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* TearJerker: The entirety of the final chapter. ''It will crush your soul to dust, then turn that dust into beautiful sculptures.''
** Make that the whole of the [[TitleDrop "Eternal"]] two-parter before the epilogue, ''then'' the Epilogue itself. It's a really long, but ''oh so beautfiul'' series of {{Tear Jerker}}s. Or, hell, make that ''the entire thing'' when taken as a whole. The whole fic is just...''beautiful,'' especiallly when you've taken the time to see just how much Twilight, Celestia and Luna had to go through, to reach the conclusion at the end.
** Make that the whole of the [[TitleDrop "Eternal"]] two-parter before the epilogue, ''then'' the Epilogue itself. It's a really long, but ''oh so beautfiul'' series of {{Tear Jerker}}s. Or, hell, make that ''the entire thing'' when taken as a whole. The whole fic is just...''beautiful,'' especiallly when you've taken the time to see just how much Twilight, Celestia and Luna had to go through, to reach the conclusion at the end.
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* TearJerker: TearJerker:
** The entirety of the final chapter. ''It will crush your soul to dust, then turn that dust into beautiful sculptures.''
** Make that the whole of the [[TitleDrop "Eternal"]] two-parter before the epilogue, ''then'' the Epilogue itself. It's a really long, but ''oh so beautfiul'' series of {{Tear Jerker}}s. Or, hell, make that ''the entire thing'' when taken as a whole. The whole fic is just...''beautiful,'' especiallly when you've taken the time to see just how much Twilight, Celestia and Luna had to go through, to reach the conclusion at theend.end.
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** The entirety of the final chapter. ''It will crush your soul to dust, then turn that dust into beautiful sculptures.''
** Make that the whole of the [[TitleDrop "Eternal"]] two-parter before the epilogue, ''then'' the Epilogue itself. It's a really long, but ''oh so beautfiul'' series of {{Tear Jerker}}s. Or, hell, make that ''the entire thing'' when taken as a whole. The whole fic is just...''beautiful,'' especiallly when you've taken the time to see just how much Twilight, Celestia and Luna had to go through, to reach the conclusion at the
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** Make that the whole of the [[TitleDrop "Eternal"]] two-parter before the epilogue, ''then'' [[UpToEleven the Epilogue]] itself. It's a really long, but ''oh so beautfiul'' series of {{Tear Jerker}}s. Or, hell, make that ''the entire thing'' when taken as a whole. The whole fic is just...''beautiful,'' especiallly when you've taken the time to see just how much Twilight, Celestia and Luna had to go through, to reach the conclusion at the end.
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** Make that the whole of the [[TitleDrop "Eternal"]] two-parter before the epilogue, ''then'' [[UpToEleven the Epilogue]] Epilogue itself. It's a really long, but ''oh so beautfiul'' series of {{Tear Jerker}}s. Or, hell, make that ''the entire thing'' when taken as a whole. The whole fic is just...''beautiful,'' especiallly when you've taken the time to see just how much Twilight, Celestia and Luna had to go through, to reach the conclusion at the end.
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** Make that the whole of the [[TitleDrop "Eternal"]] two-parter before the epilogue, ''then'' [[UpToEleven the Epilogue]] itself. It's a really long, but ''oh so beautfiul'' series of {{Tear Jerker}}s. Or, hell, make that ''the entire thing'' when taken as a whole. The whole fic is just...''beautiful,'' especiallly when you've taken the time to see just how much Twilight, Celestia and Luna had to go through, to reach the conclusion at the end.
* TheVerse: Endmaster eventually tied most of his stories into the same continuity with the ''Suzy's Strange Saga'' story. While its setting takes place in the current days rather than Eternal's {{Dark Fantasy}} world, one of its endings reveal [[spoiler: Suzy and Jack are the Eternal's parents, after being stranded in the past by Jack's gray building (a structure that defies space, time and reality). After Jack and their older children were killed by a group of barbarians when Suzy was pregnant, she became too depressed to take care of her newborn son and gave him to the Empire's care).]]
