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* CompleteMonster: The protagonist's unnamed [[LoveInterestTraitor girlfriend]] desires to [[AxesAtSchool massacre her fellow students]] for her sadistic pleasure. [[TheVamp Gaining his love to manipulate him]], the girlfriend intends for him to help her kill everyone in their school. Depending on the ending, she can have him [[FrameUp framed for the murders]] or [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness kill him herself if he refuses]], going on to perpetuate the massacre herself.
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* CompleteMonster: The protagonist's unnamed [[LoveInterestTraitor girlfriend]] desires to [[AxesAtSchool massacre her fellow students]] for her sadistic pleasure. [[TheVamp Gaining his love to manipulate him]], the girlfriend intends for him to help her kill everyone in their school. Depending on the ending, she can have him [[FrameUp framed for the murders]] or [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness kill him herself if he refuses]], going on to perpetuate perpetrate the massacre herself.
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* SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome: The [[GoldenEnding Awake]] Ending.
* SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped: In the end, some lovers can't be trusted with your life.
* SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped: In the end, some lovers can't be trusted with your life.
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* SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped: In the end, some lovers can't be trusted with your life.
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* MomentOfAwesome: The [[GoldenEnding Awake]] Ending.
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* MomentOfAwesome: SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome: The [[GoldenEnding Awake]] Ending.
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* AwesomeMoments: The [[GoldenEnding Awake]] Ending.
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* MomentOfAwesome: The [[GoldenEnding Awake]] Ending.
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* AwesomeMoments: The [[GoldenEnding Awake]] Ending.
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: The [[GoldenEnding Awake]] Ending.
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* CompleteMonster: The protagonist's unnamed [[LoveInterestTraitor girlfriend]] desires to [[AxesAtSchool massacre her fellow students]] for her sadistic pleasure. [[TheVamp Gaining his love to manipulate him]], the girlfriend intends for him to help her kill everyone in their school. Depending on the ending, she can have him [[FrameUp framed for the murders]] or [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness kill him herself if he refuses]], going on to perpetrate the massacre herself.
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* CompleteMonster: The protagonist's unnamed [[LoveInterestTraitor girlfriend]] desires to [[AxesAtSchool massacre her fellow students]] for her sadistic pleasure. [[TheVamp Gaining his love to manipulate him]], the girlfriend intends for him to help her kill everyone in their school. Depending on the ending, she can have him [[FrameUp framed for the murders]] or [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness kill him herself if he refuses]], going on to perpetrate perpetuate the massacre herself.herself.
* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: The [[GoldenEnding Awake]] Ending.
* SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped: In the end, some lovers can't be trusted with your life.
* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: The [[GoldenEnding Awake]] Ending.
* SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped: In the end, some lovers can't be trusted with your life.
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* CompleteMonster: The protagonist's unnamed [[LoveInterestTraitor girlfriend]] desires to [[AxesAtSchool massacre her fellow students]] for her sadistic pleasure. [[TheVamp Gaining his love to manipulate him]], the girlfriend intends for him to help her kill everyone in their school. Depending on the ending, she can have him [[FrameUp framed for the murders]] or [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness kill him herself if he refuses]], going on to perpetrate the massacre herself.