- Big-Lipped Alligator Moment: In the long flashback, the scene with the Drill Sergeant Nasty-turned-gym teacher. Not even the author knows what he was thinking when he wrote it.
- Esoteric Happy Ending: Yes, Jeanette bringing herself down to normal and erasing all memory of ever having her powers is supposed to be a happy ending.
- So Okay, It's Average: The biggest criticism of the story, even more so than the main character's excessive angsting.
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