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* BizarroEpisode: ''Incorrect Quotes'', because the chapter contains nothing but MemeticMutation.


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* HeartwarmingInHindsight: The ''No Punctuation'' Chapter becomes this after [[WebAnimation/ZeroPunctuation the series the title is based on]] effectively ended, as it retains the spirit of Yathzee's harsh yet fair criticism.
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*** This issue resurfaces after Izuku & Ochako receive RelationshipUpgrade, and Ochako steps up to be the mother of the [=OPCs=], with her appearance spent having fun and bonding with the kids. Some say "Finally!" and enjoy the abundance of SliceOfLife moments akin to the fic's early chapters, while more cynical readers think that, based on how rare it is to see Izuku doing anything that ''doesn't'' involve Midoriya Foundation in recent chapters, Kyodon makes [=IzuOcha=] happen just so they can dump all of the responsibility and role of being the [=OPCs=]' parents to Ochako so they can freely write Izuku doing Midoriya Foundation work as a way to do both the fic's original "Raising superpowered children" premise and the new "World-changing corporation" plotline.

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*** This issue debate resurfaces after Izuku & Ochako receive RelationshipUpgrade, and Ochako moves into Midoriya Mansion and steps up to be the mother of the [=OPCs=], with her appearance spent having fun and bonding with the kids. Some say "Finally!" and enjoy the abundance of SliceOfLife moments akin to the fic's early chapters, while chapters. At the same time, more cynical readers think that, based on how rare it is to see Izuku doing anything that ''doesn't'' involve Midoriya Foundation in recent chapters, Kyodon makes [=IzuOcha=] happen just so they can dump all of the responsibility and role of being the [=OPCs=]' parents to Ochako so they can freely write Izuku doing Midoriya Foundation work as a way to do both the fic's original "Raising superpowered children" premise and the new "World-changing corporation" plotline.
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*** This issue resurfaces after Izuku & Ochako receive RelationshipUpgrade, and Ochako steps up to be the mother of the [=OPCs=], with her appearance spent having fun and bonding with the kids. Some say "Finally!" and enjoy the SliceOfLife moments, while more cynical readers think that, based on how rare it is to see Izuku doing anything that ''doesn't'' involve Midoriya Foundation in recent chapters, Kyodon makes [=IzuOcha=] happen just so they can dump all of the responsibility and role of being the [=OPCs=]' parents to Ochako so they can freely write Izuku doing Midoriya Foundation work as a way to do both the fic's original "Raising superpowered children" premise and the new "World-changing corporation" plotline.

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*** This issue resurfaces after Izuku & Ochako receive RelationshipUpgrade, and Ochako steps up to be the mother of the [=OPCs=], with her appearance spent having fun and bonding with the kids. Some say "Finally!" and enjoy the abundance of SliceOfLife moments, moments akin to the fic's early chapters, while more cynical readers think that, based on how rare it is to see Izuku doing anything that ''doesn't'' involve Midoriya Foundation in recent chapters, Kyodon makes [=IzuOcha=] happen just so they can dump all of the responsibility and role of being the [=OPCs=]' parents to Ochako so they can freely write Izuku doing Midoriya Foundation work as a way to do both the fic's original "Raising superpowered children" premise and the new "World-changing corporation" plotline.
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*** This issue resurfaces after Izuku & Ochako receive RelationshipUpgrade, and Ochako steps up to be the mother of the [=OPCs=], with her appearance is spent having fun and bonding with the kids. Some say "Finally!" and that it's a good thing since the kids already accept her as their mother, while more cynical readers think that, based on how rare it is to see Izuku doing anything that ''doesn't'' involve Midoriya Foundation in recent chapters, Kyodon makes [=IzuOcha=] happen just so they can dump all of the responsibility and role of being the [=OPCs=]' parents to Ochako so they can freely write Izuku doing Midoriya Foundation work as a way to do both the fic's original "Raising superpowered children" premise and the new "World-changing corporation" plotline.

