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* AuthorsSavingThrow: One that stands out for most NSL {{Deconstruction Fic}}s is that in those stories, the Louds took their superstition too far. But the Louds here except Lynn actually ''knew'' Lincoln was lying all along and [[DisproportionateRetribution his punishment outweighs his crime]].
* ItsTheSameNowItSucks: A common criticism towards NSL {{Deconstruction Fic}}s in general, specifically with [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone the Louds yet again feeling awful for their actions]], and [[ForegoneConclusion Lincoln forgiving his family in the end]].
* ItsTheSameNowItSucks: A common criticism towards NSL {{Deconstruction Fic}}s in general, specifically with [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone the Louds yet again feeling awful for their actions]], and [[ForegoneConclusion Lincoln forgiving his family in the end]].
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* AuthorsSavingThrow: One that stands out for most NSL {{Deconstruction Fic}}s is that in those stories, the Louds took their superstition too far. But the Louds here except Lynn actually ''knew'' Lincoln was lying all along and [[DisproportionateRetribution his punishment outweighs his crime]].
* ItsTheSameNowItSucks: A common criticism towards NSL {{Deconstruction Fic}}s in general, specifically with [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone the Louds yet again feeling awful for their actions]], and [[ForegoneConclusion Lincoln forgiving his family in the end]].crime]].
* ItsTheSameNowItSucks: A common criticism towards NSL {{Deconstruction Fic}}s in general, specifically with [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone the Louds yet again feeling awful for their actions]], and [[ForegoneConclusion Lincoln forgiving his family in the end]].
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* ItsTheSameSoItSucks: A common criticism towards NSL {{Deconstruction Fic}}s in general, specifically with [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone the Louds yet again feeling awful for their actions]], and [[ForegoneConclusion Lincoln forgiving his family in the end]]
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* ItsTheSameSoItSucks: ItsTheSameNowItSucks: A common criticism towards NSL {{Deconstruction Fic}}s in general, specifically with [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone the Louds yet again feeling awful for their actions]], and [[ForegoneConclusion Lincoln forgiving his family in the end]]end]].
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Misuse, unless it was the first fic of this nature and the rest copied it
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* ItsTheSameSoItSucks: A common criticism towards NSL {{Deconstruction Fic}}s in general, specifically with [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone the Louds yet again feeling awful for their actions]], and [[ForegoneConclusion Lincoln forgiving his family in the end]]
* SeinfeldIsUnfunny: It received flak for being another "No Such Luck" fanfic as soon as the first chapter was posted. Thankfully, people began to warm up to it after seeing that it was different from most NSL fics (In that the Louds in this story except Lynn are aware of Lincoln's lies and are punishing him for it).
* SeinfeldIsUnfunny: It received flak for being another "No Such Luck" fanfic as soon as the first chapter was posted. Thankfully, people began to warm up to it after seeing that it was different from most NSL fics (In that the Louds in this story except Lynn are aware of Lincoln's lies and are punishing him for it).
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* ItsTheSameSoItSucks: A common criticism towards NSL {{Deconstruction Fic}}s in general, specifically with [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone the Louds yet again feeling awful for their actions]], and [[ForegoneConclusion Lincoln forgiving his family in the end]]
* SeinfeldIsUnfunny: It received flak for being another "No Such Luck" fanfic as soon as the first chapter was posted. Thankfully, people began to warm up to it after seeing that it was different from most NSL fics (In that the Louds in this story except Lynn are aware of Lincoln's lies and are punishing him for it).end]]
* SeinfeldIsUnfunny: It received flak for being another "No Such Luck" fanfic as soon as the first chapter was posted. Thankfully, people began to warm up to it after seeing that it was different from most NSL fics (In that the Louds in this story except Lynn are aware of Lincoln's lies and are punishing him for it).
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* {{Foil}}: The Sister Fight Protocol in another extremely popular Loud House fanfic ''Fanfic/{{Syngenesophobia}}''. In both stories the protocol failed to take Lincoln into account because they wanted to keep him out of conflicts that he wouldn't normally be a part of. In ''Fanfic/{{Syngenesophobia}}'' the protocol is flawed because it was something recently developed and had only ever been implemented one time. In this fanfiction, the protocol is flawed because it's ''outdated'' and only took the five eldest Loud children into account.
