of anger.
* RonTheDeathEater: '''The. Louds.''' Minus Lincoln, of course, but seriously, it's dang near ''impossible'' to see these Louds as the same Louds we've been seeing on the series.
** Special mention goes to Lynn, who seems to have gotten this treatment the worst out of all of them. In chapter 4, an argument with Lincoln turns into a vicious fight between one another, and it ends with Lincoln running away after Lynn admits that she wanted another sister instead of a brother. Even going as far as to flat-out tell Lincoln that she wishes he was ''never born'' in a moment of anger.
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diminishes. She has a MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment in chapter 5.
* RonTheDeathEater: '''The. Louds.''' Minus Lincoln, of course, but seriously, it's dang near ''impossible'' to see these Louds as the same Louds we've been seeing on theseries.
**series. Special mention goes to Lynn, who seems to have gotten this treatment the worst out of all of them. In chapter 4, an argument with Lincoln turns into a vicious fight between one another, and it ends with Lincoln running away after Lynn admits that she wanted another sister instead of a brother. Even going as far as to flat-out tell Lincoln that she wishes he was ''never born'' in a moment of anger.anger.
** Sarting to be subverted in chapters 4 and 5. [[spoiler:After Lincoln gives them a much needed TheReasonYouSuckSpeech and runs away after his fight with Lynn, they start to realize how bad they have behaved.]]
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** Sarting to be subverted in chapters 4 and 5. [[spoiler:After Lincoln gives them a much needed TheReasonYouSuckSpeech and runs away after his fight with Lynn, they start to realize how bad they have behaved.]]
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* TheWoobie: Lincoln, big time. All he wanted was some free-time away from the family, and what does he get in return? Being kicked out of his own home, having his furniture sold, and being forced to wear a squirrel costume in order to win back their trust. And even then, they still don't respect him as a family member.
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* TheWoobie: Lincoln, big time. All he wanted was some free-time away from the family, and what does he get in return? Being kicked out of his own home, having his furniture sold, and being forced to wear a squirrel costume in order to win back their trust. And even then, they still don't respect him as a family member.member.
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** In chapter 4, Lynn crosses it when she claims that she never loved Lincoln, wanted a sister instead of a brother, and wishes he was never born. A little muddled by the fact that she said it without thinking during a moment of anger (and after getting a vicious fight with Lincoln), but not by much. The narration does note that she feels guilt once her anger diminishes.
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** In chapter 4, Lynn crosses it when she claims that she never loved Lincoln, wanted a sister instead of a brother, and wishes he was never born. A little muddled by the fact that she said it without thinking during a moment of anger (and after getting into a vicious fight with Lincoln), but not by much. The narration does note that she feels guilt once her anger diminishes.
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** Although it didn't end well whatsoever (kinda predictably), Lincoln giving his family a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech is very satisfying to read. Especially since it adresses the DoubleStandard when it comes to deal with Lincoln's mistakes and his sisters' mistakes and it lists most of the times Lincoln was treated unfairly during "No Such Luck" and the previous episodes.
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** Although it didn't end well whatsoever (kinda predictably), Lincoln giving his family a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech is very satisfying to read. Especially since it adresses addresses the DoubleStandard when it comes to deal dealing with both Lincoln's mistakes and his sisters' mistakes and it mistakes. It also lists most of the times Lincoln was treated unfairly during "No Such Luck" and the in previous episodes.episodes as well.
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** Although it didn't end well whatsoever (kinda predictably), Lincoln giving his family a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech is very satisfying to read.
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** In chapter 4, Lynn crosses it when she claims that she never loved Lincoln, wanted a sister instead of a brother, and wishes he was never born.
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away. [[spoiler:He finds it burnt in a dumpster.]]
** In chapter 4, Lynn crosses it when she claims that she never loved Lincoln, wanted a sister instead of a brother, and wishes he was never born. A little muddled by the fact that she said it without thinking during a moment of anger (and after getting a vicious fight with Lincoln), but not by much. The narration does note that she feels guilt once her anger diminishes.
** In chapter 4, Lynn crosses it when she claims that she never loved Lincoln, wanted a sister instead of a brother, and wishes he was never born. A little muddled by the fact that she said it without thinking during a moment of anger (and after getting a vicious fight with Lincoln), but not by much. The narration does note that she feels guilt once her anger diminishes.
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* CatharsisFactor: Admit it, when Ronnie Anne yelled at Lola to apologize to Lincoln and later ''busts Lynn's arm'', you were cheering in delight.
* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: What else do you expect from a fanfic based on a Lincoln TorturePorn? Unless you can stomach him being constantly treated unfairly and sometimes beaten up (which, to be fair, you'd need to be able to do to watch the show sometimes anyway), you might as well avoid this fic. Downplayed, however, as the whole point of the fic is to have Lincoln finally stand up for himself after having to constantly deal with his family's behavior towards him.
* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: What else do you expect from a fanfic based on a Lincoln TorturePorn? Unless you can stomach him being constantly treated unfairly and sometimes beaten up (which, to be fair, you'd need to be able to do to watch the show sometimes anyway), you might as well avoid this fic. Downplayed, however, as the whole point of the fic is to have Lincoln finally stand up for himself after having to constantly deal with his family's behavior towards him.
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** Admit it, when Ronnie Anne yelled at Lola to apologize to Lincoln and later ''busts Lynn's arm'', you were cheering in delight.
** Although it didn't end well whatsoever (kinda predictably), Lincoln giving his family a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech is very satisfying to read.
* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: What else do you expect from a fanfic based on a Lincoln TorturePorn? Unless you can stomach him being constantly treated unfairly and sometimes beaten up (which, to be fair, you'd need to be able to do to watch the show sometimes anyway), you might as well avoid this fic. Even ''Fanfic/{{Syngenesophobia}}'', which is about Lincoln getting hospitalized after his sisters gave him a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown, manages to avert this trope.
** Downplayed, however, as the whole point of the fic is to have Lincoln finally stand up for himself after having to constantly deal with his family's behavior towards him.
** Admit it, when Ronnie Anne yelled at Lola to apologize to Lincoln and later ''busts Lynn's arm'', you were cheering in delight.
** Although it didn't end well whatsoever (kinda predictably), Lincoln giving his family a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech is very satisfying to read.
* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: What else do you expect from a fanfic based on a Lincoln TorturePorn? Unless you can stomach him being constantly treated unfairly and sometimes beaten up (which, to be fair, you'd need to be able to do to watch the show sometimes anyway), you might as well avoid this fic. Even ''Fanfic/{{Syngenesophobia}}'', which is about Lincoln getting hospitalized after his sisters gave him a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown, manages to avert this trope.
** Downplayed, however, as the whole point of the fic is to have Lincoln finally stand up for himself after having to constantly deal with his family's behavior towards him.
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** In chapter 4, Lynn crosses it when she claims that she never loved Lincoln, wanted a sister instead of a brother, and wishes he was never born.
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** Special mention goes to Lynn, who seems to have gotten this treatment the worst out of all of them. In chapter 4, an argument with Lincoln turns into a vicious fight between one another, and it ends with Lincoln running away after Lynn admits that she wanted another sister instead of a brother. Even going as far as to flat-out tell Lincoln that she wishes he was ''never born''.
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* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: What else do you expect from a fanfic based on a Lincoln TorturePorn? Unless you can stomach him being constantly beaten up (which, to be fair, you'd need to be able to do to watch the show sometimes anyway), you might as well avoid this fic. Downplayed, however, as the whole point of the fic is to have Lincoln finally stand up for himself after having to constantly deal with his family's behavior towards him.
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* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: What else do you expect from a fanfic based on a Lincoln TorturePorn? Unless you can stomach him being constantly treated unfairly and sometimes beaten up (which, to be fair, you'd need to be able to do to watch the show sometimes anyway), you might as well avoid this fic. Downplayed, however, as the whole point of the fic is to have Lincoln finally stand up for himself after having to constantly deal with his family's behavior towards him.
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* RonTheDeathEater: '''The. Louds.''' Minus Lincoln, of course, but seriously, it's dang near ''impossible'' to see these Louds as the same Louds we've been seen on the series.
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* RonTheDeathEater: '''The. Louds.''' Minus Lincoln, of course, but seriously, it's dang near ''impossible'' to see these Louds as the same Louds we've been seen seeing on the series.
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* MoralEventHorizon: Between treating their son like a mere good luck charm, continuously hurting him even after things cleared up, and showing more concern towards the suit rather than Lincoln when he was ''attack by a damn alligator'', It's pretty clear The Louds' crossed this. The matter is ''when'' they crossed it.
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** Between treating their son like a mere good luck charm, continuously hurting him even after things cleared up, and showing more concern towards the suit rather than Lincoln when he was ''attack by a damn alligator'', It's pretty clear The Louds' crossed this. The matter is ''when'' they crossed it.
** Between treating their son like a mere good luck charm, continuously hurting him even after things cleared up, and showing more concern towards the suit rather than Lincoln when he was ''attack by a damn alligator'', It's pretty clear The Louds' crossed this. The matter is ''when'' they crossed it.