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*** This issue resurfaces after Izuku & Ochako receive RelationshipUpgrade, and Ochako steps up to be the mother of the [=OPCs=], with her appearance is spent having fun and bonding with the kids. Some say "Finally!" and that it's a good thing since enjoy the kids already accept her as their mother, SliceOfLife moments, while more cynical readers think that, based on how rare it is to see Izuku doing anything that ''doesn't'' involve Midoriya Foundation in recent chapters, Kyodon makes [=IzuOcha=] happen just so they can dump all of the responsibility and role of being the [=OPCs=]' parents to Ochako so they can freely write Izuku doing Midoriya Foundation work as a way to do both the fic's original "Raising superpowered children" premise and the new "World-changing corporation" plotline.
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*** This issue resurfaces after Izuku & Ochako receive RelationshipUpgrade, and Ochako steps up to be the mother of the [=OPCs=], and her appearance is spent having fun and bonding with the kids. Some say "Finally!" and that it's a good thing since the kids already accept her as their mother, while more cynical readers think that, based on how rare it is to see Izuku doing anything that ''doesn't'' involve Midoriya Foundation in recent chapters, Kyodon makes [=IzuOcha=] happen just so they can dump all of the responsibility and role of being the [=OPCs=]' parents to Ochako so they can freely write Izuku doing Midoriya Foundation work as a way to do both the fic's original "Raising superpowered children" premise and the new "World-changing corporation" plotline.

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*** This issue resurfaces after Izuku & Ochako receive RelationshipUpgrade, and Ochako steps up to be the mother of the [=OPCs=], and with her appearance is spent having fun and bonding with the kids. Some say "Finally!" and that it's a good thing since the kids already accept her as their mother, while more cynical readers think that, based on how rare it is to see Izuku doing anything that ''doesn't'' involve Midoriya Foundation in recent chapters, Kyodon makes [=IzuOcha=] happen just so they can dump all of the responsibility and role of being the [=OPCs=]' parents to Ochako so they can freely write Izuku doing Midoriya Foundation work as a way to do both the fic's original "Raising superpowered children" premise and the new "World-changing corporation" plotline.
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*** This issue resurfaces after Izuku & Ochako receive RelationshipUpgrade, and Ochako steps up to be the mother of the [=OPCs=], and her appearance is spent having fun and bonding with the kids. Some say "Finally!" and that it's a good thing since the kids already accept her as their mother, while more cynical readers think that, based on how rare it is to see Izuku doing anything that ''doesn't'' involve Midoriya Foundation in recent chapters, Kyodon makes [=IzuOcha=] happen just so they can dump all of the responsibility and role of being the [=OPCs=]' parents to Ochako so they can freely write Izuku doing Midoriya Foundation work.

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*** This issue resurfaces after Izuku & Ochako receive RelationshipUpgrade, and Ochako steps up to be the mother of the [=OPCs=], and her appearance is spent having fun and bonding with the kids. Some say "Finally!" and that it's a good thing since the kids already accept her as their mother, while more cynical readers think that, based on how rare it is to see Izuku doing anything that ''doesn't'' involve Midoriya Foundation in recent chapters, Kyodon makes [=IzuOcha=] happen just so they can dump all of the responsibility and role of being the [=OPCs=]' parents to Ochako so they can freely write Izuku doing Midoriya Foundation work.work as a way to do both the fic's original "Raising superpowered children" premise and the new "World-changing corporation" plotline.
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** This issue resurfaces after Izuku & Ochako receive RelationshipUpgrade, and Ochako steps up to be the mother of the [=OPCs=], and her appearance is spent having fun and bonding with the kids. Some say "Finally!" and that it's a good thing since the kids already accept her as their mother, while more cynical readers think that, based on how rare it is to see Izuku doing anything that ''doesn't'' involve Midoriya Foundation in recent chapters, Kyodon makes [=IzuOcha=] happen just so they can dump all of the responsibility and role of being the [=OPCs=]' parents to Ochako so they can freely write Izuku doing Midoriya Foundation work.