* TheVerse: Endmaster eventually tied most of his stories into the same continuity with the ''Suzy's Strange Saga'' story. While its setting takes place in the current days rather than Eternal's {{Dark Fantasy}} world, one of its endings reveal [[spoiler: Suzy and Jack are the Eternal's parents, after being stranded in the past by Jack's gray building (a structure that defies space, time and reality). After Jack and their older children were killed by a group of barbarians when Suzy was pregnant, she became too depressed to take care of her newborn son and gave him to the Empire's care).]]
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** Make that the whole of the [[TitleDrop "Eternal"]] two-parter before the epilogue, ''then'' [[UpToEleven the Epilogue]] itself. It's a really long, but ''oh so beautfiul'' series of {{Tear Jerker}}s. Or, hell, make that ''the entire thing'' when taken as a whole. The whole fic is just...''beautiful,'' especiallly when you've taken the time to see just how much Twilight, Celestia and Luna had to go through, to reach the conclusion at the end.
* TheVerse: Endmaster eventually tied most of his stories into the same continuity with the ''Suzy's Strange Saga'' story. While its setting takes place in the current days rather than Eternal's {{Dark Fantasy}} world, one of its endings reveal [[spoiler: Suzy and Jack are the Eternal's parents, after being stranded in the past by Jack's gray building (a structure that defies space, time and reality). After Jack and their older children were killed by a group of barbarians when Suzy was pregnant, she became too depressed to take care of her newborn son and gave him to the Empire's care).]]end.
* TheVerse: Endmaster eventually tied most of his stories into the same continuity with the ''Suzy's Strange Saga'' story. While its setting takes place in the current days rather than Eternal's {{Dark Fantasy}} world, one of its endings reveal [[spoiler: Suzy and Jack are the Eternal's parents, after being stranded in the past by Jack's gray building (a structure that defies space, time and reality). After Jack and their older children were killed by a group of barbarians when Suzy was pregnant, she became too depressed to take care of her newborn son and gave him to the Empire's care).]]
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* TheVerse: Endmaster eventually tied most of his stories into the same continuity with the ''Suzy's Strange Saga'' story. While its setting takes place in the current days rather than Eternal's [[DarkFantasy]] world, one of its endings reveal [[spoiler: Suzy and Jack are the Eternal's parents, after being stranded in the past by Jack's gray building (a structure that defies space, time and reality). After Jack and their older children were killed by a group of barbarians when Suzy was pregnant, she became too depressed to take care of her newborn son and gave him to the Empire's care).]]
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* TheVerse: Endmaster eventually tied most of his stories into the same continuity with the ''Suzy's Strange Saga'' story. While its setting takes place in the current days rather than Eternal's [[DarkFantasy]] {{Dark Fantasy}} world, one of its endings reveal [[spoiler: Suzy and Jack are the Eternal's parents, after being stranded in the past by Jack's gray building (a structure that defies space, time and reality). After Jack and their older children were killed by a group of barbarians when Suzy was pregnant, she became too depressed to take care of her newborn son and gave him to the Empire's care).]]
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** Make that the whole of the [[TitleDrop "Eternal"]] two-parter before the epilogue, ''then'' [[UpToEleven the Epilogue]] itself. It's a really long, but ''oh so beautfiul'' series of {{Tear Jerker}}s. Or, hell, make that ''the entire thing'' when taken as a whole. The whole fic is just...''beautiful,'' especiallly when you've taken the time to see just how much Twilight, Celestia and Luna had to go through, to reach the conclusion at the end.
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** Make that the whole of the [[TitleDrop "Eternal"]] two-parter before the epilogue, ''then'' [[UpToEleven the Epilogue]] itself. It's a really long, but ''oh so beautfiul'' series of {{Tear Jerker}}s. Or, hell, make that ''the entire thing'' when taken as a whole. The whole fic is just...''beautiful,'' especiallly when you've taken the time to see just how much Twilight, Celestia and Luna had to go through, to reach the conclusion at the end.end.
