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* RonTheDeathEater: Laurence is not an excessively honorable, patriotic, and incorruptibly good officer in His Majesty's Navy/Aviator Corps, but a ruthless and terrifying pirate driven by despair from the loss of his dragon and all that duty to king and country has done for him. Rather than this narrative choice being the result of a dislike of Laurence, this fic aims more to show just what could happen if a man with all the strength of conviction, leaderly charisma, and military experience like William Laurence went bad.
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* RonTheDeathEater: Laurence is not an excessively honorable, patriotic, and incorruptibly good officer in His Majesty's Navy/Aviator Corps, but a ruthless and terrifying pirate driven by despair from the loss of his dragon and all that duty to king and country has done for him. Rather than this narrative choice being the result of a dislike of Laurence, this fic aims more to show just what could happen if a man like William Laurence, with all the his strength of conviction, leaderly charisma, and military experience like William Laurence experience, went bad.
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* RonTheDeathEater: Laurence is not an excessively honorable, patriotic, and incorruptibly good officer in His Majesty's Navy/Aviator Corps, but a ruthless and terrifying pirate driven by despair from the loss of his dragon and all that duty to king and country has done for him.
him. Rather than this narrative choice being the result of a dislike of Laurence, this fic aims more to show just what could happen if a man with all the strength of conviction, leaderly charisma, and military experience like William Laurence went bad.
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* RonTheDeathEater: Laurence is not an excessively honorable, patriotic, and incorruptibly good officer in His Majesty's Navy/Aviator Corps, but a ruthless and terrifying pirate driven by despair from the loss of his dragon and all that duty to king and country has done for him.
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