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** *** This issue resurfaces after Izuku & Ochako receive RelationshipUpgrade, and Ochako steps up to be the mother of the [=OPCs=], and her appearance is spent having fun and bonding with the kids. Some say "Finally!" and that it's a good thing since the kids already accept her as their mother, while more cynical readers think that, based on how rare it is to see Izuku doing anything that ''doesn't'' involve Midoriya Foundation in recent chapters, Kyodon makes [=IzuOcha=] happen just so they can dump all of the responsibility and role of being the [=OPCs=]' parents to Ochako so they can freely write Izuku doing Midoriya Foundation work.
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** This issue resurfaces after Izuku & Ochako receive RelationshipUpgrade, and Ochako steps up to be the mother of the [=OPCs=], and her appearance is spent having fun and bonding with the kids. Some say "Finally!" and that it's a good thing since the kids already accept her as their mother, while more cynical readers think that, based on how rare it is to see Izuku doing anything that ''doesn't'' involve Midoriya Foundation in recent chapters, Kyodon makes [=IzuOcha=] happen just so they can dump all of the responsibility and role of being the [=OPCs=]' parents to Ochako so they can freely write Izuku doing Midoriya Foundation work.
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** Yonda, [[IntendedAudienceReaction which is intentional in Kyodon's part]]. For some, her ManipulativeBastard moments make her a PragmaticHero and the issues she tries to solve are important enough to warrant her involvement. Others see her as TheUnapologetic WellIntentionedExtremist who comes out unscathed from her schemes because her punishment is too light or because [[XanatosGambit her schemes ends up successful in a way]] and has been hoping for her plan to fail or backfire due to [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome inexperience]].

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** Yonda, [[IntendedAudienceReaction [[TropesAreTools which is intentional in Kyodon's part]]. For some, her ManipulativeBastard moments make her a PragmaticHero and the issues she tries to solve are important enough to warrant her involvement. Others see her as TheUnapologetic WellIntentionedExtremist who comes out unscathed from her schemes because her punishment is too light or because [[XanatosGambit her schemes ends up successful in a way]] and has been hoping for her plan to fail or backfire due to [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome inexperience]].
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** Sori Jaga when she first appeared, pulling OneManArmy on Yami's Grimms after Class 1-B spends 3 chapters surviving through them, all because she wants to work with Midoriya Foundation, [[PoorCommunicationKills but did not call beforehand and just trespasses the mansion's land]]. On one side, she is a professional bodyguard compared to a class of heroes in training, is a WakeUpCall to Izuku that there are villains of her caliber out there, and did become BandageMummy for a week from her injuries fighting the Grimms. On the other side, she is a very strong individual who is TooDumbToLive, and [[KarmaHoudini still got hired despite the panic she caused]].

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** Sori Jaga when she first appeared, pulling OneManArmy on Yami's Grimms after Class 1-B spends 3 chapters surviving through them, all because she wants to work with Midoriya Foundation, [[PoorCommunicationKills but did not call beforehand and just trespasses the mansion's land]]. On one side, she is a professional bodyguard compared to a class of heroes in training, is a WakeUpCall to Izuku that there are villains of her caliber out there, and did become BandageMummy for a week month from her injuries fighting the Grimms. On the other side, she is a very strong individual who is TooDumbToLive, and [[KarmaHoudini still got hired despite the panic she caused]].
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** Hinata Dogauru, Kiba's sidekick who originally appears in the FlashForward side fic before her proper appearance in ''Go For A Walk''. To some, she is a great addition to Kiba by showing her character growth through Hinata and her Quirk complements Kiba's like how Kyosei's complements Fu's. To others, her presence makes Kiba too OP with Hinata's Quirk clogging the only weakness Kiba has left from [[spoiler:her (temporary) Nomu transformation]], compared to Fu & Kyosei who need to rely on each other for a fight, Making Hinata's Quirk be more of a PowerCrutch rather than a power-up at best due to how her sword form after bonding with Kiba let Kiba recharging Blood Boost much easier, to make a girl [[spoiler:with multiple Quirks]] unnecessarily even more powerful than she already is at worst. Others argue that the issue is more of Hinata being added to the main story ''too early'', preferring that Hinata & Kiba meet each other for the first time later in their life, such as being fellow students in the U.A. or when Kiba starts making her hero agency, for example.

