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* HolyShitQuotient: In a fic so long, it's inevitable but some example are Chapter 27 ([[spoiler:Voldemort is defeat and the war ends]]) and chapter 62 ([[spoiler:Harry deduces Hermione and Sirius are part of the CaperCrew]])
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* HolyShitQuotient: ShockingMoments: In a fic so long, it's inevitable but some example examples are Chapter 27 ([[spoiler:Voldemort is defeat and the war ends]]) and chapter 62 ([[spoiler:Harry deduces Hermione and Sirius are part of the CaperCrew]])
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* BrokenBase: A persistent one is the [[LongestPrologueEver lenght]] of the story. As of this writting, Voldemort has been finally defeated and Hermione is starting to end her thief training. It took [[{{Doorstopper}} 250 thousand words]] for this happen. Some readers believe it would be best if the author did a TimeSkip
** The portrayal of Sirius Black, who in canon is shown to have HairTriggerTemper and ChronicHeroSyndrome, but here is a promiscious sleaze, who makes inoportune comments, makes punny jokes and is a master of TheDarkArts (although the last one is probably accurate, considering his family)
** The portrayal of Sirius Black, who in canon is shown to have HairTriggerTemper and ChronicHeroSyndrome, but here is a promiscious sleaze, who makes inoportune comments, makes punny jokes and is a master of TheDarkArts (although the last one is probably accurate, considering his family)
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* BrokenBase: A persistent one is the [[LongestPrologueEver lenght]] length]] of the story. As of this writting, writing, Voldemort has been finally defeated and Hermione is starting to end her thief training. It took [[{{Doorstopper}} 250 thousand words]] for this happen. Some readers believe it would be best if the author did a TimeSkip
** The portrayal of Sirius Black, who in canon is shown to have HairTriggerTemper and ChronicHeroSyndrome, but here is apromiscious promiscuous sleaze, who makes inoportune inopportune comments, makes punny jokes and is a master of TheDarkArts (although the last one is probably accurate, considering his family)
** The portrayal of Sirius Black, who in canon is shown to have HairTriggerTemper and ChronicHeroSyndrome, but here is a
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** The portrayal of Sirius Black, who in canon is shown to have HairTriggerTemper and ChronicHeroSyndrome, but here is a promiscious sleaze, who makes inoportune comments, makes punny jokes and is a master of TheDarkArts
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** The portrayal of Sirius Black, who in canon is shown to have HairTriggerTemper and ChronicHeroSyndrome, but here is a promiscious sleaze, who makes inoportune comments, makes punny jokes and is a master of TheDarkArtsTheDarkArts (although the last one is probably accurate, considering his family)
** Also the portrayal of Harry as a LawfulStupid ByTheBookCop when in canon Harry was a RebelLeader who always had a RebelliousSpirit and was willing any rules when necessary. Some readers hope that now that Harry [[spoiler:knows that Hermione and Sirius are the [[EmbarassingNickname Night Nargles]] team]] he will rebel against the corrupt Ministry
* HolyShitQuotient: In a fic so long, it's inevitable but some example are Chapter 27 ([[spoiler:Voldemort is defeat and the war ends]]) and chapter 62 ([[spoiler:Harry deduces Hermione and Sirius are part of the CaperCrew]])
** Also the portrayal of Harry as a LawfulStupid ByTheBookCop when in canon Harry was a RebelLeader who always had a RebelliousSpirit and was willing any rules when necessary. Some readers hope that now that Harry [[spoiler:knows that Hermione and Sirius are the [[EmbarassingNickname Night Nargles]] team]] he will rebel against the corrupt Ministry
* HolyShitQuotient: In a fic so long, it's inevitable but some example are Chapter 27 ([[spoiler:Voldemort is defeat and the war ends]]) and chapter 62 ([[spoiler:Harry deduces Hermione and Sirius are part of the CaperCrew]])
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* BrokenBase: A persistent one is the [[LongestPrologueEver lenght]] of the story. As of this writting, Voldemort has been finally defeated and Hermione is starting to end her thief training. It took [[Doorstopper 250k words]] for this happen. Some readers believe it would be best if the author did a TimeSkip
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* BrokenBase: A persistent one is the [[LongestPrologueEver lenght]] of the story. As of this writting, Voldemort has been finally defeated and Hermione is starting to end her thief training. It took [[Doorstopper 250k [[{{Doorstopper}} 250 thousand words]] for this happen. Some readers believe it would be best if the author did a TimeSkip
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* BrokenBase: A persistent one is the [[LongestPrologueEver lenght]] of the story. As of this writting, Voldemort has been finally defeated and Hermione is starting to end her thief training. It took [[Doorstopper 250k words]] for this happen. Some readers believe it would be best if the author did a TimeSkip
** The portrayal of Sirius Black, who in canon is shown to have HairTriggerTemper and ChronicHeroSyndrome, but here is a promiscious sleaze, who makes inoportune comments, makes punny jokes and is a master of TheDarkArts
** The portrayal of Sirius Black, who in canon is shown to have HairTriggerTemper and ChronicHeroSyndrome, but here is a promiscious sleaze, who makes inoportune comments, makes punny jokes and is a master of TheDarkArts
