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* {{Narm}}: It's a bit inappropriately amusing when Medic says, [[Film/InglouriousBasterds “Nein, nein, nein, nein, nein…”]] [[spoiler:the second time Heavy gets stuck in the fence? But you'll stop laughing pretty quickly...]]
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* {{Narm}}: It's a bit inappropriately amusing when Medic says, [[Film/InglouriousBasterds “Nein, "Nein, nein, nein, nein, nein…”]] nein…"]] [[spoiler:the second time Heavy gets stuck in the fence? But you'll stop laughing pretty quickly...]]
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--> The Soldier and Shovel Scenes. [[spoiler:Shovel seemingly seduces him...]]
--> Imagining [[spoiler: Heavy's Death]]
--> The many Video Reels that shows the BLU medic creating "Immortality" (Codenamed LAZARUS).
--> Imagining [[spoiler: Heavy's Death]]
--> The many Video Reels that shows the BLU medic creating "Immortality" (Codenamed LAZARUS).
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-->''Gather round while I sing you of Wernher von Braun,''
-->''A man whose allegiance''
-->''Is ruled by expedience...''
-->''A man whose allegiance''
-->''Is ruled by expedience...''
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-->''Gather round while I sing you of Wernher von Braun,''
-->''ABraun,\\
A man whoseallegiance''
-->''Isallegiance\\
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** Also, Pyro, [[spoiler: who winds up dead.]]
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** Also, Pyro, [[spoiler: who [[spoiler:who winds up dead.]]]]
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* FunnyAneurysmMoment: [[spoiler:Heavy getting stuck in the fence.]]
* HarsherInHindsight: [[spoiler:Heavy getting stuck in the fence.]]
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** While there's nothing wrong with Heavy and Medic having sex, something is very offsettling about them having sex in front of Stumpy.
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** While there's nothing wrong with Heavy and Medic having sex, something is very offsettling offsetting about them having sex in front of Stumpy.
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: "I'm not a bloody hippie. I'm a [[PrecisionFStrike fucking]] ''professional''."
* CrowningMomentOfFunny: Medic giving Soldier ink blot tests.
* CrowningMomentOfFunny: Medic giving Soldier ink blot tests.
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: "I'm not a bloody hippie. I'm a [[PrecisionFStrike fucking]] ''professional''."
FunnyAneurysmMoment: [[spoiler:Heavy getting stuck in the fence.]]
*CrowningMomentOfFunny: SugarWiki/FunnyMoments: Medic giving Soldier ink blot tests.
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* FunnyAneurysmMoment: [[spoiler:Heavy getting stuck in the fence.]]
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* SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome: "I'm not a bloody hippie. I'm a [[PrecisionFStrike fucking]] ''professional''."
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* CompleteMonster: [[spoiler:RED Spy. Not only was he plotting the deaths of his own team, part of the plan including successfully talking Heavy into sacrificing himself for Medic's sake as well as later locking Pyro and Medic in a room with a horde of vicious zombies, but he actually suggested that Engineer helped him rape Sniper before he killed him.]]
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* CompleteMonster: [[spoiler:RED Spy. Not only was he plotting the deaths of his own team, part of the plan including successfully talking Heavy into sacrificing himself for Medic's sake as well as later locking Pyro and Medic in a room with a horde of vicious zombies, but he actually suggested that Engineer helped him RAPE Sniper before he killed him.]]
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* CompleteMonster: [[spoiler:RED Spy. Not only was he plotting the deaths of his own team, part of the plan including successfully talking Heavy into sacrificing himself for Medic's sake as well as later locking Pyro and Medic in a room with a horde of vicious zombies, but he actually suggested that Engineer helped him RAPE rape Sniper before he killed him.]]
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* NightmareFuel: Many of the BLU team's deaths.
--> The Soldier and Shovel Scenes. [[spoiler:Shovel seemingly seduces him...]]
--> Imagining [[spoiler: Heavy's Death]]
--> The many Video Reels that shows the BLU medic creating "Immortality" (Codenamed LAZARUS).
--> The Soldier and Shovel Scenes. [[spoiler:Shovel seemingly seduces him...]]
--> Imagining [[spoiler: Heavy's Death]]
--> The many Video Reels that shows the BLU medic creating "Immortality" (Codenamed LAZARUS).
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** The "bonk" scene with Stumpy, in a [[BlackHumor horrible]], [[BlackComedy horrible]] way.
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** The "bonk" scene with Stumpy, in a [[BlackHumor horrible]], [[BlackComedy horrible, horrible]] way.
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* HilariousInHindsight: This fanfic was written before the "Scream Fortress" update, which introduced several cosmetic items that make players look like zombies and the HarderThanHard "Caliginous Caper" Mann Vs. Machine mission, which replaces the robots with armed zombies.
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** Also, Pyro.
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** Also, Pyro.Pyro, [[spoiler: who winds up dead.]]
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* {{Narm}}: It's a bit inappropriately amusing when Medic says, [[InglouriousBasterds “Nein, nein, nein, nein, nein…”]] [[spoiler:the second time Heavy gets stuck in the fence? But you'll stop laughing pretty quickly...]]
