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Misuse; it's not set in a Crapsack World and the leads are sympathetic and likeable. Moved to a trope that fits better. Also commented out a ZCE.
* AngstAversion: The story piles up so much trauma, woobieness and weepy melodrama on Hinako, Daisuke and the reader, and uses a complicated theme like [[RapeAsDrama sexual abuse]] so ''liberally'' as a plot device (i.e, Hinako was not only sexually abused by her stepdad in her backstory, but she's almost raped ''again'' in story for next to no reason other than [[RapeAndRevenge motivating Daisuke into beating her would-be rapist to almost death]]), that it can become a chore to read.
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* NightmareFuel: For anyone who plans to have children.
* TooBleakStoppedCaring: The story piles up so much trauma, woobieness and weepy melodrama on Hinako, Daisuke and the reader, and uses a complicated theme like [[RapeAsDrama sexual abuse]] so ''liberally'' as a plot device (i.e, Hinako was not only sexually abused by her stepdad in her backstory, but she's almost raped ''again'' in story for next to no reason other than [[RapeAndRevenge motivating Daisuke into beating her would-be rapist to almost death]]), that it can become a chore to read.
* TooBleakStoppedCaring: The story piles up so much trauma, woobieness and weepy melodrama on Hinako, Daisuke and the reader, and uses a complicated theme like [[RapeAsDrama sexual abuse]] so ''liberally'' as a plot device (i.e, Hinako was not only sexually abused by her stepdad in her backstory, but she's almost raped ''again'' in story for next to no reason other than [[RapeAndRevenge motivating Daisuke into beating her would-be rapist to almost death]]), that it can become a chore to read.
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* TooBleakStoppedCaring: The story piles up so much trauma, woobieness and weepy melodrama on Hinako, Daisuke and the reader, and uses a complicated theme like [[RapeAsDrama sexual abuse]] so ''liberally'' as a plot device (i.e, Hinako was not only sexually abused by her stepdad in her backstory, but she's almost raped ''again'' in story for next to no reason other than [[RapeAndRevenge motivating Daisuke into beating her would-be rapist to almost death]]), that it can become a chore to read.
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* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: The story piles up so much trauma, woobieness and weepy melodrama on Hinako, Daisuke and the reader, and uses a complicated theme like [[RapeAsDrama sexual abuse]] so ''liberally'' as a plot device (i.e, Hinako was not only sexually abused by her stepdad in her backstory, but she's almost raped ''again'' in story for next to no reason other than [[RapeAndRevenge motivating Daisuke into beating her would-be rapist to almost death]]), that it can become a chore to read.
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* NightmareFuel: For anyone who plans to have children.
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* NightmareFuel: For anyone who plans to have children.children.
* TooBleakStoppedCaring: The story piles up so much trauma, woobieness and weepy melodrama on Hinako, Daisuke and the reader, and uses a complicated theme like [[RapeAsDrama sexual abuse]] so ''liberally'' as a plot device (i.e, Hinako was not only sexually abused by her stepdad in her backstory, but she's almost raped ''again'' in story for next to no reason other than [[RapeAndRevenge motivating Daisuke into beating her would-be rapist to almost death]]), that it can become a chore to read.
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* TooBleakStoppedCaring: The story piles up so much trauma, woobieness and weepy melodrama on Hinako, Daisuke and the reader, and uses a complicated theme like [[RapeAsDrama sexual abuse]] so ''liberally'' as a plot device (i.e, Hinako was not only sexually abused by her stepdad in her backstory, but she's almost raped ''again'' in story for next to no reason other than [[RapeAndRevenge motivating Daisuke into beating her would-be rapist to almost death]]), that it can become a chore to read.
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* NightmareFuel: For anyone that plans to have children.
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* NightmareFuel: For anyone that who plans to have children.
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* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: The story piles up so much trauma, woobieness and weepy melodrama on Hinako, Daisuke and the reader, and uses a complicated theme like [[RapeAsDrama sexual abuse]] so ''liberally'' as a plot device (i.e, Hinako was not only sexually abused by her stepdad in her backstory, but she's almost raped ''again'' in story for next to no reason other than [[RapeAndRevenge motivating Daisuke into beating her would-be rapist to almost death]]), that it can be becomes a chore to read.
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* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: The story piles up so much trauma, woobieness and weepy melodrama on Hinako, Daisuke and the reader, and uses a complicated theme like [[RapeAsDrama sexual abuse]] so ''liberally'' as a plot device (i.e, Hinako was not only sexually abused by her stepdad in her backstory, but she's almost raped ''again'' in story for next to no reason other than [[RapeAndRevenge motivating Daisuke into beating her would-be rapist to almost death]]), that it can be becomes become a chore to read.
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* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: The story piles up so much trauma, woobieness and weepy melodrama on Hinako, Daisuke and the reader, and uses a complicated theme like [[RapeAsDrama sexual abuse]] so ''liberally'' as a plot device (i.e, Hinako was not only sexually abused by her stepdad in her backstory, but she's almost raped ''again'' in story for next to no reason other than [[RapeAndRevenge motivating Daisuke into beating her would-be rapist to almost death]]), that it can be becomes the chore to read.
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* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: The story piles up so much trauma, woobieness and weepy melodrama on Hinako, Daisuke and the reader, and uses a complicated theme like [[RapeAsDrama sexual abuse]] so ''liberally'' as a plot device (i.e, Hinako was not only sexually abused by her stepdad in her backstory, but she's almost raped ''again'' in story for next to no reason other than [[RapeAndRevenge motivating Daisuke into beating her would-be rapist to almost death]]), that it can be becomes the a chore to read.
