History YMMV / LoyaltyAmongWorlds

* ImprovedSecondAttempt: Despite having only one chapter, the rewrite is considered several orders of magnitude superior than the original as the pacing is more managable.[[note]] [=AdmiralDT8=] cites the original being rushed as a major factor to the story being rewritten [[/note]], Darrel and his family being more fleshed out and having the chemistry between Darrel and the canon trio being better developed as opposed to it just being an [[InfoDump info dump]] in the original.

* SatelliteCharacter: Pretty much all of Admiral's OCs fall into this trope. In both his art and his fiction, Darrel and his Salamanders are almost always seen with Anne and the Plantars and Darrel Loyalität is almost always with Anne in every crucial moment (Sprig even lampshades this in Chapter 63). They're often just doing whatever they are doing, while also forcing his OCs in every scene, even when it isn't necessary for them to be there, such as Darrel using Calamity Powers whenever Anne does (even though he's already a powerful wizard), and he and occasionally Tint are often edited into scenes just meant for Anne and Sprig. Tint; when not with Darrel, is often with Sprig, and often gets into the same hijinks and situations with him. Such as both being held hostage by Andrias and nearly gets dropped to their deaths, and later the two become superheroes together. Plus, Cronaxx during Season 1 and 2 is sometimes seen with Hop Pop, and gets stabbed along with Marcy. Subverted though, cause unlike Marcy, who survives her injuries, Cronnax [[KilledOffForReal really does die]].

* RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap: The rewritten versions of Tint, Cronaxx and Dyllan/Darrel are seen as vastly superior to their original counteparts with many of the issues that plagued those characters having been fixed.

* OvershadowedByControversy: This may have been written off as a typical SelfInsertFic if not for A) said self-insert being shipped with Anne Boonchuy; and B) the author being an adult man while Anne is canonically thirteen years old. Both of these points have led to people accusing him of implicitly [[JailbaitTaboo shipping himself with an underage girl]]. While [=AdmiralDT8=] has denied it being the case, it’s done little (if anything) to quell the backlash. Later on, he deleted his work on his profile.

** In the original, Darrel Loyalitat counted as one due to him [[IncorruptiblePurePureness always being in the right]], is liked by practically every character and gets [[NewPowersAsThePlotDemands magic powers out of seemingly thin air]]. [[RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap The rewrite however, seems to be on a path to redeeming his character given the first chapters improvements]]

** Cronaxx's death is framed to be as heartfelt and shocking as Marcy being impaled in the same scene, however, given Cronaxx being incredibly annoying and two-dimensional personality, it actually ended with viewers being part relieved because of an annoying character finally being killed off, but fustrated because it was shoehorned into the same scene and circumstances as Marcy being impaled.

** [=AdmiralDT8=] ships his self-insert with Anne, which has led to most of the ''Amphibia'' fandom expressing disgust and keeping their distance from him, as Anne is underage while he is an adult. Adding fuel to the fire, he drew Anne pregnant with his children as part of a Nativity recreation in 2020 and as part of ''Fanfic/SorcerersOfSignalHill''.

* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: While the reveal of Marcy's DarkSecret was supposed to be as impactful in the fanfiction as in canon. Darrel callously calls out Marcy for taking him away from his family and his dying mother. Marcy had no idea that his mother was sick at all before Darrel shouts it out to her. But the narrative seems to portray it like she always knew, and Darrel calls her a selfish brat for her actions. While Marcy did do do a selfish thing. She had sympathetic reasons for doing it. But Darrel tends to hide a lot of plot important secrets from everyone else that could've prevented these turn of events. Thus making him a hypocrite in this situation.

* ImprovedSecondAttempt: Despite having only one chapter, the rewrite is considered several orders of magnitude superior than the original as the pacing is more managable.[[note]] [=AdmiralDT8=] cites the original being rushed as a major factor to the story being rewritten [[/note]], Darrel and his family being more fleshed out and having the chemistry between Darrel and the cannon trio being better developed as opposed to it just being an [[InfoDump info dump]] in the original.

** In the original, Darrel Loyalitat counted as one due to him [[IncorruptiblePurePureness always being in the right]], is liked by practically every character and gets [[NewPowersAsThePlotDemands magic powers out of seemingly thin air]]. [[RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap the rewrite is on a path to redeeming his character given the first chapters improvements]]

** In the original, Darrel Loyalitat counted as one due to him [[IncorruptiblePurePureness always being in the right]], is liked by practically every character and gets [[NewPowersAsThePlotDemands magic powers out of seemingly thin air]]. [[SavedFromTheScrappyHeap the rewrite is on a path to redeeming his character given the first cha[ters improvements]]

** Darrel Loyalitat due to him [[IncorruptiblePurePureness always being in the right]], is liked by practically every character and gets [[NewPowersAsThePlotDemands magic powers out of seemingly thin air]].

* OvershadowedByControversy: This may have been written off as a typical SelfInsertFic if not for A) said self-insert being shipped with Anne Boonchuy; and B) the author being an adult man while Anne is canonically thirteen years old. Both of these points have led to people accusing him of implicitly [[JailbaitTaboo shipping himself with an underage girl]]. While [=AdmiralDT8=] has denied it being the case, it’s done little (if anything) to quell the backlash. [[spoiler:Later on, he deleted his work on his profile.]]

* OvershadowedByControversy: This may have been written off as a typical SelfInsertFic if not for A) said self-insert being shipped with Anne Boonchuy; and B) the author being an adult man while Anne is canonically thirteen years old. Both of these points have led to people accusing him of implicitly [[JailbaitTaboo shipping himself with an underage girl]]. While [=AdmiralDT8=] has denied it being the case, it’s done little (if anything) to quell the backlash.