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* {{Narm}}: It's a bit inappropriately amusing when Medic says, [[InglouriousBasterds [[Film/InglouriousBasterds “Nein, nein, nein, nein, nein…”]] [[spoiler:the second time Heavy gets stuck in the fence? But you'll stop laughing pretty quickly...]]
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* {{Narm}}: Is it just me, or is it a bit inappropriately amusing when Medic says, [[InglouriousBasterds “Nein, nein, nein, nein, nein…”]] [[spoiler:the second time Heavy gets stuck in the fence? But you'll stop laughing pretty quickly...]]
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* {{Narm}}: Is it just me, or is it It's a bit inappropriately amusing when Medic says, [[InglouriousBasterds “Nein, nein, nein, nein, nein…”]] [[spoiler:the second time Heavy gets stuck in the fence? But you'll stop laughing pretty quickly...]]
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* CompleteMonster: [[spoiler:Spy, with AUTHORITY. Not only was he plotting the deaths of his own team, part of the plan including successfully talking Heavy into sacrificing himself for Medic's sake as well as later locking Pyro and Medic in a room with a horde of vicious zombies, but he actually suggested that Engineer helped him RAPE Sniper before he killed him. His just desserts at Engineer's hands were well deserved.]]
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* CompleteMonster: [[spoiler:Spy, with AUTHORITY.[[spoiler:RED Spy. Not only was he plotting the deaths of his own team, part of the plan including successfully talking Heavy into sacrificing himself for Medic's sake as well as later locking Pyro and Medic in a room with a horde of vicious zombies, but he actually suggested that Engineer helped him RAPE Sniper before he killed him. His just desserts at Engineer's hands were well deserved.]]
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* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler:Spy crosses this when he agrees to slaughter his own teammates.]]
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* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler:Spy crosses this when he agrees to RED and BLU's orders to slaughter his own teammates.]]
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* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler:Spy crosses this when he agrees to slaughter his own teammates.]]
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These aren\'t YMMV. Moving.
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* {{Flanderization}}: For about the first 500 words of "Respawn of the Dead", Medic and Heavy bicker LikeAnOldMarriedCouple over tactics and Medic's bossiness. Then Heavy turns into a [[ExtremeDoormat good-natured doormat]], and stays that way in the prequel.
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* MonsterSobStory / SympathyForTheDevil: Despite everything that he did, Engineer still feels sorry for the Spy and still regrets [[spoiler:having to kill him.]] The prologue also has a moment like this, where it's revealed that the Spy ''knows'' that his [[PowerPerversionPotential strange use of the disguise technology]] is really pathetic/depraved, and that he's sunk to what he feels are deplorably low depths. It doesn't stop him from coming across as a CompleteMonster, but it stops him from coming across as gleefully evil.
-->'''Engineer''': “No…not a monster. He wanted us t’ hate him, wanted us t’ think he was a monster, but he wasn’t. He was just a man, flawed as any of us. I saw it there when [[spoiler:he was dyin’]], an’ that’s somethin’ I’ll never ferget.”
-->'''Engineer''': “No…not a monster. He wanted us t’ hate him, wanted us t’ think he was a monster, but he wasn’t. He was just a man, flawed as any of us. I saw it there when [[spoiler:he was dyin’]], an’ that’s somethin’ I’ll never ferget.”
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** The "bonk" scene with Stumpy, in a [[BlackHumor horrible]], [[DeadBabyComedy horrible]] way.
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** The "bonk" scene with Stumpy, in a [[BlackHumor horrible]], [[DeadBabyComedy [[BlackComedy horrible]] way.
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It Got Worse de-wicking.
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* TheWoobie: [[spoiler:Medic. AND HOW. It only [[ItGotWorse gets worse]] as the story goes on, too.]]
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* TheWoobie: [[spoiler:Medic. AND HOW. It only [[ItGotWorse gets worse]] worse as the story goes on, too.]]
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** [[spoiler:Heavy stuck in the fence]] has become a very recognizable image in a large part of TeamFortress2 fandom. There's a ''lot'' of BlackComedy fanart interpretations out there.
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** [[spoiler:Heavy stuck in the fence]] has become a very recognizable image in a large part of TeamFortress2 VideoGame/TeamFortress2 fandom. There's a ''lot'' of BlackComedy fanart interpretations out there.
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** [[spoiler:Heavy stuck in the fence]] has become a very recognizable image in a large part of TeamFortress2 fandom. There's a ''lot'' of BlackComedy fanart interpretations out there.
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* {{Flanderization}}: For about the first 500 words of "Respawn of the Dead", Medic and Heavy bicker LikeAnOldMarriedCouple over tactics and Medic's bossiness. Then Heavy turns into a [[ExtremeDoormat good-natured doormat]], and stays that way in the prequel.
