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* EsotericHappyEnding: Yes, [[spoiler: Jeanette bringing herself down to normal and erasing all memory of ever having her powers]] is supposed to be a happy ending.
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* EsotericHappyEnding: Yes, [[spoiler: Jeanette bringing herself down to normal and erasing all memory of ever having her powers]] is supposed to be a happy ending.ending.
* SoOkayItsAverage: The biggest criticism of the story, even more so than the main character's excessive angsting.
* SoOkayItsAverage: The biggest criticism of the story, even more so than the main character's excessive angsting.
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: In the long flashback, the scene with the {{Drill Sergeant Nasty}}-turned-gym teacher. Not even the author knows what he was thinking when he wrote it.
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: In the long flashback, the scene with the {{Drill Sergeant Nasty}}-turned-gym teacher. Not even the author knows what he was thinking when he wrote it.it.
* EsotericHappyEnding: Yes, [[spoiler: Jeanette bringing herself down to normal and erasing all memory of ever having her powers]] is supposed to be a happy ending.
* EsotericHappyEnding: Yes, [[spoiler: Jeanette bringing herself down to normal and erasing all memory of ever having her powers]] is supposed to be a happy ending.
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: In the long flashback, the scene with the {{Drill Sergeant Nasty))-turned-gym teacher. Not even the author knows what he was thinking when he wrote it.
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: In the long flashback, the scene with the {{Drill Sergeant Nasty))-turned-gym Nasty}}-turned-gym teacher. Not even the author knows what he was thinking when he wrote it.
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: In the long flashback, the scene with the {{Drill Sergeant Nasty))-turned-gym teacher. Not even the author knows what he was thinking when he wrote it.