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** Hinata Dogauru, Kiba's sidekick who originally appears in the FlashForward side fic before her proper appearance in ''Go For A Walk''. To some, she is a great addition to Kiba by showing her character growth through Hinata and her Quirk complements Kiba's like how Kyosei's complements Fu's. To others, her presence makes Kiba too OP with Hinata's Quirk clogging the only weakness Kiba has left from [[spoiler:her (temporary) Nomu transformation]], transformation's aftermath]], compared to Fu & Kyosei who need to rely on each other for a fight, Making Hinata's Quirk be more of a PowerCrutch rather than a power-up at best due to how her sword form after bonding with Kiba let Kiba recharging Blood Boost much easier, best, to make a girl [[spoiler:with multiple Quirks]] unnecessarily even more powerful than she already is at worst. Others argue that the issue is more of Hinata being added to the main story ''too early'', preferring that Hinata & Kiba meet each other for the first time later in their life, such as being fellow students in the U.A. or when Kiba starts making her hero agency, for example.



** Ever since [[spoiler:The Sports Festival attack]], the story focuses more on Izuku gathering power, resource, and/or influence to strengthen Midoriya Foundation. To some, it is a natural story progression that the constant threat to his life and the kids makes Izuku prioritize their safety and stop the BigBadDuumvirate. To others, Izuku has gone WellIntentionedExtremist and the story diverges away from its "Izuku raises orphans" premise and [[DemotedToExtra gives the kids less story focus]] in general.

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** Ever since [[spoiler:The Sports Festival attack]], the story focuses more on Izuku gathering power, resource, resources, and/or influence to strengthen Midoriya Foundation. To some, it is a natural story progression that the constant threat to his life and the kids makes Izuku prioritize their safety and stop the BigBadDuumvirate. To others, Izuku has gone WellIntentionedExtremist and the story diverges away from its "Izuku raises orphans" premise and [[DemotedToExtra gives the kids less story focus]] in general.
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** Hinata Dogauru, Kiba's sidekick who originally appears in the FlashForward side fic before her proper appearance in ''Go For A Walk''. To some, she is a great addition to Kiba by showing her character growth through Hinata and her Quirk complements Kiba's like how Kyosei's complements Fu's. To others, her presence makes Kiba too OP with Hinata's Quirk clogging the only weakness Kiba has left from [[spoiler:her (temporarily) turned into Nomu]], compared to Fu & Kyosei who need to rely on each other for a fight, Making Hinata's Quirk be more of a PowerCrutch rather than a power-up at best, to make a girl [[spoiler:with multiple Quirks]] unnecessarily even more powerful than she already is at worst. Others argue that the issue is more of Hinata being added to the main story ''too early'', preferring that Hinata & Kiba meet each other for the first time later in their life (such as being fellow students in the U.A. or when Kiba starts making her hero agency, for example).

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** Hinata Dogauru, Kiba's sidekick who originally appears in the FlashForward side fic before her proper appearance in ''Go For A Walk''. To some, she is a great addition to Kiba by showing her character growth through Hinata and her Quirk complements Kiba's like how Kyosei's complements Fu's. To others, her presence makes Kiba too OP with Hinata's Quirk clogging the only weakness Kiba has left from [[spoiler:her (temporarily) turned into Nomu]], (temporary) Nomu transformation]], compared to Fu & Kyosei who need to rely on each other for a fight, Making Hinata's Quirk be more of a PowerCrutch rather than a power-up at best, best due to how her sword form after bonding with Kiba let Kiba recharging Blood Boost much easier, to make a girl [[spoiler:with multiple Quirks]] unnecessarily even more powerful than she already is at worst. Others argue that the issue is more of Hinata being added to the main story ''too early'', preferring that Hinata & Kiba meet each other for the first time later in their life (such life, such as being fellow students in the U.A. or when Kiba starts making her hero agency, for example).example.
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** Shadow Ruler!Izuku comes from the remains of his dream to become a Hero, despite his new responsibility as the [=OPC=] caretaker, that still lingers in his subconsciousness, and both Izuku and Ren eliminate it by pointing out that if one could only focus on their failures (unable to become a hero), they'll never be able to see what they managed to achieve and accomplish despite that (becoming a multimillionaire, becoming a beloved father figure, etc). Some readers, who believe that Izuku's definition of a "Hero" is too narrow, argue that Izuku should've instead convinced his Shadow Ruler that while he did not wear a costume and went around on constant patrols with a hero license, he did become a Hero by helping take down villains(and still is against the Meta Army) and saved lives. Other readers also argue that Shadow Ruler!Izuku could have been convinced that by giving the [=OPCs=] a new home, a loving family, and a second lease on life despite their dangerous Quirk, he becomes a Hero in the eyes of these children.
** The story skip over Maria's trip through the city and finding Sue in a dumpster. Considering that Maria is a [[FishOutOfTemporalWater normal human from pre-Quirk era]], it would've been interesting to see her react to the world that now revolves around Quirks and superheroes.

