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* {{Narm}}: ''What We Become'' has a passage where the Librarian explains the concept of cake mix to Aaron as an example of how marketers control minds, saying that at first it sold terribly--until they discovered how to make it sell. Aaron is thunderstruck when the Librarian reveals that they changed the recipe from powdered eggs to adding an egg yourself.
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** [[spoiler: Remak's sacrifice to save Mal]], and [[spoiler: Mal's sacrifice to save Laura]].
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* MomentOfAwesome: [[Awesome/ThoseThatWake Has its own page]].
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** Mal and Remak's fight in the first book.
** In the sequel Mal climbs down a building, grievously wounded, while fighting off highly trained government agents he couldn't take in a straight fight.
** In the sequel, [[spoiler: Rose]] saving Aaron from Castillo.
** [[spoiler: Mal's]] final defeat of the Old Man and sacrifice to save Laura.
** Mal and Remak's fight in the first book.
** In the sequel Mal climbs down a building, grievously wounded, while fighting off highly trained government agents he couldn't take in a straight fight.
** In the sequel, [[spoiler: Rose]] saving Aaron from Castillo.
** [[spoiler: Mal's]] final defeat of the Old Man and sacrifice to save Laura.
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** The descriptions of those corrupted by hopelessness; they have dull, vacant eyes.
** The advance reading copy has a line deleted from the retail copy where Mal reflects on how, in his dream, if the force at the door had just knocked he might have let it in.
** Man in Suit's lectures to the heroes at the end, which even terrify the characters.
-->"In this building, you are deep inside me," Man in Suit said, "and I am deep inside you. I can see what you think, own you a little bit, even if I can not have you completely. Yet."
** ''What We Become'' ramps up the terror factor with [[spoiler: The Old Man's ability to control people, and his plan being to simply kill those he can't control]].
** ''What We Become'' also has Rose, who takes ClingyJealousGirl to horrifying levels when she tries to [[spoiler: replace Mal's memories of Laura with herself]].
** What happens to Laura in ''What We Become''; she seemingly has her old life back, with no memories of the events or people from ''Those That Wake''. [[spoiler: And then it turns out that Remak and Mal robbed her of them, mistakenly believing it was for her best interests]]. She outright compares it to MindRape.
** Everything about Man in Suit, especially what he's made of and what he can do to people.
** The descriptions of those corrupted by hopelessness; they have dull, vacant eyes.
** The advance reading copy has a line deleted from the retail copy where Mal reflects on how, in his dream, if the force at the door had just knocked he might have let it in.
** Man in Suit's lectures to the heroes at the end, which even terrify the characters.
-->"In this building, you are deep inside me," Man in Suit said, "and I am deep inside you. I can see what you think, own you a little bit, even if I can not have you completely. Yet."
** ''What We Become'' ramps up the terror factor with [[spoiler: The Old Man's ability to control people, and his plan being to simply kill those he can't control]].
** ''What We Become'' also has Rose, who takes ClingyJealousGirl to horrifying levels when she tries to [[spoiler: replace Mal's memories of Laura with herself]].
** What happens to Laura in ''What We Become''; she seemingly has her old life back, with no memories of the events or people from ''Those That Wake''. [[spoiler: And then it turns out that Remak and Mal robbed her of them, mistakenly believing it was for her best interests]]. She outright compares it to MindRape.
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* NightmareFuel: ''Everyone'' forgetting you. Doubles as ParanoiaFuel.
** Everything about Man in Suit, especially what he's made of and what he can do to people.
** The descriptions of those corrupted by hopelessness; they have dull, vacant eyes.
** The advance reading copy has a line deleted from the retail copy where Mal reflects on how, in his dream, if the force at the door had just knocked he might have let it in.
** Man in Suit's lectures to the heroes at the end, which even terrify the characters.
-->"In this building, you are deep inside me," Man in Suit said, "and I am deep inside you. I can see what you think,[[NightmareFuel/ThoseThatWake Has its own you a little bit, even if I can not have you completely. Yet."
** ''What We Become'' ramps up the terror factor with [[spoiler: The Old Man's ability to control people, and his plan being to simply kill those he can't control]].
** ''What We Become'' also has Rose, who takes ClingyJealousGirl to horrifying levels when she tries to [[spoiler: replace Mal's memories of Laura with herself]].
** What happens to Laura in ''What We Become''; she seemingly has her old life back, with no memories of the events or people from ''Those That Wake''. [[spoiler: And then it turns out that Remak and Mal robbed her of them, mistakenly believing it was for her best interests]]. She outright compares it to MindRape.page]].
