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* HilariousInHindsight: [[spoiler: Triumph's suicide]] is reminiscent of this ''Webcomic/SaturdayMorningBreakfastCereal'' [[https://www.smbc-comics.com/comic/2008-07-10 strip]].
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* HilariousInHindsight: [[spoiler: Triumph's suicide]] is reminiscent of this ''Webcomic/SaturdayMorningBreakfastCereal'' [[https://www.smbc-comics.com/comic/2008-07-10 strip]].this]] ''Webcomic/SaturdayMorningBreakfastCereal'' strip.
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* HilariousInHindsight: [[spoiler: Triumph's suicide]] is reminiscent of this ''Webcomic/SaturdayMorningBreakfastCereal'' [[https://www.smbc-comics.com/comic/2008-07-10 strip]].
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: [[spoiler: [[StartOfDarkness A hero becoming a villain]][[WellIntentionedExtremist for the sake of the world]]]] is an interesting idea. Unfortunately, it is only introduced at the very end of the story.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: [[spoiler: [[StartOfDarkness A hero becoming a villain]][[WellIntentionedExtremist villain]] [[WellIntentionedExtremist for the sake of the world]]]] is an interesting idea. Unfortunately, it is only introduced at the very end of the story.
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* AssPull: There is no foreshadowing of [[spoiler: Camo's existence. Not helping is how Camo [[PlotTailoredToTheParty conveniently has the exact power that Sabre needs]].]]
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* AssPull: There is no foreshadowing of [[spoiler: Camo's [[VoluntaryShapeshifting Camo]]'s existence. Not helping is how Camo [[PlotTailoredToTheParty conveniently has the exact power that Sabre needs]].]]
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!! [[ComicBook/{{Halcyon}} The Comic Book]]
* AssPull: There is no foreshadowing of [[spoiler: Camo's existence. Not helping is how Camo [[PlotTailoredToTheParty conveniently has the exact power that Sabre needs]].]]
* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: [[spoiler: [[StartOfDarkness A hero becoming a villain]][[WellIntentionedExtremist for the sake of the world]]]] is an interesting idea. Unfortunately, it is only introduced at the very end of the story.
* AssPull: There is no foreshadowing of [[spoiler: Camo's existence. Not helping is how Camo [[PlotTailoredToTheParty conveniently has the exact power that Sabre needs]].]]
* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: [[spoiler: [[StartOfDarkness A hero becoming a villain]][[WellIntentionedExtremist for the sake of the world]]]] is an interesting idea. Unfortunately, it is only introduced at the very end of the story.
