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** The sisters Philia and Phobia are [[SuperMarioBros two overall & cap wearing plumber siblings, one red and one green.]] There's also one to ''SuperMarioSunshine'' when Connie asks José if he's going to use his pack to fly around collecting blue coins.
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** The sisters Philia and Phobia are [[SuperMarioBros two overall & cap wearing plumber siblings, one red and one green.]] There's also one to ''SuperMarioSunshine'' ''VideoGame/SuperMarioSunshine'' when Connie asks José if he's going to use his pack to fly around collecting blue coins.
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* BadAss: Heavy Maintenance Worker 01, who somehow managed to build and pilot a mech capable of going toe to toe with Tubs for extended periods of time.
** Tubs himself, who easily shrugged off a suplex from the aforementioned robot. He also survived receiving multiple blows from [[TinyHeadedBehemoth Endia]] and is responsible for most of the casualties in the interlude.
** Tubs himself, who easily shrugged off a suplex from the aforementioned robot. He also survived receiving multiple blows from [[TinyHeadedBehemoth Endia]] and is responsible for most of the casualties in the interlude.
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** Tubs himself, who easily shrugged off a suplex from the aforementioned robot.
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** Tubs himself, who easily shrugged off a suplex from the aforementioned robot. He also survived receiving multiple blows from [[TinyHeadedBehemoth Endia]] and is responsible for most of the casualties in the interlude.
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* AllThereInTheManual: Information not revealed in the comic is posted on the [[http://shakks.tumblr.com/tagged/lore/chrono author's]] [[http://shakks.tumblr.com/tagged/world+building+june/chrono blog]].
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It can be read [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=43 here]], and the original forum threads are [[http://www.mspaforums.com/showthread.php?28137 here]] and [[http://www.mspaforums.com/showthread.php?39003-Waterworks here]].
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It can be read [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=43 here]], and the current forum thread is [[http://eagle-time.com/showthread.php?tid=1413 here]] since the original forum threads are [[http://www.mspaforums.com/showthread.php?28137 here]] and long]] [[http://www.mspaforums.com/showthread.php?39003-Waterworks here]].
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** Charlie's pumpkin is a reference to the RunningGag from ''WebComic/MSPaintAdventures''.
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** [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=43&p=885 This panel]] is a reference to ''WebComic/{{Prequel}}''
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* ChandlersLaw: The plot stalls... suddenly, [[spoiler:[[http://files.myfrogbag.com/enyovk/animation14.swf forklift mecha crashing through the door! Followed by Tubs.]]]].
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* ChandlersLaw: The plot stalls... suddenly, [[spoiler:[[http://files.myfrogbag.com/enyovk/animation14.[[spoiler:[[https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/57523586/mspa/Waterworks/Adventure%20Images/animation14.swf forklift mecha crashing through the door! Followed by Tubs.]]]].
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* [[spoiler:BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind]]: [[spoiler:Connie and her Id wage war against an alien hivemind threatening to consume her.]]
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* KnockoutGas: Juliet's specialty.
** Tubs is unfazed after being suplexed by the forklift mecha and keeps going after a direct hit from Endian.
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* SuperStrength: Tubs seems to border on this, at least.
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* SuperStrength: Tubs seems to border on this, at least. Wielding a stone pillar like a normal weapon and lifting the entire [[VisualPun Rifle Tower]] into his bag is no normal feat.
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* MadeOfIron: How Connie manages to survive through everything she does boggles the mind.
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* PunnyName: Some of the green people from the interlude, based on wordplay from their ThemeNaming.
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** Johnny from the interlude looks like ''WesternAnimation/JohnnyBravo'' when you consider his position in the team's ThemeNaming.
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** Johnny from the interlude looks like ''WesternAnimation/JohnnyBravo'' especially when you consider his position in the team's ThemeNaming.
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* TinyHeadedBehemoth: Endian from the interlude. [[spoiler:Actually two different people]].
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** Johnny from the interlude looks like ''WesternAnimation/JohnnyBravo'' when you consider his position in the team's ThemeNaming.
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** Slick, Mist, Typhoon, Surge, Syphon and Mariner are water-related.[[note]]Laze does not follow the naming scheme even though he is a subject like Slick.[[/note]]
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** Slick, Mist, Typhoon, Surge, Syphon and Mariner are water-related.[[note]]Laze does not follow water-related.
** The green antagonists in thenaming scheme even though he is a subject like Slick.[[/note]]interlude are based on the NATO phonetic alphabet.