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** Shadow Ruler!Izuku comes from the remains of his dream to become a Hero, despite his new responsibility as the [=OPC=] caretaker, that still lingers in his subconsciousness, and both Izuku and Ren eliminate it by pointing out that if one could only focus on their failures (unable to become a hero), they'll never be able to see what they managed to achieve and accomplish despite that (becoming a multimillionaire, becoming a beloved father figure, etc). Some readers, who believe that Izuku's definition of a "Hero" is too narrow, argue that Izuku should've instead convinced his Shadow Ruler that while he did not wear a costume and went around on constant patrols with a hero license, he did become a Hero by helping take down villains(and still is against the Meta Army) and saved lives. Other readers also argue that Shadow Ruler!Izuku could have been convinced that by giving the [=OPCs=] a new home, a loving family, and a second lease on life despite their dangerous Quirk, he becomes had become a Hero in the eyes of these children.
** The story skip skips over Maria's trip through the city and finding Sue in a dumpster. Considering that Maria is a [[FishOutOfTemporalWater normal human from pre-Quirk era]], it would've been interesting to see her react to how much the world had changed and how a normal person reacts to a world that now revolves around Quirks and superheroes.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: Shadow Ruler!Izuku comes from the remains of his dream to become a Hero, despite his new responsibility as the [=OPC=] caretaker, that still lingers in his subconsciousness, and both Izuku and Ren eliminate it by pointing out that if one could only focus on their failures (unable to become a hero), they'll never be able to see what they managed to achieve and accomplish despite that (becoming a multimillionaire, becoming a beloved father figure, etc). Some readers, who believe that Izuku's definition of a "Hero" is too narrow, argue that Izuku should've instead convinced his Shadow Ruler that while he did not wear a costume and went around on constant patrols with a hero license, he did become a Hero by helping take down villains(and still is against the Meta Army) and saved lives. Other readers also argue that Shadow Ruler!Izuku could have been convinced that by giving the [=OPCs=] a new home, a loving family, and a second lease on life despite their dangerous Quirk, he becomes a Hero in the eyes of these children.

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Shadow Ruler!Izuku comes from the remains of his dream to become a Hero, despite his new responsibility as the [=OPC=] caretaker, that still lingers in his subconsciousness, and both Izuku and Ren eliminate it by pointing out that if one could only focus on their failures (unable to become a hero), they'll never be able to see what they managed to achieve and accomplish despite that (becoming a multimillionaire, becoming a beloved father figure, etc). Some readers, who believe that Izuku's definition of a "Hero" is too narrow, argue that Izuku should've instead convinced his Shadow Ruler that while he did not wear a costume and went around on constant patrols with a hero license, he did become a Hero by helping take down villains(and still is against the Meta Army) and saved lives. Other readers also argue that Shadow Ruler!Izuku could have been convinced that by giving the [=OPCs=] a new home, a loving family, and a second lease on life despite their dangerous Quirk, he becomes a Hero in the eyes of these children.
** The story skip over Maria's trip through the city and finding Sue in a dumpster. Considering that Maria is a [[FishOutOfTemporalWater normal human from pre-Quirk era]], it would've been interesting to see her react to the world that now revolves around Quirks and superheroes.
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* TheWoobie: Too many to count, on the account that this story is about adopting children that are either unwanted and/or unable to stop their superpower to cause harm to others.

