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* FoeYay: During her first attempt to make Seth share the map, Camilla grabs his tie and pulls his face down close to hers. [[LampshadeHanging He points out what it looks like]] in his usual smug and condescending way and [[InvokedTrope even encourages her to kiss him.]] [[DefiedTrope She slaps him instead]].
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* CounterpartComparison: A fan [[http://cotton-flurry.tumblr.com/post/166866280311/recommendations-hope-tumblr-doesnt-eat-this recommends it]] (amongst other adventures) as '''[[Webcomic/AlabasterTheDoomedSession Alabaster]]'' and ''WebComic/{{Chiasmata}}'' combined'. It supposedly has the OntologicalMystery and deep lore ''WebComic/{{Chiasmata}}'' has, and the rough style, eeriness and surreality of ''[[Webcomic/AlabasterTheDoomedSession Alabaster]]''.
** Also to ''Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica''. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] in that that was one of the main inspirations behind it.
** Also to ''Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica''. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] in that that was one of the main inspirations behind it.
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: Admit it, you cheered a little on the inside when Camilla slapped Seth too.
** The part where she [[spoiler: prepares to pull a YouShallNotPass moment on Seth??? probably deserves a mention here as well.]]
** The part where she [[spoiler: prepares to pull a YouShallNotPass moment on Seth??? probably deserves a mention here as well.]]
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* CrowningMomentOfHeartWarming: The flashback showing how [[MeetCute Daniel and Kate met]], it ends with her giving him a YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre speech after witnessing him being bullied by his MeanBoss. The poor guy probably wasn't shown kindness like that often.
** As Heartwrenching as the scene where [[spoiler: Cancel has a collar attached to Daniel designed to simulate drowning (something he has past trauma from) the reactions of some the other characters are pretty sweet. Especially [[TheStoic Camilla]] of all people being one of the first to go comfort him when it's over.]]
-->Camilla: It will be okay.
-->Camilla: It's fine to cry.
** As Heartwrenching as the scene where [[spoiler: Cancel has a collar attached to Daniel designed to simulate drowning (something he has past trauma from) the reactions of some the other characters are pretty sweet. Especially [[TheStoic Camilla]] of all people being one of the first to go comfort him when it's over.]]
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** As Heartwrenching as the scene where [[spoiler: Cancel has a collar attached to Daniel designed to simulate drowning (something he has past trauma from) the reactions of some the other characters are pretty sweet. Especially [[TheStoic Camilla]] of all people being one of the first to go comfort him when it's over.]]
-->Camilla: It will be okay.\\
Camilla: It's fine to cry.
** As Heartwrenching as the scene where [[spoiler: Cancel has a collar attached to Daniel designed to simulate drowning (something he has past trauma from) the reactions of some the other characters are pretty sweet. Especially [[TheStoic Camilla]] of all people being one of the first to go comfort him when it's over.]]
-->Camilla: It will be okay.\\
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* SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome: Admit it, you cheered a little on the inside when Camilla slapped Seth too.
** The part where she [[spoiler: prepares to pull a YouShallNotPass moment on Seth??? probably deserves a mention here as well.]]
** The part where she [[spoiler: prepares to pull a YouShallNotPass moment on Seth??? probably deserves a mention here as well.]]
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* NightmareFuel: [[spoiler: Seth?'s neck twisting and the black arms ripping out of his chest is certainly nightmare worthy]].
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** Also to ''[[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica]]''.''Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica''. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] in that that was one of the main inspirations behind it.
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* FoeYay: During her first attempt to make Seth share the map, Camilla grabs his tie and pulls his face down close to hers. [[LampshadeHanging He points out what it looks like]] in his usual smug and condescending way and [[InvokedTrope even encourages her to kiss him.]] She slaps him instead.
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* FoeYay: During her first attempt to make Seth share the map, Camilla grabs his tie and pulls his face down close to hers. [[LampshadeHanging He points out what it looks like]] in his usual smug and condescending way and [[InvokedTrope even encourages her to kiss him.]] [[DefiedTrope She slaps him instead.instead]].
