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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: So who is the boy at the crossroads? Are either of the suggested origins true, or are neither of them correct?
* CompleteMonster: The handsome young man of [[AtTheCrossroads the crossroads]], a mysterious being dressed in [[DarkIsEvil black]], wanders the town in the oppressive fog spreading chaos and discord where he goes. Taking advantage of the urban legend of "crossroad fortunes", the young man delivers fortunes in ways that ruin or end the lives of the recipients, with a rash of [[DrivenToSuicide suicides]] from his powers. When a teenage girl crushes on the hero Ryusuke Fukada, the young man forces her into obsession over him until it kills her, before telling an adulterous man's pregnant mistress to seek out larger problems until she murders her lover's young son and immolates herself. Initiating a mass suicide of 200 girls, the young man even forces the Ryusuke's LoveInterest Midori into hating him for the rest of her life, a {{curse}} she kills herself to escape.
* {{Narm}}: The dialogue of the young characters, at least in the official English translation, [[TotallyRadical comes off as awkward in its attempts to mimic youth slang.]]
* TearJerker: Midori [[spoiler: killing herself to end the torment brought on by the beautiful boy's "advice"]].
* CompleteMonster: The handsome young man of [[AtTheCrossroads the crossroads]], a mysterious being dressed in [[DarkIsEvil black]], wanders the town in the oppressive fog spreading chaos and discord where he goes. Taking advantage of the urban legend of "crossroad fortunes", the young man delivers fortunes in ways that ruin or end the lives of the recipients, with a rash of [[DrivenToSuicide suicides]] from his powers. When a teenage girl crushes on the hero Ryusuke Fukada, the young man forces her into obsession over him until it kills her, before telling an adulterous man's pregnant mistress to seek out larger problems until she murders her lover's young son and immolates herself. Initiating a mass suicide of 200 girls, the young man even forces the Ryusuke's LoveInterest Midori into hating him for the rest of her life, a {{curse}} she kills herself to escape.
* {{Narm}}: The dialogue of the young characters, at least in the official English translation, [[TotallyRadical comes off as awkward in its attempts to mimic youth slang.]]
* TearJerker: Midori [[spoiler: killing herself to end the torment brought on by the beautiful boy's "advice"]].
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* CompleteMonster: The handsome young man of [[AtTheCrossroads the crossroads]], a mysterious being dressed in [[DarkIsEvil black]], wanders the town in the oppressive fog spreading chaos and discord where he goes. Taking advantage of the urban legend of "crossroad fortunes", the young man delivers fortunes in ways that ruin or end the lives of the recipients, with a rash of [[DrivenToSuicide suicides]] from his powers. When a teenage girl crushes on the hero Ryusuke Fukada, the young man forces her into obsession over him until it kills her, before telling an adulterous man's pregnant mistress to seek out larger problems until she murders her lover's young son and immolates herself. Initiating a mass suicide of 200 girls, the young man even forces the Ryusuke's LoveInterest Midori into hating him for the rest of her life, a {{curse}} she kills herself to escape.
* {{Narm}}: The dialogue of the young characters, at least in the official English translation, [[TotallyRadical comes off as awkward in its attempts to mimic youth slang.]]
* TearJerker: Midori [[spoiler: killing herself to end the torment brought on by the beautiful boy's "advice"]].
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* CompleteMonster: The handsome young man of [[AtTheCrossroads the crossroads]], a mysterious being dressed in [[DarkIsEvil black]], wanders the town in the oppressive fog spreading chaos and discord where he goes. Taking advantage of the urban legend of "crossroad fortunes", the young man delivers fortunes in ways that ruin or end the lives of the recipients, with a rash of [[DrivenToSuicide suicides]] from his powers. When a teenage girl crushes on the hero Ryusuke Fukada, the young man forces her into obsession over him until it kills her, before telling an adulterous man's pregnant mistress to seek out larger problems until she murders her lover's young son and immolates herself. Initiating a mass suicide of 200 girls, the young man even forces the Ryusuke's LoveInterest Midori into hating him for the rest of her life, a curse she kills herself to escape.
