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* AuthorsSavingThrow: The story is essentially one to the "Root of the Problem" arc in the main comic which likewise tried to go for a GreenAesop but was filled with unlikeable characters (namely The Deer) and an uninteresting villain that bungled the message it was trying to convene. This story does it a bit better by keeping it to a new forest named White Tail Woods (as opposed to the Everfree), keeps it strictly to the official characters (The only comic exclusive one is the titular Spirit of the Forest and it doesn't play a direct role in the story other than a legend), explores both the pros and cons on both sides of the conflict (A businessman with good intentions, not damaging the forest beyond recognition, recognizing how the is mill is essential for the townsponies and ultimately the compromises to keep things in balance) and keeps everyone in character to boot. It even gets bonus points for showing CharacterDevelopment for Diamond Tiara post-HeelFaceTurn.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: While it's a good story, some critisim does note how the [=CMC=] and Tiara don't really work together completely through the story save for in the first issue cleaning up the forest (The [=CMC=] get most of the focus in the second one and Tiara pretty much solves the problem herself in the third issue).
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: While it's a good story, some critisim criticism does note how the [=CMC=] and Tiara don't really work together completely through the story save for in the first issue cleaning up the forest (The [=CMC=] get most of the focus in the second one and Tiara pretty much solves the problem herself in the third issue).
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* AuthorsSavingThrow: The story is essentially one to the "Root of the Problem" arc in the main comic which likewise tried to go for a GreenAesop but was filled with unlikeable characters (namely The Deer) and an uninteresting villain that bungled the message it was trying to convene. This story does it a bit better by keeping it to a new forest named White Tail Woods (as opposed to the Everfree), keeps it strictly to the official characters (The only comic exclusive one is the titular Spirit of the Forest and it doesn't play a direct role in the story other than a legend), explores both the pros and cons on both sides of the conflict (A businessman with well-intentions, not damaging the forest beyond recognition, recognizing how the is mill is essential for the townsponies and ultimately the compromises to keep things in balance) and keeps everyone in character to boot. It even gets bonus points for showing CharacterDevelopment for Diamond Tiara post-HeelFaceTurn.
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* AuthorsSavingThrow: The story is essentially one to the "Root of the Problem" arc in the main comic which likewise tried to go for a GreenAesop but was filled with unlikeable characters (namely The Deer) and an uninteresting villain that bungled the message it was trying to convene. This story does it a bit better by keeping it to a new forest named White Tail Woods (as opposed to the Everfree), keeps it strictly to the official characters (The only comic exclusive one is the titular Spirit of the Forest and it doesn't play a direct role in the story other than a legend), explores both the pros and cons on both sides of the conflict (A businessman with well-intentions, good intentions, not damaging the forest beyond recognition, recognizing how the is mill is essential for the townsponies and ultimately the compromises to keep things in balance) and keeps everyone in character to boot. It even gets bonus points for showing CharacterDevelopment for Diamond Tiara post-HeelFaceTurn.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: While it's a good story, some critisim does note how the [=CMC=] and Tiara don't really work together completely through the story save for in the first issue cleaning up the forest (The [=CMC=] get most of the focus in the second one and Tiara pretty much has solves the problem herself in the third issue).
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: While it's a good story, some critisim does note how the [=CMC=] and Tiara don't really work together completely through the story save for in the first issue cleaning up the forest (The [=CMC=] get most of the focus in the second one and Tiara pretty much has solves the problem herself in the third issue).
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* AuthorsSavingThrow: The story is essentially one to the "Root of the Problem" arc in the main comic which likewise tried to go for a GreenAesop but was filled with unlikeable characters (namely The Deer) and an uninteresting villain that bungled the message it was trying to convene. This story does it a bit better by keeping it to a new forest named White Tail Woods (as opposed to the Everfree), keeps it strictly to the official characters (The only comic exclusive one is the titular Spirit of the Forest and it doesn't play a direct role in the story other then a legend), explores both the pros and cons on both sides of the conflict (A businessman with well-intentions, not damaging the forest beyond recognition, recognizing how the is mill is essential for the townsponies and ultimately the compromises to keep things in balance) and keeps everyone in character to boot. It even gets bonus points for showing CharacterDevelopment for Diamond Tiara post-HeelFaceTurn.
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* AuthorsSavingThrow: The story is essentially one to the "Root of the Problem" arc in the main comic which likewise tried to go for a GreenAesop but was filled with unlikeable characters (namely The Deer) and an uninteresting villain that bungled the message it was trying to convene. This story does it a bit better by keeping it to a new forest named White Tail Woods (as opposed to the Everfree), keeps it strictly to the official characters (The only comic exclusive one is the titular Spirit of the Forest and it doesn't play a direct role in the story other then than a legend), explores both the pros and cons on both sides of the conflict (A businessman with well-intentions, not damaging the forest beyond recognition, recognizing how the is mill is essential for the townsponies and ultimately the compromises to keep things in balance) and keeps everyone in character to boot. It even gets bonus points for showing CharacterDevelopment for Diamond Tiara post-HeelFaceTurn.
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* AuthorsSavingThrow: The story is essentially one to the "Root of the Problem" arc in the main comic which likewise tried to go for a GreenAesop but was filled with unlikeable characters (namely The Deer) and an uninteresting villain that bungled the message it was trying to convene. This story does it a bit better by keeping it to a new forest named White Tail Woods (as opposed to the Everfree), keeps it strictly to the official characters (The only comic exclusive one is the titular Spirit of the Forest and it doesn't play a direct role in the story other then a legend), explores both the pros and cons on both sides of the conflict (A businessman with well-intentions, not damaging the forest beyond recognition, recognizing how the is mill is essential for the townsponies and ultimately the compromises to keep things in balance) and keeps everyone in character to boot. It even gets bonus points for showing CharacterDevelopment for Diamond Tiara post-HeelFaceTurn.
* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodCharacter: Slight one, but many wonder why Silver Spoon couldn't help with the situation considering, y'know, she's Tiara's best friend?
* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: While it's a good story, some critisim does note how the [=CMC=] and Tiara don't really work together completely through the story save for in the first issue cleaning up the forest (The [=CMC=] get most of the focus in the second one and Tiara pretty much has solves the problem herself in the third issue).
* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodCharacter: Slight one, but many wonder why Silver Spoon couldn't help with the situation considering, y'know, she's Tiara's best friend?
* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: While it's a good story, some critisim does note how the [=CMC=] and Tiara don't really work together completely through the story save for in the first issue cleaning up the forest (The [=CMC=] get most of the focus in the second one and Tiara pretty much has solves the problem herself in the third issue).
