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* ProtagonistCenteredMorality: Matt is [[spoiler:derided in-universe as a terrible friend at best and a rapist at worst for talking the comic's deuterogamist Lilian into bed when they were both younger. This ignores the fact that Roomie, Lilian's eventual girlfriend, has a history of getting women drunk and trying to have sex with them (potentially committing date rape), including towards Lilian herself. Roomie's inappropriate actions are noted in a few strips, but she's quickly forgiven and her actions are considered petty indiscretions, whereas Matt has to undergo therapy from guilt and made into a pariah by the rest of the cast.]]
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* ProtagonistCenteredMorality: Matt is [[spoiler:derided in-universe as a terrible friend at best and a rapist at worst for talking the comic's deuterogamist deuteragonist Lilian into bed when they were both younger. This ignores the fact that Roomie, Lilian's eventual girlfriend, has a history of getting women drunk and trying to have sex with them (potentially committing date rape), including towards Lilian herself. Roomie's inappropriate actions are noted in a few strips, but she's quickly forgiven and her actions are considered petty indiscretions, whereas Matt has to undergo therapy from guilt and made into a pariah by the rest of the cast.]]
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* ProtagonistCenteredMorality: Matt is [[spoiler:derided in-universe as a terrible friend at best and a rapist at worst for talking the comic's deuterogamist Lilian into bed when they were both younger. This ignores the fact that Roomie, Lilian's eventual girlfriend, has a history of getting women drunk and trying to have sex with them (potentially committing date rape), including towards Lilian herself. Roomie's inappropriate actions are noted in a few strips, but she's quickly forgiven and her actions are considered petty indiscretions, whereas Matt has to undergo therapy from guilt and made into a pariah by the rest of the cast.]]
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* BrokenBase: While normally sporting one of the more mellow comment sections around, Chloe occasionally posts a page that sparks some fairly heated exchanges.
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** [[https://www.gogetaroomie.com/comic/refugees-welcome "No one is illegal"]] sparked one of the more vicious comment section arguments the comic had ever seen, with readers at each other's throats over Chloe's pro-refugee stance.
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** [[https://www.gogetaroomie.com/comic/not-fine "Not Fine"]] reveals even Roomie's couch surfing had a darker side. That being [[spoiler:she was forced to because she blew all her money on her drinking problem.]]
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rewrite to expand this some
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** If the sweat lodge was a fracture, Lillian [[spoiler:finally confronting Matt over his actions in their past]] completely shattered it. The comment section going at each others throats over who was in the wrong.
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** If the sweat lodge was a fracture, the conversation between Roomie and Matt [[spoiler:that ended with Lillian [[spoiler:finally finally confronting Matt over his actions in their past]] completely shattered it. The comment comments section going at each others throats saw several bitter arguments over who was in the wrong.[[spoiler:whether or not Matt should be considered a rapist, and how much (if at all) his insecurity and shouldering peer pressure and expectations that drove him to pressure Lillian into sex mitigate what happened]].
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* BrokenBase: Chloe's depiction of Roomie and Lillian participating in a new age sweat lodge fractured a normally mellow comment section. One side accused her of ignorant cultural misappropriation, one side defended her respectful depiction of it, and a third just tried to avoid getting involved with the arguing.
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** Chloe's depiction of Roomie and Lillian participating in a new age sweat lodge fractured a normally mellow comment section. One side accused her of ignorant cultural misappropriation, one side defended her respectful depiction of it, and a third just tried to avoid getting involved with thearguing.arguing.
** If the sweat lodge was a fracture, Lillian [[spoiler:finally confronting Matt over his actions in their past]] completely shattered it. The comment section going at each others throats over who was in the wrong.
** Chloe's depiction of Roomie and Lillian participating in a new age sweat lodge fractured a normally mellow comment section. One side accused her of ignorant cultural misappropriation, one side defended her respectful depiction of it, and a third just tried to avoid getting involved with the
** If the sweat lodge was a fracture, Lillian [[spoiler:finally confronting Matt over his actions in their past]] completely shattered it. The comment section going at each others throats over who was in the wrong.
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* InternetBackdraft: Fans got into passionate discussions to full-blown arguments over whether [[spoiler:Matt raped Lillian when they dated. [[http://www.gogetaroomie.com/comic/i-guess-not In the strip]], it's revealed that Matt and Lillian dated but Matt, not wanting to fall behind his peers, coerced and emotionally manipulated Lillian into having sex for their first time with extremely vague consent from Lillian. Some fans backed him up saying that Lillian seems to miss him when her family moves and he was a stupid teenager, but others say that he emotionally manipulated her into sex, which is rape and also may be a reason as to why she comes off as asexual in the present.]]