** The green antagonists in the
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Correcting an error, "Signature Weapon" should totally be a trope to be honest.
* IconicItem: The subjects wearing special suits each has their own unique harpoon. Slick's is a pair of blades attached to a [[EverythingsBetterWithSpinning spinning pivot]] while Surge's is a GrapplingGun.
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* SignatureWeapon: The subjects wearing special suits each has their own unique harpoon. Slick's is a pair of blades attached to a [[EverythingsBetterWithSpinning spinning pivot]] while Surge's is a GrapplingGun.
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* SignatureWeapon: The subjects wearing special suits each has their own unique harpoon. Slick's is a pair of blades attached to a [[EverythingsBetterWithSpinning spinning pivot]] while Surge's is a GrapplingGun.
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** Slick, Mist, Typhoon, Surge, Syphon and Mariner are water-related.[[note]]Laze does not follow the naming scheme even though he is a subject like Slick.[[/note]]
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* WordOfGod: The author's [[http://shakks.tumblr.com tumblr account]] contains information not revealed in the comic.
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* GrievousHarmWithABodyl: Tubbs throwing severed heads at Juliet, right as she readies grenades.
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* GrievousHarmWithABodyl: GrievousHarmWithABody: Tubbs throwing severed heads at Juliet, right as she readies grenades.
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* GrievousHarmWithABodyl: Tubbs throwing severed heads at Juliet, right as she readies grenades.
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* VillainProtagonist: The flashback intermission has the blue boys as protagonists, where they fight a Felt-like gang of green people with powers.
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* LiterallyShatteredLives: In the flashback, José freezes Pvt. Chambers and Caddie with a snowglobe, and shatters the former with the butt of his gun.
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It can be read [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43 here]], and the original forum threads are [[http://www.mspaforums.com/showthread.php?28137 here]] and [[http://www.mspaforums.com/showthread.php?39003-Waterworks here]].
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It can be read [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43 [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=43 here]], and the original forum threads are [[http://www.mspaforums.com/showthread.php?28137 here]] and [[http://www.mspaforums.com/showthread.php?39003-Waterworks here]].
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* BattleDiscretionShot: [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43&p=413 This page,]] complete with [[ScreenShake the entire image shaking]].
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* BattleDiscretionShot: [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43&p=413 [[http://mspfanventures.com/?adv=43&id=413 This page,]] complete with [[ScreenShake the entire image shaking]].
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* BucketHelmet: [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43&p=423 Kitchen pot.]]
* ByWallThatIsHoley: [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43&p=568 Slick's repair module.]]
* ByWallThatIsHoley: [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43&p=568 Slick's repair module.]]
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* BucketHelmet: [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43&p=423 [[http://mspfanventures.com/?adv=43&id=423 Kitchen pot.]]
* ByWallThatIsHoley:[[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43&p=568 [[http://mspfanventures.com/?adv=43&id=568 Slick's repair module.]]
* ByWallThatIsHoley:
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* FlatWhat: [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43&p=523 Wat.]] (In reaction to [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43&p=520 this]].)
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* FlatWhat: [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43&p=523 [[http://mspfanventures.com/?adv=43&id=523 Wat.]] (In reaction to [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43&p=520 [[http://mspfanventures.com/?adv=43&id=520 this]].)
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* GeniusBruiser: [[spoiler:[[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43&p=562 Typhoon]]]], apparently.
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* ImprovisedWeapon: [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43&p=411 A laser pointer]].
* InformedDeformity: [[spoiler:Mist. Supposedly incredibly ugly, but, as Connie lampshades, [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43&p=560 by media standards she's hot.]] However, it is apparently mostly because of the deformity affecting her wrist/ankle blades.]]
* InformedDeformity: [[spoiler:Mist. Supposedly incredibly ugly, but, as Connie lampshades, [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43&p=560 by media standards she's hot.]] However, it is apparently mostly because of the deformity affecting her wrist/ankle blades.]]
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* ImprovisedWeapon: [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43&p=411 [[http://mspfanventures.com/?adv=43&id=411 A laser pointer]].
* InformedDeformity: [[spoiler:Mist. Supposedly incredibly ugly, but, as Connie lampshades,[[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43&p=560 [[http://mspfanventures.com/?adv=43&id=560 by media standards she's hot.]] However, it is apparently mostly because of the deformity affecting her wrist/ankle blades.]]
