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'''Elsa:''' They she doesn't dare or dream.\\
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'''Elsa:''' They say she doesn't dare or dream.\\
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*** The different relationship the parents have with their children in this draft also shows when a young Anna addresses the king as [[ParentalTitleCharacterization "Father", than "Papa" ]]the way a similarily-aged Elsa does in the final version, despite Elsa being the more proper one at that point. This fits the time period (the 1840s, possibly 1830s depending on the time of the scene) and their regal background.
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*** The different relationship the parents have with their children in this draft also shows when a young Anna addresses the king as [[ParentalTitleCharacterization "Father", than "Papa" ]]the way a similarily-aged similarly-aged Elsa does in the final version, despite Elsa being the more proper one at that point. This fits the time period (the 1840s, possibly 1830s depending on the time of the scene) and their regal background.
