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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: Neil's visits to the Puritan era and TheWildWest are contrived, pointless, and go nowhere. They also make him look like a massive idiot because when he loses access to his Time Machine in 802701, that's now ''the third time in a row that's happened to him''. Not to mention, it adds in the PlotHole about why he ended up in two different locations.locations.
* BrokenAesop: Inventing weapons is bad. The Eloi using those same weapons to defeat the Morlocks is good.
* BrokenAesop: Inventing weapons is bad. The Eloi using those same weapons to defeat the Morlocks is good.
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: Neil's visits to the Puritan era and TheWildWest are contrived, pointless, and go nowhere. They also make him look like a massive idiot because when he loses access to his Time Machine in 802701, that's now ''the third time in a row that's happened to him''. Not to mention, it adds in the PlotHole about why he ended up in two different locations.
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: Neil's visits to the Puritan era and TheWildWest are contrived, pointless, and go nowhere. They also make him look like a massive idiot because when he loses access to his Time Machine in 802701, it's that's now ''the third time in a row that's happened to him''.
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: Neil's visits to the Puritan era and TheWildWest are contrived, pointless, and go nowhere. It They also makes make him look like a massive idiot because when he loses access to his Time Machine in 802701, it's now ''the third time in a row that's happened to him''.
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: Neil's visits to the Puritan era and TheWildWest are contrived, pointless, and go nowhere. It also makes him look like a massive idiot because when he loses access to his Time Machine in 802701, it's now ''the third time in a row that's happened to him''.
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: Neil's visits to the Puritan era and TheWildWest are entirely pointless and go nowhere.
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