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* {{Foil}}: The Sister Fight Protocol in another extremely popular Loud House fanfic ''Fanfic/{{Syngenesophobia}}''. In both stories the protocol failed to take Lincoln into account because they wanted to keep him out of conflicts that he wouldn't normally be a part of. In ''Fanfic/{{Syngenesophobia}}'' the protocol is flawed because it was something recently developed and had only ever been implemented one time. In this fanfiction, the protocol is flawed because it's ''outdated'' and only took for the five eldest Loud children into account.
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* {{Foil}}: The Sister Fight Protocol in another extremely popular Loud House fanfic ''Fanfic/{{Syngenesophobia}}''. In both stories the protocol failed to take Lincoln into account because they wanted to keep him out of conflicts that he wouldn't normally be a part of. In ''Fanfic/{{Syngenesophobia}}'' the protocol is flawed because it was something recently developed and had only ever been implemented one time. In this fanfiction, the protocol is flawed because it's ''outdated'' and only took for the five eldest Loud children into account.
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* {{Foil}}: The Sister Fight Protocol in the another extremely popular Loud House fanfic ''Fanfic/{{Syngenesophobia}}''. In both Stories the protocol failed to take Lincoln into account because they wanted to keep him out of conflicts that he wouldn't normally be a part of. In ''Fanfic/{{Syngenesophobia}}'' the protocol is flawed because it was something recently developed and had only ever been implemented one time. In this fanfiction, the protocol is flawed because it's ''outdated'' and only took for the five eldest Loud children into account.
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* {{Foil}}: The Sister Fight Protocol in the another extremely popular Loud House fanfic ''Fanfic/{{Syngenesophobia}}''. In both Stories stories the protocol failed to take Lincoln into account because they wanted to keep him out of conflicts that he wouldn't normally be a part of. In ''Fanfic/{{Syngenesophobia}}'' the protocol is flawed because it was something recently developed and had only ever been implemented one time. In this fanfiction, the protocol is flawed because it's ''outdated'' and only took for the five eldest Loud children into account.
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* AuthorsSavingThrow: One stands out for most NSL {{Deconstruction Fic}}s is that in those stories, the Louds took their superstition too far. But the Louds here except Lynn actually ''knew'' Lincoln was lying all along and [[DisproportionateRetribution his punishment outweighs his crime]].
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* AuthorsSavingThrow: One that stands out for most NSL {{Deconstruction Fic}}s is that in those stories, the Louds took their superstition too far. But the Louds here except Lynn actually ''knew'' Lincoln was lying all along and [[DisproportionateRetribution his punishment outweighs his crime]].
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* {{Foil}}: The Sister Fight Protocol in the another extremely popular Loud House fanfic ''Fanfic/{{Syngenesophobia}}''. In both Stories the protocol failed to take Lincoln into account because they wanted to keep him out of conflicts that he wouldn't normally be a part of. In ''Fanfic/{{Syngenesophobia}}'' the protocol is flawed because it was something recently developed and had only ever been implemented one time. In this fanfiction, the protocol is flawed because it's ''outdated'' and only took for the five eldest Loud children into account.
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* AuthorsSavingThrow: One stands out for most NSL {{Deconstruction Fic}}s is that in those stories, the Louds took their superstition too far. But the Louds here except Lynn knew Lincoln was lying and [[DisproportionateRetribution punishing him too far]].
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* AuthorsSavingThrow: One stands out for most NSL {{Deconstruction Fic}}s is that in those stories, the Louds took their superstition too far. But the Louds here except Lynn knew actually ''knew'' Lincoln was lying all along and [[DisproportionateRetribution punishing him too far]].his punishment outweighs his crime]].
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* AuthorsSavingThrow: One stands out for most NSL {{Deconstruction Fic}}s is that in those stories, the Louds took their superstition too far. But the Louds here except Lynn knew Lincoln was lying and [[DisproportionateRetribution punishing him too far.far]].
