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* CompleteMonsterL: In ''The Library Policeman'', the creature currently known as [[EvilLibrarians Ardelia Lortz]] is a parasitic monster that [[EmotionEater feeds on the fear and pain]] of [[WouldHurtAChild children]]. Taking a host and enslaving those with it, Lortz hunts down children to inflict horrific nightmares on them and drain them of their fear and pain, eventually killing them and leaving those around her broken. Returning for the story's hero Sam Peebles, Lortz even [[MindRape manipulates him with painful visions of the man who raped him as a child]] to make him her newest host.
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* CompleteMonsterL: CompleteMonster: In ''The Library Policeman'', the creature currently known as [[EvilLibrarians Ardelia Lortz]] is a parasitic monster that [[EmotionEater feeds on the fear and pain]] of [[WouldHurtAChild children]]. Taking a host and enslaving those with it, Lortz hunts down children to inflict horrific nightmares on them and drain them of their fear and pain, eventually killing them and leaving those around her broken. Returning for the story's hero Sam Peebles, Lortz even [[MindRape manipulates him with painful visions of the man who raped him as a child]] to make him her newest host.
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* CompleteMonster (''The Library Policeman''): The creature currently known as [[EvilLibrarians Ardelia Lortz]] is a parasitic monster that [[EmotionEater feeds on the fear and pain]] of [[WouldHurtAChild children]]. Taking a host and enslaving those with it, Lortz hunts down children to inflict horrific nightmares on them and drain them of their fear and pain, eventually killing them and leaving those around her broken. Returning for the story's hero Sam Peebles, Lortz even [[MindRape manipulates him with painful visions of the man who raped him as a child]] to make him her newest host.
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* CompleteMonster (''The CompleteMonsterL: In ''The Library Policeman''): The Policeman'', the creature currently known as [[EvilLibrarians Ardelia Lortz]] is a parasitic monster that [[EmotionEater feeds on the fear and pain]] of [[WouldHurtAChild children]]. Taking a host and enslaving those with it, Lortz hunts down children to inflict horrific nightmares on them and drain them of their fear and pain, eventually killing them and leaving those around her broken. Returning for the story's hero Sam Peebles, Lortz even [[MindRape manipulates him with painful visions of the man who raped him as a child]] to make him her newest host.
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* CompleteMonster (''The Library Policeman''): The creature currently known as [[EvilLibrarians Ardelia Lortz]] is a parasitic monster that [[EmotionEater feeds on the fear and pain]] of [[WouldHurtAChild children]]. Taking a host and enslaving those with it, Lortz hunts down children to inflict horrific nightmares on them and drain them of their fear and pain, eventually killing them and leaving those around her broken. Returning for the story's hero Sam Peebles, Lortz even [[MindRape manipulates him with painful visions of the man who raped him as a child]] to make him her newest host.