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* OhAndXWillDie: [[http://krahie.zynima.net/post/174991402341 Here]].
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* CounterpartComparison: A fan [[http://cotton-flurry.tumblr.com/post/166866280311/recommendations-hope-tumblr-doesnt-eat-this recommends it]] (amongst other adventures) as '''[[Webcomic/AlabasterTheDoomedSession Alabaster]]'' and ''WebComic/{{Chiasmata}}'' combined'. It supposedly has the OntologicalMystery and deep lore ''WebComic/{{Chiasmata}}'' has, and the eeriness and surreality of ''[[Webcomic/AlabasterTheDoomedSession Alabaster]]''
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* CounterpartComparison: A fan [[http://cotton-flurry.tumblr.com/post/166866280311/recommendations-hope-tumblr-doesnt-eat-this recommends it]] (amongst other adventures) as '''[[Webcomic/AlabasterTheDoomedSession Alabaster]]'' and ''WebComic/{{Chiasmata}}'' combined'. It supposedly has the OntologicalMystery and deep lore ''WebComic/{{Chiasmata}}'' has, and the rough style, eeriness and surreality of ''[[Webcomic/AlabasterTheDoomedSession Alabaster]]''Alabaster]]''.
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* CounterpartComparison: A fan [[http://cotton-flurry.tumblr.com/post/166866280311/recommendations-hope-tumblr-doesnt-eat-this recommends it]] (amongst other adventures) as ' ''[[Webcomic/AlabasterTheDoomedSession Alabaster]]'' and ''WebComic/{{Chiasmata}}'' combined'. It supposedly has the OntologicalMystery and deep lore ''WebComic/{{Chiasmata}}'' has, and the eeriness and surreality of ''[[Webcomic/AlabasterTheDoomedSession Alabaster]]''
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* CounterpartComparison: A fan [[http://cotton-flurry.tumblr.com/post/166866280311/recommendations-hope-tumblr-doesnt-eat-this recommends it]] (amongst other adventures) as ' ''[[Webcomic/AlabasterTheDoomedSession '''[[Webcomic/AlabasterTheDoomedSession Alabaster]]'' and ''WebComic/{{Chiasmata}}'' combined'. It supposedly has the OntologicalMystery and deep lore ''WebComic/{{Chiasmata}}'' has, and the eeriness and surreality of ''[[Webcomic/AlabasterTheDoomedSession Alabaster]]''
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* CounterpartComparison: A fan [[http://cotton-flurry.tumblr.com/post/166866280311/recommendations-hope-tumblr-doesnt-eat-this recommends it]] (amongst other adventures) as ' ''[[Webcomic/AlabasterTheDoomedSession Alabaster]]'' and ''WebComic/{{Chiasmata}}'' combined'. It supposedly has the OntologicalMystery and deep lore ''WebComic/{{Chiasmata}}'' has, and the eeriness and surreality of ''[[Webcomic/AlabasterTheDoomedSession Alabaster]]''
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* FriendlyFandoms: With {{Webcomic/Chiasmata}}, the Geneverse even an Expy/alternate universe version of Seth called [[http://k25ff.tumblr.com/tagged/Satyrid Satyrid]] in it, who, naturally is just as much of a jerk as the original. They even [[http://thehappinessmachine.tumblr.com/post/142069751463/an-announcement-re-the-human-game had]] [[http://k25ff.tumblr.com/post/142069755717/creative-project-related-announcement eachothers]] webcomic as an April Fools'!
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* FriendlyFandoms: With {{Webcomic/Chiasmata}}, the Geneverse even an Expy/alternate universe version of Seth called [[http://k25ff.tumblr.com/tagged/Satyrid Satyrid]] in it, who, naturally is just as much of a jerk as the original. They even [[http://thehappinessmachine.tumblr.com/post/142069751463/an-announcement-re-the-human-game had]] [[http://k25ff.tumblr.com/post/142069755717/creative-project-related-announcement eachothers]] webcomic as an April Fools'!Fools!