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** Again, that was the point so Lincoln could have a good reason to stand up for himself.
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That's kind of the point actually. The story exaggerates their negative traits so Lincoln could have a good reason for when he finally stands up to them.
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* CanonDefilement: The Loud family minus Lincoln, BIG TIME. While in the show, they could be negligent, and in the case of the sisters big bullies, it was still clear that they loved each other. The Loud parents and sisters in this fic, however, are so horrible in their treatment to Lincoln they don't even feel like the same Louds from before.
* CatharsisFactor: Admit it, when Ronnie Anne ''busts Lynn's arm'', you were cheering in delight.
* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: What else do you expect from a fanfic based on a Lincoln Torture Porn? Unless you can stomach him being constantly beaten up (Which, to be fair, you'd need to be able to do to watch the show sometimes anyway), you might as well avoid this fic.
* MoralEventHorizon: Between treating their son like a mere good luck charm, continuously hurting him even after things cleared up, and showing more concern towards the suit rather than Lincoln when he was ''attack by a damn alligator'', It's pretty clear The Louds crossed this. The matter is ''when'' they crossed it.
* CatharsisFactor: Admit it, when Ronnie Anne ''busts Lynn's arm'', you were cheering in delight.
* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: What else do you expect from a fanfic based on a Lincoln Torture Porn? Unless you can stomach him being constantly beaten up (Which, to be fair, you'd need to be able to do to watch the show sometimes anyway), you might as well avoid this fic.
* MoralEventHorizon: Between treating their son like a mere good luck charm, continuously hurting him even after things cleared up, and showing more concern towards the suit rather than Lincoln when he was ''attack by a damn alligator'', It's pretty clear The Louds crossed this. The matter is ''when'' they crossed it.
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* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: What else do you expect from a fanfic based on a Lincoln
* MoralEventHorizon: Between treating their son like a mere good luck charm, continuously hurting him even after things cleared up, and showing more concern towards the suit rather than Lincoln when he was ''attack by a damn alligator'', It's pretty clear The
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** Again, that was the point so Lincoln could have a good reason to stand up for himself.
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* CanonDefilement: The Loud family minus Lincoln, BIG TIME. While in the show, they could be negligent, and in the case of the sisters big bullies, it was still clear that they loved each other. The Loud parents and sisters in this fic, however, are so horrible in their treatment to Lincoln they don't even feel like the same Louds from before.
* CatharsisFactor: Admit it, when Ronnie Anne ''busts Lynn's arm'', you were cheering in delight.
* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: What else do you expect from a fanfic based on a Lincoln Torture Porn? Unless you can stomach him being constantly beaten up (Which, to be fair, you'd need to be able to do to watch the show sometimes anyway), you might as well avoid this fic.
* MoralEventHorizon: Between treating their son like a mere good luck charm, continuously hurting him even after things cleared up, and showing more concern towards the suit rather than Lincoln when he was ''attack by a damn alligator'', It's pretty clear The Louds crossed this. The matter is ''when'' they crossed it.
** A personal betrayal of trust, however, comes in chapter 3, where it's revealed the parents actually ''lied'' about Lincoln's stuff having been sold away.
* RonTheDeathEater: '''The. Louds.''' Minus Lincoln, of course, but seriously, it's dang near ''impossible'' to see these Louds as the same Louds we've been seen on the series.
* CatharsisFactor: Admit it, when Ronnie Anne ''busts Lynn's arm'', you were cheering in delight.
* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: What else do you expect from a fanfic based on a Lincoln Torture Porn? Unless you can stomach him being constantly beaten up (Which, to be fair, you'd need to be able to do to watch the show sometimes anyway), you might as well avoid this fic.
* MoralEventHorizon: Between treating their son like a mere good luck charm, continuously hurting him even after things cleared up, and showing more concern towards the suit rather than Lincoln when he was ''attack by a damn alligator'', It's pretty clear The Louds crossed this. The matter is ''when'' they crossed it.
** A personal betrayal of trust, however, comes in chapter 3, where it's revealed the parents actually ''lied'' about Lincoln's stuff having been sold away.
* RonTheDeathEater: '''The. Louds.''' Minus Lincoln, of course, but seriously, it's dang near ''impossible'' to see these Louds as the same Louds we've been seen on the series.
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* TheWoobie: Lincoln, big time. All he wanted was some free-time away from the family, and what does he get in return? Being kicked out of his own home, having his furniture sold, and being forced to wear a squirrel costume in order to win back their trust. And even then, they still don't respect him as a family member.