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* AuthorsSAvingThrow: AuthorsSavingThrow: One stands out for most NSL {{Deconstruction Fic}}s is that in those stories, the Louds took their superstition too far. But the Louds here except Lynn knew Lincoln was lying and punishing him too far.
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* ItsTheSameSoItSucks: A common criticism towards NSL {{Deconstruction Fic}}s in general, specifically with [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone the Louds yet again feeling awful for their actions]] and [[ForegoneConclusion Lincoln forgiving his family in the end]]
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* AuthorsSAvingThrow: One stands out for most NSL {{Deconstruction Fic}}s is that in those stories, the Louds took their superstition too far. But the Louds here except Lynn knew Lincoln was lying and punishing him too far.
* ItsTheSameSoItSucks: A common criticism towards NSL {{Deconstruction Fic}}s in general, specifically with [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone the Louds yet again feeling awful for theiractions]] actions]], and [[ForegoneConclusion Lincoln forgiving his family in the end]]
* ItsTheSameSoItSucks: A common criticism towards NSL {{Deconstruction Fic}}s in general, specifically with [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone the Louds yet again feeling awful for their
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* SeinfeldIsUnfunny: It received flak for being another "No Such Luck" fanfic as soon as the first chapter was posted. Thankfully, people began to warm up to it after seeing that it was different from most NSL fics (In that the Louds except Lynn are aware of Lincoln's lies and are punishing him for it).
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* SeinfeldIsUnfunny: It received flak for being another "No Such Luck" fanfic as soon as the first chapter was posted. Thankfully, people began to warm up to it after seeing that it was different from most NSL fics (In that the Louds in this story except Lynn are aware of Lincoln's lies and are punishing him for it).
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* ItsTheSameSoITSucks: ItsTheSameSoItSucks: A common criticism towards NSL {{Deconstruction Fic}}s in general, specifically with [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone the Louds yet again felt remorse]] feeling awful for their actions]] and [[ForegoneConclusion Lincoln forgiving his family in the end]]
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T He other NSL fics did the same thing as well.
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* SeinfeldIsUnfunny: It received flak for being another "No Such Luck" fanfic as soon as the first chapter was posted. Thankfully, people began to warm up to it after seeing that it was different from most NSL fics (being an AlternateTimeline, {{deconstruct|edtrope}}ing Lincoln's mistreatment, etc.).
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* ItsTheSameSoITSucks: A common criticism towards NSL {{Deconstruction Fic}}s in general, specifically with [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone the Louds yet again felt remorse]] and [[ForegoneConclusion Lincoln forgiving his family in the end]]
* SeinfeldIsUnfunny: It received flak for being another "No Such Luck" fanfic as soon as the first chapter was posted. Thankfully, people began to warm up to it after seeing that it was different from most NSL fics(being an AlternateTimeline, {{deconstruct|edtrope}}ing (In that the Louds except Lynn are aware of Lincoln's mistreatment, etc.).lies and are punishing him for it).
* SeinfeldIsUnfunny: It received flak for being another "No Such Luck" fanfic as soon as the first chapter was posted. Thankfully, people began to warm up to it after seeing that it was different from most NSL fics
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: As mentioned, what the Loud family did to Lincoln by locking him out of the house is illegal. The only reason they aren't in jail right now is because the only ones outside of the family who know about the incident were asked not to call the police by the victim of it. If they had found out without Lincoln being there to ask them to keep it secret, or if someone else had found out, then the entire family could have been torn apart.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: As mentioned, what the Loud family did to Lincoln by locking him out of the house is illegal. The only reason they aren't in jail right now is because the only ones outside of the family who know about the incident were asked not to call the police by the victim of it. If they had found out without Lincoln being there to ask them to keep it secret, or if someone else had found out, then the entire family could have been torn apart.
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* SeinfeldIsUnfunny: It received flak for being another "No Such Luck" fanfic as soon as the first chapter was posted. Thankfully, people began to warm up to it after seeing that it was different from most NSL fics (being an AlternateTimeline, {{deconstruct|edtrope}}ing Lincoln's mistreatment, etc.).