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* EnsembleDarkhorse: [[TheStoic Camilla Lloyd]]
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* FriendlyFandoms: With {{Webcomic/Chiasmata}}, the Geneverse even an Expy/alternate universe version of Seth called [[http://k25ff.tumblr.com/tagged/Satyrid Satyrid]] in it, who, naturally is just as much of a jerk as the original.
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* EnsembleDarkhorse: [[TheStoic Camilla Lloyd]]
Lloyd]].
* FriendlyFandoms: With {{Webcomic/Chiasmata}}, the Geneverse even an Expy/alternate universe version of Seth called [[http://k25ff.tumblr.com/tagged/Satyrid Satyrid]] in it, who, naturally is just as much of a jerk as the original. They even [[http://thehappinessmachine.tumblr.com/post/142069751463/an-announcement-re-the-human-game had]] [[http://k25ff.tumblr.com/post/142069755717/creative-project-related-announcement eachothers]] webcomic as an April Fools'!
** [[http://thehumangamemspa.tumblr.com/post/61700962562/k25ff-look-at-all-those-adorable-murderstuck This is what the protagonists would be if they got stuck in the Location]].
* FriendlyFandoms: With {{Webcomic/Chiasmata}}, the Geneverse even an Expy/alternate universe version of Seth called [[http://k25ff.tumblr.com/tagged/Satyrid Satyrid]] in it, who, naturally is just as much of a jerk as the original. They even [[http://thehappinessmachine.tumblr.com/post/142069751463/an-announcement-re-the-human-game had]] [[http://k25ff.tumblr.com/post/142069755717/creative-project-related-announcement eachothers]] webcomic as an April Fools'!
** [[http://thehumangamemspa.tumblr.com/post/61700962562/k25ff-look-at-all-those-adorable-murderstuck This is what the protagonists would be if they got stuck in the Location]].
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** The part where she [[spoiler: prepares to pull a YouShallNotPass moment on Seth??? probably deserves a mention here as well.]]
* CrowningMomentOfHeartWarming: The flashback showing how [[MeetCute Daniel and Kate met]], it ends with her giving him a YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre speech after witnessing him being bullied by his MeanBoss. The poor guy probably wasn't shown kindness like that often.
**As Heartwrenching as the scene where [[spoiler: Cancel has a collar attached to Daniel designed to simulate drowning (something he has past trauma from) the reactions of some the other characters are pretty sweet. Especially [[TheStoic Camilla]] of all people being one of the first to go comfort him when it's over.]]
-->Camilla: It will be okay.
-->Camilla: It's fine to cry.
* CrowningMomentOfHeartWarming: The flashback showing how [[MeetCute Daniel and Kate met]], it ends with her giving him a YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre speech after witnessing him being bullied by his MeanBoss. The poor guy probably wasn't shown kindness like that often.
**As Heartwrenching as the scene where [[spoiler: Cancel has a collar attached to Daniel designed to simulate drowning (something he has past trauma from) the reactions of some the other characters are pretty sweet. Especially [[TheStoic Camilla]] of all people being one of the first to go comfort him when it's over.]]
-->Camilla: It will be okay.
-->Camilla: It's fine to cry.
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* NightmareFuel: [[spoiler: Seth?'s neck twisting and the black arms ripping out of his chest is certainly nightmare worthy.]]
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* FoeYay: During her first attempt to make Seth share the map, Camilla grabs his tie and pulls his face down close to hers. [[LampshadeHanging He points out what it looks like]] in his usual smug and condescending way and [[InvokedTrope even encourages her.]] She slaps him instead.
* TheWoobie: Daniel certainly acts this way. He has a "deer in the headlights" appearance, is terrified of nearly everything in the facility (for good reason), [[spoiler: an apparently unrequited crush on Kate]], a nasty boss and [[spoiler: a fear of drowning]]
* FoeYay: During her first attempt to make Seth share the map, Camilla grabs his tie and pulls his face down close to hers. [[LampshadeHanging He points out what it looks like]] in his usual smug and condescending way and [[InvokedTrope even encourages her.]] She slaps him instead.