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* TheWoobie: Too many to count, on the account that this story is about adopting children that are either unwanted and/or unable to stop their superpower to cause harm to others.
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* TheWoobie: Too many to count, on the account that this story is about adopting children that are either unwanted and/or unable to stop their superpower to cause harm to others.
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** Ever since [[spoiler:The Sports Festival attack]], the story focuses more on Izuku gathering power, resource, and/or influence to strengthen Midoriya Foundation. To some, it is a natural story progression that the constant threat to his life and the kids makes Izuku prioritizes their safety and stop the BigBadDuumvirate. To others, Izuku has gone WellIntentionedExtremist and the story diverges away from its "Izuku raises orphans" premise and [[DemotedToExtra gives the kids less story focus]] in general.
** Kiba [[spoiler:keeping the extra Quirks and boosted strength she got from partially turned into a Nomu with no recollection of what happenned]], and getting a super suit to regulate her strength instead of continuing her training to control her strength. On one hand, people are okay with it, seeing [[spoiler:the extra Quirks]] makes her no different from the other kids whose [[spoiler:Quirks are SemanticSuperpower (Shina) or KeystoneSuperpower (Ken & Nara, Le, and Sakio)]], and the suit as no different than the other kid's PowerLimiter equipment (Kei's visor, Otoko's cloak, the gear on Gin's chest to absorb the chaos energy leaking out of his body, the metal plates that covering Okui's mouths, etc.), and that moving on from trauma & tragedy is part of this fanfic's theme. On the other hand, other people believe that [[spoiler:her new Quirks]] makes Kiba unchallengeable with little to no weakness to exploit and the suit [[StaticCharacter removes her flaws and stunts her growth as a character]] by turning her fear of losing control of herself due to her Quirk's BerserkMode and her journey to learn to control her strength into an AbortedArc, and the fact that she has no memories of this event is seen as a cop-out for the "moving on from trauma & tragedy" aspect of this fanfic.
* HarsherInHindsight: In Eri's Choice Arc, Izuku swears to Eri that he won't let D.O.C uses her blood to harm people. Fast forward to after ''War of Omens'', Izuku reveals that he created Reset Bomb, based on her Quirk, as a backup plan against All for One, which he ended up using.

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** Ever since [[spoiler:The Sports Festival attack]], the story focuses more on Izuku gathering power, resource, and/or influence to strengthen Midoriya Foundation. To some, it is a natural story progression that the constant threat to his life and the kids makes Izuku prioritizes prioritize their safety and stop the BigBadDuumvirate. To others, Izuku has gone WellIntentionedExtremist and the story diverges away from its "Izuku raises orphans" premise and [[DemotedToExtra gives the kids less story focus]] in general.
** Kiba [[spoiler:keeping the extra Quirks and boosted strength she got from partially turned into a Nomu Nomu, with no recollection of what happenned]], happened, instead of having it removed]], and getting a super suit to regulate her strength instead of continuing her training to control her strength. On one hand, people are okay with it, seeing [[spoiler:the extra Quirks]] makes her no different from the other kids whose [[spoiler:Quirks are SemanticSuperpower (Shina) or KeystoneSuperpower (Ken & Nara, Le, and Sakio)]], and the suit as no different than the other kid's PowerLimiter equipment (Kei's visor, Otoko's cloak, the gear on Gin's chest to absorb the chaos energy leaking out of his body, the metal plates that covering Okui's mouths, etc.), and that moving on from trauma & tragedy is part of this fanfic's theme. On the other hand, other people believe that [[spoiler:her new Quirks]] makes Kiba unchallengeable with little to no weakness to exploit and the suit [[StaticCharacter removes her flaws and stunts her growth as a character]] by turning her fear of losing control of herself due to her Quirk's BerserkMode and her journey to learn to control her strength into an AbortedArc, and the fact that she has no memories of this event is seen as a cop-out for the "moving on from trauma & tragedy" aspect of this fanfic.
* HarsherInHindsight: In Eri's Choice Arc, Izuku swears to Eri that he won't let D.O.C uses use her blood to harm people. Fast forward to after ''War of Omens'', Izuku reveals that he created Reset Bomb, based on her Quirk, as a backup plan against All for One, which he ended up using.
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** Sori Jaga when she first appeared, pulling OneManArmy on Yami's Grimms after Class 1-B spends 3 chapters surviving through them, all because she wants to work with Midoriya Foundation, [[PoorCommunicationKills but did not call beforehand and just trespasses the mansion's land]]. On one side, she is a professional bodyguard compared to a class of heroes in training, is a WakeUpCall to Izuku that there are villains of her caliber out there, and did become BandageMummy for a week from her injuries fighting the Grimms. On the other side, she is an overpowered individual who is TooDumbToLive, and [[KarmaHoudini still got hired despite the panic she caused]].