* TheVerse: Endmaster eventually tied most of his stories into the same continuity with the ''Suzy's Strange Saga'' story. While its setting takes place in the current days rather than Eternal's [[DarkFantasy]] world, one of its endings reveal [[spoiler: Suzy and Jack are the Eternal's parents, after being stranded in the past by Jack's gray building (a structure that defies space, time and reality). After Jack and their older children were killed by a group of barbarians when Suzy was pregnant, she became too depressed to take care of her newborn son and gave him to the Empire's care).]]
* TheVerse: Endmaster eventually tied most of his stories into the same continuity with the ''Suzy's Strange Saga'' story. While its setting takes place in the current days rather than Eternal's [[DarkFantasy]] world, one of its endings reveal [[spoiler: Suzy and Jack are the Eternal's parents, after being stranded in the past by Jack's gray building (a structure that defies space, time and reality). After Jack and their older children were killed by a group of barbarians when Suzy was pregnant, she became too depressed to take care of her newborn son and gave him to the Empire's care).]]
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* ItGetsBetter: The first couple chapters plod and meander through weddings and arguments, and it takes a while to even get to the main plot. But when the story gets there, you suddenly realize why this fanfic is so well liked.
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* SlowPacedBeginning: The first couple chapters plod and meander through weddings and arguments, and it takes a while to even get to the main plot. But when the story gets there, you suddenly realize why this fanfic is so well liked.
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* ItGetsBetter: The first couple chapters plod and meander through weddings and arguments, and it takes a while to even get to the main plot. But when the story gets there, you suddenly realize why this fanfic is so well liked.
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** Make that the whole of the [[TitleDrop "Eternal"]] two-parter before the epilogue, ''then'' [[UpToEleven the Epilogue]] itself. It's a really long, but ''oh so beautfiul'' series of {{Tear Jerker}}s. Or, hell, make that ''the entire thing'' when taken as a whole. The whole fic is just...''beautiful.''''beautiful,'' especiallly when you've taken the time to see just how much Twilight, Celestia and Luna had to go through, to reach the conclusion at the end.
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* TearJerker: The entirety of the final chapter. ''It will crush your soul to dust, then turn that dust into beautiful sculptures.''
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* TearJerker: The entirety of the final chapter. ''It will crush your soul to dust, then turn that dust into beautiful sculptures.''
** Make that the whole of the [[TitleDrop "Eternal"]] two-parter before the epilogue, ''then'' [[UpToEleven the Epilogue]] itself. It's a really long, but ''oh so beautfiul'' series of {{Tear Jerker}}s. Or, hell, make that ''the entire thing'' when taken as a whole. The whole fic is just...''beautiful.''
** Make that the whole of the [[TitleDrop "Eternal"]] two-parter before the epilogue, ''then'' [[UpToEleven the Epilogue]] itself. It's a really long, but ''oh so beautfiul'' series of {{Tear Jerker}}s. Or, hell, make that ''the entire thing'' when taken as a whole. The whole fic is just...''beautiful.''
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* MoralEventHorizon: In-universe, Celestia believes she crossed this when she [[spoiler:chained The Sun and forced Her to bend to her will in order to avoid setting at an extremely inconvenient time, then kept Her bound for over a thousand years]].
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* MoralEventHorizon: In-universe, Celestia believes she crossed this when she [[spoiler:chained The Sun and forced Her to bend to her will in order to avoid setting at an extremely inconvenient time, then kept Her bound for over a thousand years]].years]].
* TearJerker: The entirety of the final chapter. ''It will crush your soul to dust, then turn that dust into beautiful sculptures.''
* TearJerker: The entirety of the final chapter. ''It will crush your soul to dust, then turn that dust into beautiful sculptures.''
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* MoralEventHorizon: In-universe, Celestia believes she crossed this when she [[spoiler:chained The Sun and forced Her to bend to her will in order to avoid setting at an extremely inconvenient time, then kept Her bound for over a thousand years]].