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* MagnificentBastard: [[ArmsDealer Goldface]], real name Keith, is a meta-human crime lord, who runs a BlackMarket fitted with [[CrazyPrepared copious amounts of security]] including all clients fitted with a meta dampener cuff also fitted with an explosive. After being notified of [[TheMole Barry Allen's]] strange behavior, Goldface decides to [[IfYoureSoEvilEatThisKitten test Barry's morality]] by requesting him and Ralph to join on a heist. As Goldface suspected, the two of them are unable to do the immoral act and betray the crew. Goldface arms their wrist bombs to make them comply, then rewards their obedience by not setting off the bombs and opts to instead kill them in combat. Later, Goldface is involved in a gang war with his ex-girlfriend Amunet, where he realizes she has the device both are seeking so waits for at the telepathic flower to take both from her. After the telepathic pollen makes the two villains realize they did [[UnholyMatrimony love each other and reconcile]].
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* MagnificentBastard: [[ArmsDealer Goldface]], real name Keith, is a an affable and friendly meta-human crime lord, who runs a BlackMarket fitted with [[CrazyPrepared copious amounts of security]] including security]], where all clients are fitted with a meta dampener cuff also fitted with doubling as an explosive. After being notified ExplosiveLeash. Notified of [[TheMole Barry Allen's]] strange behavior, Goldface decides to [[IfYoureSoEvilEatThisKitten test Barry's morality]] allegiance]] by requesting him and Ralph to join on a heist. As Goldface suspected, the two of them their heist, who are both unable to do the immoral act go through with it and betray the crew. So Goldface arms their wrist bombs to make them comply, then rewards their obedience by bombs, but keeps his word in not setting them off the bombs and opts when they listen, opting to instead kill them in via combat. Later, Goldface is involved in a gang war with his ex-girlfriend Amunet, where he realizes she has lets her and the device both are seeking so waits heroes do the work for at the telepathic flower to him and then take both from her. After the prize all at once. Afterwards the telepathic pollen makes the two villains realize they did their [[UnholyMatrimony love each other true feelings and reconcile]].they reconcile]]. Uniting their gangs into a supergang, Goldface sets his eyes on the CCPD's "metacure bullets", where he brings the entire police force to its knees using knockout gas, including Barry and Captain Kramer, and then fitting them all with his meta-dampener/explosive cuffs. Remembering Barry from last time, Goldface watches him "like a hawk", before later taking Barry and another cop hostage to ensure compliance.
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** Goldface accidentally hooks his chain into an electrical box and gets blasted with so much electricity that the gold beneath his skin [[BodyHorror outright melts and pours out from his orifices (notably his eye sockets burst).]] [[{{Narm}} Barry then runs up to check his pulse]] and after a few seconds of pause goes, [[UpToEleven "He's alive!"]]
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** Goldface accidentally hooks his chain into an electrical box and gets blasted with so much electricity that the gold beneath his skin [[BodyHorror outright melts and pours out from his orifices (notably his eye sockets burst).]] [[{{Narm}} Barry then runs up to check his pulse]] and after a few seconds of pause goes, [[UpToEleven "He's alive!"]]alive!"
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* MagnificentBastard: [[ArmsDealer Goldface]], real name Keith, is a meta-human crime lord, who runs a BlackMarket fitted with [[CrazyPrepared copious amounts of security]] including all clients fitted with a meta dampener cuff also fitted with an explosive. After being notified of [[TheMole Barry Allen's]] strange behavior, Goldface decides to [[IfYoureSoEvilEatThisKitten test Barry's morality]] by requesting him and Ralph to join on a heist. As Goldface suspected, the two of them are unable to do the immoral act and betray the crew. Goldface arms their wrist bombs to make them comply, then rewards their obedience by not setting off the bombs and opts to instead kill them in combat. Later, Goldface is involved in a gang war with his ex-girlfriend Amunet, where he realizes she has the device both are seeking so waits for at the telepathic flower to take both from her. After the telepathic pollen makes the two villains realize they did [[UnholyMatrimony love each other and reconcile]].