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** Sori Jaga when she first appeared, pulling OneManArmy on Yami's Grimms after Class 1-B spends 3 chapters surviving through them, all because she wants to work with Midoriya Foundation, [[PoorCommunicationKills but did not call beforehand and just trespasses the mansion's land]]. On one side, she is a professional bodyguard compared to a class of heroes in training, is a WakeUpCall to Izuku that there are villains of her caliber out there, and did become BandageMummy for a week from her injuries fighting the Grimms. On the other side, she is an overpowered a very strong individual who is TooDumbToLive, and [[KarmaHoudini still got hired despite the panic she caused]].
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* AuthorAppeal: Downplayed. Sai, Chole, Vera, Maria, Sue, Gehalt... there seem to be a few blonde females among Midoriya Foundation's staff.
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* AuthorAppeal: Downplayed. Sai, Chole, Vera, Maria, Sue... there seem to be a few blonde females among Midoriya Foundation's staff.

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* AuthorAppeal: Downplayed. Sai, Chole, Vera, Maria, Sue...Sue, Gehalt... there seem to be a few blonde females among Midoriya Foundation's staff.
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** Kiba [[spoiler:keeping the extra Quirks and boosted strength she got from partially turned into a Nomu with no recollection of what happenned]], and getting a super suit to regulate her strength instead of continuing her training to control her strength. On one hand, people are okay with it, seeing [[spoiler:the extra Quirks]] makes her no different from the other kids whose [[spoiler:Quirks are SemanticSuperpower (Shina) or KeystoneSuperpower (Ken & Nara, Le, and Sakio)]], and the suit as no different than the other kid's PowerLimiter equipment (Kei's visor, Otoko's cloak, the gear on Gin's chest to absorb the chaos energy leaking out of his body, the metal plates that covering Okui's mouths, etc.), and that moving on from trauma & tragedy is part of this fanfic's theme. On the other hand, other people believe that [[spoiler:her new Quirks]] [[MarySue makes Kiba unchallengeable with little to no weakness to exploit]] and the suit [[StaticCharacter removes her flaws and stunts her growth as a character]] by turning her fear of losing control of herself due to her Quirk's BerserkMode and her journey to learn to control her strength into an AbortedArc, and the fact that she has no memories of this event is seen as a cop-out for the "moving on from trauma & tragedy" aspect of this fanfic.