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* CompleteMonster: The handsome young man of [[AtTheCrossroads the crossroads]], a mysterious being dressed in [[DarkIsEvil black]], wanders the town in the oppressive fog spreading chaos and discord where he goes. Taking advantage of the urban legend of "crossroad fortunes", the young man delivers fortunes in ways that ruin or end the lives of the recipients, with a rash of [[DrivenToSuicide suicides]] from his powers. When a teenage girl crushes on the hero Ryusuke Fukada, the young man forces her into obsession over him until it kills her, before telling an adulterous man's pregnant mistress to seek out larger problems until she murders her lover's young son and immolates herself. Initiating a mass suicide of 200 girls, the young man even forces the Ryusuke's LoveInterest Midori into hating him for the rest of her life, a curse {{curse}} she kills herself to escape.
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* CompleteMonster: The handsome young man of [[AtTheCrossroads the crossroads]], a mysterious being dressed in [[DarkIsEvil black]], wanders the town in the oppressive fog spreading chaos and discord where he goes. Taking advantage of the urban legend of "crossroad fortunes", the young man delivers fortunes in ways that ruin or end the lives of the recipients, with a rash of [[DrivenToSuicide suicides]] from his powers. When a teenage girl crushes on the hero Ryusuke Fukada, the young man forces her into obsession over him until it kills her, before telling an adulterous man's pregnant mistress to seek out larger problems until she murders her lover's young son and immolates herself. Initiating a mass suicide of 200 girls, the young man even forces the Ryusuke's LoveInterest Midori into hating him for the rest of her life, a curse she kills herself to escape.
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: So who is the Pretty Boy? Are either of the stories true, or are neither of them correct?
* {{Narm}}: In this disturbing tale of compulsion and suicides, the main antagonist is nicknamed the Intersection's Pretty Boy. The thing is, they never refer to him by a nickname or find any other name for him, like the Boy In Black, the Boy at the Crossroads, or other simpler and more ominous titles. After hearing the main characters speaking with dead seriousness about the threat posed by The Intersection's Pretty Boy dozens of times it become impossible to take the name seriously anymore.
* TearJerker: Midori [[spoiler: killing herself to end the torment brought on by the Pretty Boy's "advice"]].
* {{Narm}}: In this disturbing tale of compulsion and suicides, the main antagonist is nicknamed the Intersection's Pretty Boy. The thing is, they never refer to him by a nickname or find any other name for him, like the Boy In Black, the Boy at the Crossroads, or other simpler and more ominous titles. After hearing the main characters speaking with dead seriousness about the threat posed by The Intersection's Pretty Boy dozens of times it become impossible to take the name seriously anymore.
* TearJerker: Midori [[spoiler: killing herself to end the torment brought on by the Pretty Boy's "advice"]].
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: So who is the Pretty Boy? boy at the crossroads? Are either of the stories suggested origins true, or are neither of them correct?
* {{Narm}}:In this disturbing tale The dialogue of compulsion and suicides, the main antagonist is nicknamed young characters, at least in the Intersection's Pretty Boy. The thing is, they never refer official English translation, [[TotallyRadifcal comes off as awkward in its attempts to him by a nickname or find any other name for him, like the Boy In Black, the Boy at the Crossroads, or other simpler and more ominous titles. After hearing the main characters speaking with dead seriousness about the threat posed by The Intersection's Pretty Boy dozens of times it become impossible to take the name seriously anymore.
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* TearJerker: Midori [[spoiler: killing herself to end the torment brought on by thePretty Boy's beautiful boy's "advice"]].
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: So who is the Pretty Boy? Are either of the stories true, or are neither of them correct?
* {{Narm}}: In this disturbing tale of compulsion and suicides, the main antagonist is nicknamed the Intersection's Pretty Boy. The thing is, they never refer to him by a nickname or find any other name for him, like the Boy In Black, the Boy at the Crossroads, or other simpler and more ominous titles. After hearing the main characters speaking with dead seriousness about the threat posed by The Intersection's Pretty Boy dozens of times it become impossible to take the name seriously anymore.
* TearJerker: Midori [[spoiler: killing herself to end the torment brought on by the Pretty Boy's "advice"]].
* {{Narm}}: In this disturbing tale of compulsion and suicides, the main antagonist is nicknamed the Intersection's Pretty Boy. The thing is, they never refer to him by a nickname or find any other name for him, like the Boy In Black, the Boy at the Crossroads, or other simpler and more ominous titles. After hearing the main characters speaking with dead seriousness about the threat posed by The Intersection's Pretty Boy dozens of times it become impossible to take the name seriously anymore.
* TearJerker: Midori [[spoiler: killing herself to end the torment brought on by the Pretty Boy's "advice"]].