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* MonsterSobStory / SympathyForTheDevil: Despite everything that he did, Engineer still feels sorry for the Spy and still regrets [[spoiler:having to kill him.]] The prologue also has a moment like this, where it's revealed that the Spy ''knows'' that his [[PowerPerversionPotential strange use of the disguise technology]] is really pathetic/depraved, and that he's sunk to what he feels are deplorably low depths.
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* MonsterSobStory / SympathyForTheDevil: Despite everything that he did, Engineer still feels sorry for the Spy and still regrets [[spoiler:having to kill him.]] The prologue also has a moment like this, where it's revealed that the Spy ''knows'' that his [[PowerPerversionPotential strange use of the disguise technology]] is really pathetic/depraved, and that he's sunk to what he feels are deplorably low depths. It doesn't stop him from coming across as a CompleteMonster, but it stops him from coming across as gleefully evil.
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-->'''Engineer''': “No…not a monster,” Engineer said. “He wanted us t’ hate him, wanted us t’ think he was a monster, but he wasn’t. He was just a man, flawed as any of us. I saw it there when [[spoiler:he was dyin’]], an’ that’s somethin’ I’ll never ferget.”
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-->'''Engineer''': “No…not a monster,” Engineer said. “He monster. He wanted us t’ hate him, wanted us t’ think he was a monster, but he wasn’t. He was just a man, flawed as any of us. I saw it there when [[spoiler:he was dyin’]], an’ that’s somethin’ I’ll never ferget.”
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* MonsterSobStory / SympathyForTheDevil: Despite everything that he did, Engineer still feels sorry for the Spy and still regrets [[spoiler:having to kill him.]] The prologue also has a moment like this, where it's revealed that the Spy ''knows'' that his [[PowerPerversionPotential strange use of the disguise technology]] is really pathetic/depraved, and that he's sunk to what he feels are deplorably low depths.
-->'''Engineer''': “No…not a monster,” Engineer said. “He wanted us t’ hate him, wanted us t’ think he was a monster, but he wasn’t. He was just a man, flawed as any of us. I saw it there when [[spoiler:he was dyin’]], an’ that’s somethin’ I’ll never ferget.”
-->'''Engineer''': “No…not a monster,” Engineer said. “He wanted us t’ hate him, wanted us t’ think he was a monster, but he wasn’t. He was just a man, flawed as any of us. I saw it there when [[spoiler:he was dyin’]], an’ that’s somethin’ I’ll never ferget.”
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** Any time Soldier has a conversation with either Shovel or Colonel Taters.
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** It was pretty creepy when the Soldier's shovel started to talk to him...but it's just '''hilarious''' when the Soldier [[spoiler:has sex with it.]] Firstly, the situation is so ridiculous that it barrels through squick and ends up CrossingTheLineTwice, and secondly, how is it even ''possible'' to [[spoiler:have sex with a shovel]]?!
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* {{Narm}}: Is it just me, or is it a bit inappropriately amusing when Medic says, [[InglouriousBasterds “Nein, nein, nein, nein, nein…”]] [[spoiler:the second time Heavy gets stuck in the fence? But you'll stop laughing pretty quickly...]]
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*** And as for the {{prequel}}, it is every person's prerogative to make up their own mind whether they think scalpels belong in the bedroom. Also, the detailed description of Demo's empty eye socket is a little disturbing. Let's just say that Heavy is one of the few things Medic likes that aren't {{squick}}.
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*** And as for the {{prequel}}, it is every person's prerogative to make up their own mind whether they think scalpels belong in the bedroom. Also, the bedroom...
** The detailed description of Demo's empty eye socket in the {{prequel}} is a little disturbing. Let's just say that Heavy is one of the few things Medic likes that aren't {{squick}}.
** The detailed description of Demo's empty eye socket in the {{prequel}} is a little disturbing. Let's just say that Heavy is one of the few things Medic likes that aren't {{squick}}.
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*** And in terms of the {{prequel}}, it is every person's prerogative to make up their own mind whether they think scalpels belong in the bedroom.
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*** And in terms of as for the {{prequel}}, it is every person's prerogative to make up their own mind whether they think scalpels belong in the bedroom.bedroom. Also, the detailed description of Demo's empty eye socket is a little disturbing. Let's just say that Heavy is one of the few things Medic likes that aren't {{squick}}.
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---> [[spoiler:''He wanted his mother.'']]
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---> [[spoiler:''He wanted his mother.'']]'']]
** Also, Pyro.
** Also, Pyro.
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*** And in terms of the {{prequel}}, it is every person's prerogative to make up their own mind whether they think scalpels belong in the bedroom.
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* TrueNeutral: This basically seems to be Medic's initial alignment. Then CharacterDevelopment happens.
-->''Gather round while I sing you of Wernher von Braun,''
-->''A man whose allegiance''
-->''Is ruled by expedience...''
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-->''A man whose allegiance''
-->''Is ruled by expedience...''
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* FunnyAneurysmMoment: [[spoiler:Heavy getting stuck in the fence.]]
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** While there's nothing wrong with Heavy and Medic having sex, something is very offsettling about them having sex in front of Stumpy.