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* {{Wangst}}: Richard's reaction facial hair ruining his self-proclaimed [[TheTwink Twink image]]. Going on a full on personal crisis whine-fest over a few chin hairs.
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* {{Wangst}}: Richard's reaction to facial hair ruining his self-proclaimed [[TheTwink Twink image]]. Going on a full on personal crisis whine-fest over a few chin hairs.
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* {{Wangst}}: Richard's reaction facial hair ruining his self-proclaimed [[TheTwink Twink image]]. Going on a full on personal crisis whine-fest over a few chin hairs.
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* AwesomeArt: The second "Knight In Furs" story by artist [[http://jack-of-box.deviantart.com/ Jack-Kaiser (Formerly Jack-Of-Box)]].
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* AwesomeArt: SugarWiki/AwesomeArt: The second "Knight In Furs" story by artist [[http://jack-of-box.deviantart.com/ Jack-Kaiser (Formerly Jack-Of-Box)]].
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potholing the "nice guy" thing to an appropriate trope
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** Matt. Some either see him as the OnlySaneMan or as a "nice guy" who doesn't handle rejection well [[spoiler:and may have raped Lillian]].
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** Matt. Some either see him as the OnlySaneMan or as [[EntitledToHaveYou a "nice guy" who doesn't handle rejection well well]] [[spoiler:and may have raped Lillian]].
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* TearJerker: [[http://www.gogetaroomie.com/comic/supposed-to "It hurt."]]
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* BrokenBase: Chloe's depiction of Roomie and Lillian participating in a new age sweat lodge fractured a normally mellow comment section. With one section accusing her of ignorant cultural misappropriation, one side defending her respectful depiction of it, and a third just trying to avoid getting involved with the arguing.
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* BrokenBase: Chloe's depiction of Roomie and Lillian participating in a new age sweat lodge fractured a normally mellow comment section. With one section accusing One side accused her of ignorant cultural misappropriation, one side defending defended her respectful depiction of it, and a third just trying tried to avoid getting involved with the arguing.
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* HarsherInHindsight: Roomie's already rather melancholy comment in [[http://gogetaroomie.com/index.php?id=651 'They stay']] is given painful context by the revelation a couple of chapters later that [[spoiler:she suffered the death of her best friend at the age of nine]].
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** Roomie's already rather melancholy comment in [[http://gogetaroomie.com/index.php?id=651 'They stay']] is given painful context by the revelation a couple of chapters later that [[spoiler:she suffered the death of her best friend at the age ofnine]].nine]].
** [[http://www.gogetaroomie.com/comic/i-never "I Never"]] makes Roomie's entire personality of drinking and sex this.
** Roomie's already rather melancholy comment in [[http://gogetaroomie.com/index.php?id=651 'They stay']] is given painful context by the revelation a couple of chapters later that [[spoiler:she suffered the death of her best friend at the age of
** [[http://www.gogetaroomie.com/comic/i-never "I Never"]] makes Roomie's entire personality of drinking and sex this.
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* BrokenBase: Chloe's depiction of Roomie and Lillian participating in a new age sweat lodge fractured a normally mellow comment section. With one section accusing her of ignorant cultural misappropriation, one side defending her respectful depiction of it, and a third just trying to avoid getting involved with the arguing.
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** The twins' sister, Kris, rapidly developed into one. Some readers find her amusing and cool. Others find her intrusive and rather rude.
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** The twins' sister, Kris, rapidly developed into one. Some readers find her amusing and cool. Others find her intrusive and rather rude. The second camp seems to have won, as she's all but vanished from the comic.
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** Matt. Some either see him as the OnlySaneMan or as a "nice guy" who doesn't handle rejection well[[spoiler:and may have raped Lillian]].
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** Matt. Some either see him as the OnlySaneMan or as a "nice guy" who doesn't handle rejection well[[spoiler:and well [[spoiler:and may have raped Lillian]].
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Mary Sue is a flamebait trope, and cannot have examples
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* MarySue: Roomie starts out as a straight example. She's an unrepentant moocher who seems to have no respect for boundaries, or even comprehension of them. Everyone she meets seems to think she's perfect, with the possible exception of the DefrostingIceQueen, whose gradual warming up to Roomie is presented as positive CharacterDevelopment on her part. She's also practically [[TheCasanova irresistible]], an able martial artist...you get the picture. However, she gradually transitions into a {{deconstruction}}, as it's revealed that she's deeply unsettled that she's everyone's ManicPixieDreamGirl but stays in the same place she always is herself. She notices [[FlatCharacter how little character development happened to her]] when she returns and realizes that people moved on just fine without her around. Later on, [[http://www.gogetaroomie.com/index.php?id=728 she even apologizes to LT if she comes off as one]]...in a typically Roomie-fied way.