* TheWoobie: Daniel certainly acts this way. He has a "deer in the headlights" appearance, is terrified of nearly everything in the facility (for good reason), [[spoiler: an apparently unrequited crush on Kate]], a nasty boss and [[spoiler: a fear of drowning]]
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: Admit it, you cheered a little on the inside when Camilla slapped Seth too.
* EnsembleDarkhorse: [[TheStoic Camilla]] [[BadAss Lloyd]]
* FriendlyFandoms: With{{Webcomic/Chiasmata}}
{{Webcomic/Chiasmata}}, the Geneverse even an Expy/alternate universe version of Seth called [[http://k25ff.tumblr.com/tagged/Satyrid Satyrid]] in it, who, naturally is just as much of a jerk as the original.
* FoeYay: During her first attempt to make Seth share the map, Camilla grabs his tie and pulls his face down close to hers. [[LampshadeHanging He points out what it looks like]] in his usual smug and condescending way and [[InvokedTrope even encouragesher.her to kiss him.]] She slaps him instead.
* LoveToHate: Cancel, and the marginally less villainous but still unpleasant Seth are both pretty popular in part because of this.
* TheWoobie: Daniel certainly acts this way. He has a "deer in the headlights" appearance, is terrified of nearly everything in the facility (for good reason), [[spoiler: an apparently unrequited crush on Kate]], a nasty boss and [[spoiler: a fear ofdrowning]]drowning]]
-->If this individual were even conscious of you wanting to be him, he'd scream and cry and ask you why why why would you ever want to be ME?
* EnsembleDarkhorse: [[TheStoic Camilla]] [[BadAss Lloyd]]
* FriendlyFandoms: With
* FoeYay: During her first attempt to make Seth share the map, Camilla grabs his tie and pulls his face down close to hers. [[LampshadeHanging He points out what it looks like]] in his usual smug and condescending way and [[InvokedTrope even encourages
* LoveToHate: Cancel, and the marginally less villainous but still unpleasant Seth are both pretty popular in part because of this.
* TheWoobie: Daniel certainly acts this way. He has a "deer in the headlights" appearance, is terrified of nearly everything in the facility (for good reason), [[spoiler: an apparently unrequited crush on Kate]], a nasty boss and [[spoiler: a fear of
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* FoeYay: During her first attempt to make Seth share the map, Camilla grabs his tie and pulls his face down close to hers. [[LamshadeHanging [[LampshadeHanging He points out what it looks like]] in his usual smug and condescending way and [[InvokedTrope even encourages her. her.]] She slaps him instead.
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* FoeYay: During her first attempt to make Seth share the map, Camilla grabs his tie and pulls his face down close to hers. [[LamshadeHanging He points out what it looks like]] in his usual smug and condescending way and even encourages her. She slaps him instead.
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* CreepyCute: The Minims, Cancel's minions. Even though they look like a cross between a mechanical spider and a skull, they aren't actively malicious towards the group, have soft, high-pitched voices, and seem childlike and curious. [[spoiler: Even though Cancel orders them to attach a collar that stimulates drowning on Daniel, they hesitate.]] Abigail even befriends one of them.
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* CreepyCute: The Minims, Cancel's minions. Even though they look like a cross between a mechanical spider and a skull, they aren't actively malicious towards the group, have soft, high-pitched voices, and seem childlike and curious. [[spoiler: Even though Cancel orders them to attach a collar that stimulates drowning on Daniel, they hesitate.]] Abigail even befriends one of them.them.
* TheWoobie: Daniel certainly acts this way. He has a "deer in the headlights" appearance, is terrified of nearly everything in the facility (for good reason), [[spoiler: an apparently unrequited crush on Kate]], a nasty boss and [[spoiler: a fear of drowning]]
* TheWoobie: Daniel certainly acts this way. He has a "deer in the headlights" appearance, is terrified of nearly everything in the facility (for good reason), [[spoiler: an apparently unrequited crush on Kate]], a nasty boss and [[spoiler: a fear of drowning]]
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