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* {{Adorkable}}:
** Takuma, in spite of his appearance. He is timid, socially awkward and a ShrinkingViolet. His tendency to shrink into SuperDeformed style also makes him look very cuddly.
** Mutsumi too. Like Takuma, she is shy and has trouble speaking her mind (through she is far from the same level of social anxiety he has), which ramps up her cuteness.
** Takuma, in spite of his appearance. He is timid, socially awkward and a ShrinkingViolet. His tendency to shrink into SuperDeformed style also makes him look very cuddly.
** Mutsumi too. Like Takuma, she is shy and has trouble speaking her mind (through she is far from the same level of social anxiety he has), which ramps up her cuteness.
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* TheWoobie: Takuma. Ever since he was a small kid everyone judged him for his scary appearance and he ended up isolated in society. His mother, the only person who ever treated him right, became ill and ultimately died, leaving Takuma alone in a world that wanted nothing to do with him. By the time the series starts, he has pretty much resigned himself to living a solitary life and given up on making friends.
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* TheWoobie: Takuma. Ever since he was a small kid everyone judged him for his scary appearance and he ended up isolated in society. His mother, the only person who ever treated him right, became ill and ultimately died, leaving Takuma alone in a world that wanted nothing to do with him. By the time the series starts, he has pretty much resigned himself to living a solitary life and given up on making friends.friends.
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* GrowingTheBeard: Happens during the School Festival mini-arc. Until this point, the series had been a formulaic member of the HaremGenre that produced {{Fanservice}} through clichéd AccidentalPervert situations and only had short battle for the sake of showing off the girls. Then during the School Festival, we get for the first time a battle that lasts more than one chapter and has several Valkyries fighting at the same time in unfavorable conditions, bringing some genuine tension and hints of a larger plot being developed. The main character also gets some much needed CharacterDevelopment, and the {{Fanservice}} is taken up a notch.
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* GrowingTheBeard: Happens during SlowPacedBeginning: For the School Festival mini-arc. Until this point, first few chapters, the series had been is mostly a formulaic member of the HaremGenre that produced produces {{Fanservice}} through clichéd AccidentalPervert situations and only had short battle for the sake of showing off the girls. powers of the girls and explaining the LevelUpAtIntimacy5 mechanics. Then during the School Festival, Festival mini-arc we get for the first time a battle that lasts more than one chapter and has several Valkyries fighting at the same time in unfavorable conditions, bringing some genuine tension and while hints of a larger plot being developed. developed are dropped. The main character also gets some much needed CharacterDevelopment, CharacterDevelopment for the first time, and the {{Fanservice}} is taken up a notch.
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* FetishRetardant: During some of the {{Fanservice}} scenes the breasts of the girls seem to spontaneously grow bigger from one panel to another. Whether the author does it on purpose or not is anyone's guess, but it becomes very silly if not downright funny when you notice it.
* GrowingTheBeard: Happens during the School Festival mini-arc. Until this point, the series had been a formulaic member of the HaremGenre that produced {{Fanservice}} through clichéd AccidentalPervert situations and only had short battle for the sake of showing off the girls. Then during the School Festival, we get for the first time a battle that lasts more than one chapter and has several Valkyries fighting at the same time in unfavorable conditions, bringing some genuine tension to the series. The main character also gets some much needed CharacterDevelopment, and the {{Fanservice}} is taken up a notch.
* GrowingTheBeard: Happens during the School Festival mini-arc. Until this point, the series had been a formulaic member of the HaremGenre that produced {{Fanservice}} through clichéd AccidentalPervert situations and only had short battle for the sake of showing off the girls. Then during the School Festival, we get for the first time a battle that lasts more than one chapter and has several Valkyries fighting at the same time in unfavorable conditions, bringing some genuine tension to the series. The main character also gets some much needed CharacterDevelopment, and the {{Fanservice}} is taken up a notch.
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* FetishRetardant: During some of the {{Fanservice}} scenes in the manga the breasts of the girls seem to spontaneously grow bigger from one panel to another. Whether the author does it on purpose or not is anyone's guess, but it becomes very silly if not downright funny when you notice it.
* GrowingTheBeard: Happens during the School Festival mini-arc. Until this point, the series had been a formulaic member of the HaremGenre that produced {{Fanservice}} through clichéd AccidentalPervert situations and only had short battle for the sake of showing off the girls. Then during the School Festival, we get for the first time a battle that lasts more than one chapter and has several Valkyries fighting at the same time in unfavorable conditions, bringing some genuine tensionto the series. and hints of a larger plot being developed. The main character also gets some much needed CharacterDevelopment, and the {{Fanservice}} is taken up a notch.notch.
* ValuesDissonance: Yakumo, the middle-school aged ShamelessFanserviceGirl, is not a character that would be allowed to exist in many countries outside of Japan.
* GrowingTheBeard: Happens during the School Festival mini-arc. Until this point, the series had been a formulaic member of the HaremGenre that produced {{Fanservice}} through clichéd AccidentalPervert situations and only had short battle for the sake of showing off the girls. Then during the School Festival, we get for the first time a battle that lasts more than one chapter and has several Valkyries fighting at the same time in unfavorable conditions, bringing some genuine tension
* ValuesDissonance: Yakumo, the middle-school aged ShamelessFanserviceGirl, is not a character that would be allowed to exist in many countries outside of Japan.
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* FetishRetardant: During some of the {{Fanservice}} scenes the breasts of the girls seem to spontaneously grow bigger from one panel to another. Whether the author does it on purpose or not is anyone's guess, but it becomes very silly if not downright funny when you notice it.
* GrowingTheBeard: Happens during the School Festival mini-arc. Until this point, the series had been a formulaic member of the HaremGenre that produced {{Fanservice}} through clichéd AccidentalPervert situations and only had short battle for the sake of showing off the girls. Then during the School Festival, we get for the first time a battle that lasts more than one chapter and has several Valkyries fighting at the same time in unfavorable conditions, bringing some genuine tension to the series. The main character also gets some much needed CharacterDevelopment, and the {{Fanservice}} is taken up a notch.
* TheWoobie: Takuma. Ever since he was a small kid everyone judged him for his scary appearance and he ended up isolated in society. His mother, the only person who ever treated him right, became ill and ultimately died, leaving Takuma alone in a world that wanted nothing to do with him. By the time the series starts, he has pretty much resigned himself to living a solitary life and given up on making friends.
* GrowingTheBeard: Happens during the School Festival mini-arc. Until this point, the series had been a formulaic member of the HaremGenre that produced {{Fanservice}} through clichéd AccidentalPervert situations and only had short battle for the sake of showing off the girls. Then during the School Festival, we get for the first time a battle that lasts more than one chapter and has several Valkyries fighting at the same time in unfavorable conditions, bringing some genuine tension to the series. The main character also gets some much needed CharacterDevelopment, and the {{Fanservice}} is taken up a notch.
* TheWoobie: Takuma. Ever since he was a small kid everyone judged him for his scary appearance and he ended up isolated in society. His mother, the only person who ever treated him right, became ill and ultimately died, leaving Takuma alone in a world that wanted nothing to do with him. By the time the series starts, he has pretty much resigned himself to living a solitary life and given up on making friends.