* InformedDeformity: [[spoiler:Mist. Supposedly incredibly ugly, but, as Connie lampshades,
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* SpinAttack: Flush's Cyclone Cistern ability. [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43&p=242 It gets truly spectacular]].
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* SpinAttack: Flush's Cyclone Cistern ability. [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43&p=242 [[http://mspfanventures.com/?adv=43&id=242 It gets truly spectacular]].
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* SweatDrop: [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43&p=368 Here.]]
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* WhatsAHenway: [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43&p=527 The "updog" variety]] (warning: spoiler link.)
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* WingdingEyes: [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43&p=299 "he can't be dead! his eyes aren't X's!"]]
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* WingdingEyes: [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43&p=299 [[http://mspfanventures.com/?adv=43&id=299 "he can't be dead! his eyes aren't X's!"]]
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*YeahShot: "We're gonna steal the [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=43&p=602 water cycle!]]
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* WhamEpisode: Derelix and the revelation that [[spoiler:the black goo is some sort of organism]].
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* WhamEpisode: Derelix and the revelation that [[spoiler:the black goo is some sort of organism]]. There's also the easter egg during the dance sequence where it turns out that [[spoiler:Connie has been infected by the goo SO BADLY that her skin's turned completely black]].
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* SplitScreenPhoneCall: Between Urist and the supervisor.
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* SplitScreenPhoneCall: Between [[http://mspfanventures.com/?adv=43&id=518 Radio conversation between Urist and the supervisor.]]
* WeaksauceWeakness: Tubs's is [[spoiler:the smell of cheap fish]].
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: Tubs' WeaksauceWeakness is [[spoiler:the smell of cheap fish]].
** Connie is pretty germ-phobic, specifically in relation to toilets, and will freak out at the drop of a hat about them.
** Connie is pretty germ-phobic, specifically in relation to toilets, and will freak out at the drop of a hat about them.
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: Tubs' WeaksauceWeakness is [[spoiler:the smell of cheap fish]].
**Connie is pretty germ-phobic, specifically in relation to toilets, and will freak out at the drop of a hat about them.
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* SaveTheVillain: Connie, towards [[spoiler:José]].
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* SaveTheVillain: Connie, towards [[spoiler:José]].José, when she has a [[http://mspfanventures.com/?adv=43&id=87 change of heart]] after almost killing him in a fit of fury.
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* TalkingWeapon: The axe. Despite it's ominous red glow, it just wants to cut down trees.
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* TalkingWeapon: The axe. Despite it's its ominous red glow, it just wants to cut down trees.
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* XRayVision: One of the abilities offered by it. Though it requires the suit to [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=43&p=336 release x-rays]] which are harmful to living beings in the vicinity.
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* XRayVision: One of the abilities offered by it.Slick's suit. Though it requires the suit to [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=43&p=336 release x-rays]] which are harmful to living beings in the vicinity.
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** XRayVision: One of the abilities offered by it. Though it requires the suit to release x-rays which are harmful to living beings in the vicinity.
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** And she actually [[http://mspfanventures.com/?adv=43&id=160 takes a shower with her axe handy.]]
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* BrickJoke: The worker who "Spins on his head like a [[{{Pokemon}} Hitmontop]]."
* BridalCarry: [[spoiler:Slick carries Connie this way when they're heading to the elevator.]]
* BridalCarry: [[spoiler:Slick carries Connie this way when they're heading to the elevator.]]
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* BrickJoke: The worker who "Spins on his head like a [[{{Pokemon}} Hitmontop]]."
" [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=43&p=74 Here]], re-appears [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=43&p=124 here]].
* BridalCarry: [[spoiler:Slick [[http://mspfanventures.com/?adv=43&id=506 carries Connie thisway way]] when they're heading to the elevator.]]
* BridalCarry: [[spoiler:Slick [[http://mspfanventures.com/?adv=43&id=506 carries Connie this
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* KnifeNut: Flush.
** Subverted in that despite liking knives, he has 'no clue'' what to do with one in a fight.
** Subverted in that despite liking knives, he has 'no clue'' what to do with one in a fight.
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* KnifeNut: Flush.
**Flush. Subverted in that despite liking knives, he has 'no clue'' ''[[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=43&p=234 no clue]]'' what to do with one in a fight.
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes:
**WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: Tubs' WeaksauceWeakness is [[spoiler:the smell of cheap fish]].
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* CapeSwish: [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=43&p=223 Mwa ha ha.]]
* CapeSwish: [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=43&p=223 Mwa ha ha.]]