** Everything about Man in Suit, especially what he's made of and what he can do to people.
** The descriptions of those corrupted by hopelessness; they have dull, vacant eyes.
** The advance reading copy has a line deleted from the retail copy where Mal reflects on how, in his dream, if the force at the door had just knocked he might have let it in.
** Man in Suit's lectures to the heroes at the end, which even terrify the characters.
-->"In this building, you are deep inside me," Man in Suit said, "and I am deep inside you. I can see what you think,
** ''What We Become'' ramps up the terror factor with [[spoiler: The Old Man's ability to control people, and his plan being to simply kill those he can't control]].
** ''What We Become'' also has Rose, who takes ClingyJealousGirl to horrifying levels when she tries to [[spoiler: replace Mal's memories of Laura with herself]].
** What happens to Laura in ''What We Become''; she seemingly has her old life back, with no memories of the events or people from ''Those That Wake''. [[spoiler: And then it turns out that Remak and Mal robbed her of them, mistakenly believing it was for her best interests]]. She outright compares it to MindRape.
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** ''What We Become'' also has Rose, who takes ClingyJealousGirl to horrifying levels when she considers [[spoiler: replacing Mal's memories of Laura with herself]].
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** In the sequel Mal climbs down a building, grievously wounded, while fighting off highly trained government agents he couldn't take in a straight fight.
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** Mal and Remak's fight in the first book.
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** [[spoiler: Remak's sacrifice to save Mal]], and [[spoiler: Mal's sacrifice to save Laura]].
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** ''What We Become'' has [[spoiler: Mal and Laura's reunion]], as well as her horror at [[spoiler: her memory modifications]].
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** ''What We Become'' has [[spoiler: Mal and Laura's reunion]], as well as her horror at [[spoiler: her memory modifications]].modifications]].
** ''What We Become'' also has Laura and Mal's conversation before the climax, and Mal's admittance that [[spoiler: Laura was his only source of hope for ''anything'' in the world, and even happiness was a foreign emotion to him except when near her]].
** ''What We Become'' also has Laura and Mal's conversation before the climax, and Mal's admittance that [[spoiler: Laura was his only source of hope for ''anything'' in the world, and even happiness was a foreign emotion to him except when near her]].
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** ''What We Become'' ramps up the terror factor with [[spoiler: The Old Man's ability to control people, and his plan being to simply kill those he can't control]].
** ''What We Become'' also has Rose, who takes ClingyJealousGirl to horrifying levels when she considers [[spoiler: replacing Mal's memories of Laura with herself]].
** What happens to Laura in ''What We Become''; she seemingly has her old life back, with no memories of the events or people from ''Those That Wake''. [[spoiler: And then it turns out that Remak and Mal robbed her of them, mistakenly believing it was for her best interests]]. She outright compares it to MindRape.
** ''What We Become'' also has Rose, who takes ClingyJealousGirl to horrifying levels when she considers [[spoiler: replacing Mal's memories of Laura with herself]].
** What happens to Laura in ''What We Become''; she seemingly has her old life back, with no memories of the events or people from ''Those That Wake''. [[spoiler: And then it turns out that Remak and Mal robbed her of them, mistakenly believing it was for her best interests]]. She outright compares it to MindRape.
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** ''What We Become'' has [[spoiler: Mal and Laura's reunion]], as well as her horror at [[spoiler: her memory modifications]].
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-->"In this building, you are deep inside me," Man in Suit said, "and I am deep inside you. I can see what you think, own you a little bit, even if I can not have you completely. Yet."
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** Everything about the man Man in the suit, Suit, especially what he's made of and what he can do to people.
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* TearJerker: Mike telling Laura that [[spoiler: to make her parents hopeless, Man in Suit took away the one thing they couldn't live without: Her.]] She herself starts crying when he explains it.it.
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* MomentOfAwesome: [[spoiler: Mike]] defeating Man in Suit and saving Tommy and Annie.
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* NightmareFuel: Everyone ''Everyone'' forgetting you. Doubles as ParanoiaFuel.
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* TearJerker: Man in Suit Mike telling Laura that [[spoiler: to make her parents hopeless he hopeless, Man in Suit took away the one thing they couldn't live without: Her.]] She herself starts crying when he explains it.
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* TearJerker: Man in Suit telling Laura that [[spoiler: to make her parents hopeless he took away the one thing they couldn't live without: Her.]]]] She herself starts crying when he explains it.
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** Everything about the man in the suit, especially what he does.does.
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* TearJerker: Man in Suit telling Laura that [[spoiler: to make her parents hopeless he took the one thing they couldn't live without: Her.]]
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* NightmareFuel: Everyone forgetting you. Doubles as ParanoiaFuel.ParanoiaFuel.
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* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: NightmareFuel: Everyone forgetting you. Doubles as ParanoiaFuel.
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