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** Kiba [[spoiler:keeping the extra Quirks and boosted strength she got from partially turned into a Nomu with no recollection of what happenned]], and getting a super suit to regulate her strength instead of continuing her training to control her strength. On one hand, people are okay with it, seeing [[spoiler:the extra Quirks]] makes her no different from the other kids whose [[spoiler:Quirks are SemanticSuperpower (Shina) or KeystoneSuperpower (Ken & Nara, Le, and Sakio)]], and the suit as no different than the other kid's PowerLimiter equipment (Kei's visor, Otoko's cloak, the gear on Gin's chest to absorb the chaos energy leaking out of his body, the metal plates that covering Okui's mouths, etc.), and that moving on from trauma & tragedy is part of this fanfic's theme. On the other hand, other people believe that [[spoiler:her new Quirks]] [[MarySue makes Kiba unchallengeable with little to no weakness to exploit]] exploit and the suit [[StaticCharacter removes her flaws and stunts her growth as a character]] by turning her fear of losing control of herself due to her Quirk's BerserkMode and her journey to learn to control her strength into an AbortedArc, and the fact that she has no memories of this event is seen as a cop-out for the "moving on from trauma & tragedy" aspect of this fanfic.
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** Hinata Dogauru, Kiba's sidekick who originally appears in the FlashForward side fic before her proper appearance in ''Go For A Walk''. To some, she is a great addition to Kiba by showing her character growth through Hinata and her Quirk complements Kiba's like how Kyosei's complements Fu's. To others, her presence makes Kiba so OP that she might as well JumpingTheShark with Hinata's Quirk clogging the only weakness Kiba has left from [[spoiler:her (temporarily) turned into Nomu]], compared to Fu & Kyosei who need to rely on each other for a fight, Making Hinata's Quirk be more of a PowerCrutch rather than a power-up at best, to make a girl [[spoiler:with multiple Quirks]] unnecessarily even more powerful than she already is at worst. Others argue that the issue is more of Hinata being added to the main story ''too early'', preferring that Hinata & Kiba meet each other for the first time later in their life (such as being fellow students in the U.A. or when Kiba starts making her hero agency, for example).

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** Hinata Dogauru, Kiba's sidekick who originally appears in the FlashForward side fic before her proper appearance in ''Go For A Walk''. To some, she is a great addition to Kiba by showing her character growth through Hinata and her Quirk complements Kiba's like how Kyosei's complements Fu's. To others, her presence makes Kiba so too OP that she might as well JumpingTheShark with Hinata's Quirk clogging the only weakness Kiba has left from [[spoiler:her (temporarily) turned into Nomu]], compared to Fu & Kyosei who need to rely on each other for a fight, Making Hinata's Quirk be more of a PowerCrutch rather than a power-up at best, to make a girl [[spoiler:with multiple Quirks]] unnecessarily even more powerful than she already is at worst. Others argue that the issue is more of Hinata being added to the main story ''too early'', preferring that Hinata & Kiba meet each other for the first time later in their life (such as being fellow students in the U.A. or when Kiba starts making her hero agency, for example).
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** Hinata Dogauru, Kiba's sidekick who originally appears in the TwentyMinutesIntoTheFuture side fic before her proper appearance in ''Go For A Walk''. To some, she is a great addition to Kiba by showing her character growth through Hinata and her Quirk complements Kiba's like how Kyosei's complements Fu's. To others, her presence makes Kiba so OP that she might as well JumpingTheShark with Hinata's Quirk clogging the only weakness Kiba has left from [[spoiler:her (temporarily) turned into Nomu]], compared to Fu & Kyosei who need to rely on each other for a fight, Making Hinata's Quirk be more of a PowerCrutch rather than a power-up at best, to make a girl [[spoiler:with multiple Quirks]] unnecessarily even more powerful than she already is at worst. Others argue that the issue is more of Hinata being added to the main story ''too early'', preferring that Hinata & Kiba meet each other for the first time later in their life (such as being fellow students in the U.A. or when Kiba starts making her hero agency, for example).

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** Hinata Dogauru, Kiba's sidekick who originally appears in the TwentyMinutesIntoTheFuture FlashForward side fic before her proper appearance in ''Go For A Walk''. To some, she is a great addition to Kiba by showing her character growth through Hinata and her Quirk complements Kiba's like how Kyosei's complements Fu's. To others, her presence makes Kiba so OP that she might as well JumpingTheShark with Hinata's Quirk clogging the only weakness Kiba has left from [[spoiler:her (temporarily) turned into Nomu]], compared to Fu & Kyosei who need to rely on each other for a fight, Making Hinata's Quirk be more of a PowerCrutch rather than a power-up at best, to make a girl [[spoiler:with multiple Quirks]] unnecessarily even more powerful than she already is at worst. Others argue that the issue is more of Hinata being added to the main story ''too early'', preferring that Hinata & Kiba meet each other for the first time later in their life (such as being fellow students in the U.A. or when Kiba starts making her hero agency, for example).

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